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Almost done with the little plot holes and other fixes.
🕑 Added 2025-03-10 19:14:11 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
Hope you're all doing well. I'm happy to share that I'm almost done with the edits on the final chapters, and will be updating most of them in 2 days with the first updates coming tomorrow.
Some of the plot holes will be corrected, notably Valiant's size inconsistency - one of you pointed it out, and I wanted to answer, but lost track of the comment. I will also be revising the way the final battle went. So, if you haven't read that yet, you still can, but I'd recommend waiting for the update for a better experience.
After I'm done, I'll wait a day or two before making an announcement on the changes I made. They won't be major, and you won't really need to read it all over, because I'll give you a resume of what changed plot-wise - things that I realized would make more sense and would be more interesting to explore. (It's not gonna change what happened, just add some depth and make more sense)
I intend to upload the new chapter of Re:Birth today as soon as I get home, too. The other story, The Gamble King, will also have a new chapter probably today or tomorrow. Since that's in the early stages, I am quite inspired and it's easier to write it.
To be honest, for those who read it, you noticed Max mentioning Sabo never detailed the magic system. It was partly because I myself have very little clue how I'm gonna build the magic system of that book, and another part with me wanting to make magic in this world something very exclusive and esoteric for the most part, that Max will learn eventually, too.
I said it already, but you can feel free to stack the chapters of Gamble King before binging them or you can also absolutely give your opinion on it. Ideas are more than welcome as the brainstorming is in session. I'm having fun with it, and it's also a way to give you exclusive content aside from the side stories I am still working on, and the arts I would like to commission soon, maybe even a short animated video of the final Adom VS. Helios.
Anyway, the chapters of Re:Birth are coming tonight for both tiers, and if I haven't answered your comments or DMs yet, please don't worry, I just haven't been online as much since I am building the backlog for Book 2 more actively. I'll get to them shortly.
PS. If there is anything plot wise you'd like to point out that made little sense as well, please do not hesitate to let me know in the comments, I'll read them and answer them today as soon as the chapters are uploaded. As always, thanks for your support, and I hope the content is entertaining!
Comments
Panzer
I think its still viable for him to be the victim, there just needs to be a thread connecting them he's tugging on. You could use the cat! I felt like she had such a bit roll that didnt link into the story enough. What if the specifically went after a beast tamer bc or the reports on the panther helping them and the cat being seen around. I doubt the people seeimg her didnt know she could shift between otherwise the bars to her cage wouldve been spaced wrong
Josh Cothran
Some inconsistencies with the golem’s height, and Yann’s. Initial meeting it said he was a head taller than the golem, and the golem has been alternatively called 8 feet tall and 2 meters
Pseudo
The four men that attacked Gus and killed Gizmo, I feel like it would be more realistic if they instead questioned a completely random and unknown student or professor. What are the chances the four men questioned one of the few people in the school that Adom is familiar with?
