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Chapter 46. The Promised Day - Part 2

🕑 Added 2025-02-20 04:01:12 +0000 UTC

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Alt Hero

By the by, why has Hugo been left alone? Gale knows who is and that he was the professor's research assistant. Surely if they want access to the profs research they should have kidnapped and interrogated him as well. And given how ruthless they seem to be willing to be it would be in character for them to leverage Hugo's well being against the professor.

Alt Hero

If the professor is such a liability in terms of exposing the prince's involvement why was he being detained by the relatively low security of the Children of the Moon and Gale? Surely he would be buried deep within the Prince's forces? Unless there are internal pressures/eyes for the emperor in the Prince's forces? Could be worth establishing.

R. Maxwell Steele

Yeah I thought it was Marco the whole chapter until he let him off easy.

R. Maxwell Steele

I don't think it's actually a plan to beat him. I think it's a plan to herd him. The wrong numbers would result in a very different reaction, the most likely being that he's in the wind. What they need is is to get all the pieces into the right spot and then have the archmages and their factions see the truth and side with the Iron Wolves.

lenkite

> Four-on-one odds, even against someone of his caliber. No room for surprises there. Why does he think it is only 4:1 odds against Gale with the Prince involved ? Why didn't he take a few more of his father's Star Knights ? If there 400 of them, a dozen on this mission sounds far better than just taking a single one.

Ace_the_owl

Fixed, thank you!

Ace_the_owl

Good idea! I really could have done the system bit better in this story. It's one of my top priorities to rectify during the edits, wll definitely not make that mistake twice, hopefully

Ace_the_owl

Fixed, thanks!

Ace_the_owl

Now that you mention it, thats a problem. I will be editing the chapter and change the name. Thanks for the feedback, john!

John Koor

Marco + Marcus was confusing. I found myself wondering what had changed Marco's personality so much, and whether the talk of a family was an act. Then why Adom was going so easy on him. It wasn't until the name Marco's was dropped a few paragraphs later that I realized it was a different person.

Simon Hoerder

Regular chapters are nice but I don't consider unregular chapters unprofessional. What's far more important to me is that the quality is good and that you manage your workload in a way that allows you to finish the story without a burnout. If life happens, life happens and we'll have to wait for you to deal with it. Also, I am one of those weird European commies who firmly believe that every one who works for a living has a right to paid time off.

Vaccus

Giving me the silence treatment, huh? Cold. -> Giving me the silent treatment, huh? Cold.

Hellnhavoc

Author a suggestion. When possible try to give examples of what the increases mean. For example a story does +1 strength but I never have a clue what that means so it’s pointless. But each if each strength equals some sort of increase based on their mass it means more like Jim can now lift 3 stones instead of 1 etc. I believe you have done similar things just wanted to mention it.

BenjiVoid

> Succeed, and the blood that would be spilled tonight - because there would be blood no matter what - will be minimal. The 'will' at the end should be a 'would'

Gopard

Lol I was wondering why there was such a skip between chapter 44 and this one and why its not nearly the 17K... I just skipped one xD

Anotherb Account

Also WHOO! MAGE WAR

Anotherb Account

I mean, that sounds awesome, great if you deliver it, but what’s important is the story and I freaking love this story. I’ll say the same thing my boss told me (I’m bad at using vacation days). Someone will always want more from you, do what you gotta do first to prevent burnout. If that means vacations, or non daily chapters, then do it. That said, don’t get me wrong, ima enjoy the daily chapters until it’s too much, but seriously - don’t worry about the inconsistency.

sjturner79

Even 1 chapter a day can be a hard push, make sure you still have time for self and family, don't hurt yourself just trying to get chapters out to us !

Viktor

It worth it. Ill support every word and effort. Writing is a full time job, so find your own balance - how you want to do it. And just provide the schedule for us, when you will have it

Hellnhavoc

Let’s do this !

Ace_the_owl

Hey everyone - let's address the elephant in the room: my release schedule has been about as stable as a house of cards in a hurricane. Not exactly professional, I know. After some reflection, I realize I shouldn't promise multiple chapters when I'm not 100% certain I can deliver - it's not fair to you. So here's what I'm committing to: one guaranteed chapter per day until we build up a 30+ chapter buffer on the Archmage tier. Any bonus chapters that happen will be surprise drops rather than promised ones - that way I won't feel like I'm letting you down if life gets in the way. Speaking of chapters, I've decided to expand this conflict into about 4 parts to really dig into the depth of what's happening here. More room to explore the characters, politics, and consequences. Hope you'll find it worth the ride. And seriously - thank you all for sticking with me through the inconsistent schedule. Your support means everything, and I'm working to level up to what you deserve. No more overpromising - just steady, reliable content that hopefully keeps getting better.


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