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My Little Ventrue Pt.8 Ch.12 (Ch. 130)
🕑 Added 2022-01-06 21:24:34 +0000 UTCFinally, shit starts to happen. I definitely meandered too much with the middle of Part 8, but now we're on track.
A bit of the next chapter went onto the end of this chapter, so it's a bit longer while the next chapter will be a bit shorter.
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Novus Animus
Yes, he's still officially an Invictus. The Lancea et Sanctum aren't really 'alive' yet. Takes a long time to get a covenant going.
Memoryleak
Is Damien considered a right hand of the Invictus at this point with Maria as the leader of the Lancea?
Novus Animus
With 6 PoVs, I can't avoid cliffhangers like that. I've tried and it makes for some weird pacing. My next series will only have 2 PoVs, so it should be far less an issue.
Memoryleak
Ohh, so the split personality may not be Susanna but it could be her “relative” that she killed under the tree, interesting. Of course I could be way off🤷♂️. I agree this chapter is closer to what I expected during an early/mid part. One thing I noticed is that recently you have been clifhangering a lot of mid chapter perspectives. I don’t mind it at the end of a chapter but in this one in particular you left two, Jack and Nat.
