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Chapter 45 - Deal Gone Wrong

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 17:29:54 +0000 UTC

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Amazon Shopper

um, is alaric not at all concerned that the reckless pos was about to kill him? Man gotta get some compensation from the church, his dad gotta bring hell down on em

Patrick Camp

“However, what impressed Kael wasn’t Alaric’s strength but his ability to remain composed under pressure and seize an opportunity to escape.” Does this read like it’s out of place for the writing style to anyone else? Everything is pretty much from Aleric’s point of view where we know what Aleric knows. Then we have this paragraph, where you might expect to see Kael looking impressed and Aleric inferring the reason. Instead, we’re straight up told what’s happening in Kael’s head. Anyways, I’m enjoying the story, it’s definitely in my patreon binge rotation.

Melkyal

Seems like the church guy was covering up that dealer

jdog

Dang seems like incompetence or a possible cover up?


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