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Chapter 50. Last Boat For Arkhos (Start of Book 2)

🕑 Added 2025-02-27 17:30:09 +0000 UTC

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Fritsco

Like a cat/ panther that's actually a cursed princess? 😜

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I love how casually funny and relaxing this is great start for the book!

Hellnhavoc

If not the leviathan some kind of stealthy pet companion would be fun.

Ccity88

Thanks for the chapter. I think Adom’s character development is interesting - he doesn’t act like the old man he really is, nor does he act the place of a child. Would love to see this reflected in his dialogue a bit more as sometimes I feel like he’s just a kid

Ace_the_owl

Thanks for reading, Nick! Hmm, I do think that would more action packed. Gonna be doing a few edits as soon as I can about it. This was like, the third draft for this chapter, so, it might not get exactly right on the first publication

Ace_the_owl

Good point. I'm gonna add that today, thanks for pointing it out :)

Nick Youngstrom

Good chapter! I really enjoyed the sense of urgency and out of control-ness the running scenes gave me. As a small note, my expectation was that Adom would use magic to help cover/avoid some of his collateral damage in the running. I suspect that the intent of leaving the magic aside until the jump was for cinematic reasons, and I see how you got there. If you ever revise, I would add some small magics, but make help and hurt his progress in equal measure. Like, perhaps he could have picked up all the books he spilled with magic to help, but he used Push to jump a big sandcastle and there was a kid on the other side that he had to dodge at the last minute. Cheers!

TheOne320

I wish the shape and appearance of the leviathan was explained. Now I have no idea what it even is except that it is dark and is very large.

Ace_the_owl

Thank you so much! Oh, I won't need a break, but after we reach 30 chapters ahead, I might make it a once every two days release schedule to properly outline everything, and edit Book 1 as well.

Bapp

Congrats on book 2! I can't remember if you said you're taking a break after this chapter.

Ace_the_owl

Thank you! Now that you mention it, I wonder if a Leviathan would actually smell like fish lol

Michael

A leviatan from Law's time? Something smells fishy here... Congrats on Book 2 start


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