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Chapter 58. Badges and Consequences

🕑 Added 2025-03-12 22:08:09 +0000 UTC

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Josh Cothran

He’s well on his way to being ungankable now hehe

lenkite

> "When do you head back to the Academy?" Sam asked." Sonja is not a mage student of the academy, right ? She never cast anything nor was she recognized by Adom as such.

lenkite

Looks like some off the examiners were overseeing that the gankers did their job.

Josh Cothran

Awesome

Ace_the_owl

Fixed! Thank you for the heads up :)

Ace_the_owl

Yeah, sorry about that, I just realized I had uploaded the wrong draft. There is a part where Adom is supposed to feel something is off about that whole thing. This is actually a plot point with them not seeing anyone in the dungeon, or not being helped, etc. I think the right version should be here now. Also about to upload 3 chapters today, one of which will elaborate on the current situation

Noah

Feel like he needs a spy network more. I feel like if he gets Cassandra, Bob, and Valiant together in a room then he’ll be halfway there!

Nick Youngstrom

Business enpire building arc! 😆

Josh Cothran

46 teams entered, there were 30 examiners. It’s *plausible* that they just didn’t happen to be around every area where gankers were ganking, but with Adom’s party having 2 3rd years it doesn’t make much sense what Vince said near the end of the chapter unless he’s just wrong

Josh Cothran

What, after a series of dungeon murders they’re only gonna follow the preppy kids? Lol. But yeah nah if they were watching Adom’s group they’re absolute dickheads for not taking the gankers, either before the kids subdued them, or after. Why would they need witnesses if the examiners watched them try to ambush the children anyway

Nick

I agree in principle. I also want know to whether the examiners were only following Xerxes students or all of the adventurers? If it was just specifically the students then the other wannabe adventurers might not have examiners following them.

Nick

""Plus," Samson continued, "a substantial bonus for the apprehension of known criminals operating within the dungeon. The gankers have been confirmed". I don't think the criminals were 'known' the guards didn't have a list of names or faces etc. Could probably say they were dangerous criminals instead

Josh Cothran

Don’t get me wrong, I really like the story. Wouldn’t still be subbed and reading it if I didn’t. Probably should just take the examiners out altogether tbh

John Koor

Agreed. No sense at all. Nor does it make any sense they didn't immediately question why the examiners didn't intervene.

Josh Cothran

Doesn’t make a ton of sense that they had so many examiners and just let the gankers murder people and then try to murder children


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