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Chapter 44 - Exploring Azure Ruin Arch

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 11:25:07 +0000 UTC

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Ink's Muse

Some of them can fell like "you show us what he thought, then you tell us what he thought." And they may just be better without that second bit. Sometimes they do add nuance in the "how" space but it has to be significant or else it feels a bit like condescending to the reader to explain something so simple.

Ink's Muse

Little note, personal opinion, be careful with sections like this: "Hmm…I wonder if these places are actually located in this world. Alaric wondered if these regions were accessible to cultivators without the aid of the system."


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