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Chapter 69. Almonds

🕑 Added 2025-03-27 19:43:46 +0000 UTC

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Jamie Idle

Great chapter

Ace_the_owl

Glad to see you back Jacob, hope you're in good health!

Ace_the_owl

Thank you for reading!

Ace_the_owl

Looking back, I should've established this system earlier so it didn't feel like I created it just to give Adom a win. That's on me for sure. But I do think the system itself makes sense for an underworld setting. In the real world, criminal organizations develop codes to avoid mutual destruction - like how the yakuza have elaborate ceremonies for conflict resolution or how certain gangs have specific ways to settle territory disputes without going to full-scale war. I think it'll make more sense in chapter 70 where I explained it in more detail

Ace_the_owl

Ah. The inventory is Adom's unique ability, a system given ability and everyone else has access to dimensional bags, mage or not. Adom's inventory is limited though, and i had an excel file with details of the progression, as I was supposed to make it level up as well. I am still editing the past chapters to clean the mess I made with the system, but basically, Adom has two system given abilities, [Identify] and [Inventory]. I'll make an update about that very soon.

Eli Loeb

Loved the first half of the chapter everything fit together nicely and reasonable but.... The limits on this contest feel very contrived and not underworldy. Basically the whole thing feels unjustified in universe. Makes adom a little Mary Sueish the way he just has the ability needed for an obscure nonsensical contest, determing important things.

TheOne320

I have a question. You retconned the system inventory to a mage ability. But the reason Adom first bought dimensional bags was because he did not want to show the ability to pull things from thin air because of his system inventory. After the retcon this does not make sense. If the inventory is a standard mage ability, then why bother using dimensional bags as a mage?

Jacob Oswalt

I love valients reaction to adom's new super strength. Valiant is fully aware of the insane shit that the MC let's up, vampires, princes, dungeons and all. I really want to know what conspiracies valiant comes up with for what adom has been up to for his new found strength.

John Koor

I think Ace said he went back and rewrote parts of the chapters about the meet up with the parents after they were released here on Patreon. The mention in this chapter, or the last, about revealing the story about his rebirth is refering to that change. I never went back to reread those parts since specific chapters were not mentioned and I hate having to reread something just to see if there were changes.

Lee Powell

My thoughts exactly, also why weren't we there when axon told his parents what happened?

John Koor

Ok, I have an issue with this one. 'After finalizing their plans, Adom and Cass walked back to the strider waiting patiently outside the cave entrance.' WTF?! 45 Billion gold, and he's using a stranger to transport them directly to the cave entrance?! I kept reading, thinking it would end up being revealed that the strider rider was one of the cult of Adom members, maybe even the farmer guy, but nope. Ended up being a complete stranger. Then they proceeded to spend the ride back just openly talking about money and plans in front of the stranger! For realism's sake, please have Adom and Cass return to the cave to discover that they've been robbed blind. That's the only thing that would make sense after this.

Scion

I want him to be the new owner of his spy Network... Mwhahah another business.

Steven wood

You do you, I can't speak for everyone else but I am here for the story. Rather have a good one vs a rushed one.

Anotherb Account

Funnn

Daniel

Nice

Michael

Great chapter! Thank you! Really loving this part of the story - the building up of power and the man Behind the scenes. Cause who is going to take the 13 year old seriously?

Michael

Haha! Take your time and do it right!

Ace_the_owl

Suffice to say, I thoroughly jinxed myself by telling last chapter's schedule. I'll just drop the next few chapters with no prior announcement lol.


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