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Chapter 47. The Promised Day - Part 3

🕑 Added 2025-02-22 06:02:57 +0000 UTC
Chapter 47. The Promised Day - Part 3

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R. Maxwell Steele

Apparently 5x human healing with the vampire level one recent addition. Not sure why white wyrm body isn't also kicking in and synergizing with that. But apparently it's not much of a help, except that afterward he will eventually get back to full health on his own.

lenkite

The only way he can do these things if he is a [Fluid User] and is hopping around like a bunny on ultra-advanced steroids. I think author needs to clarify whether Valiant is a fluid user or not.

Spencer Needler

Previate it I am blind

Xiver

When he got it, it said it was at level 1 and was five times the normal human healing rate.

Spencer Needler

Just gonna ignore the healing factor that Adom got from the vampire? Or is it not actually all that strong since it is constantly working on keeping life drain away?

ALEXEI

Enjoying the book overall but the size of valiant is a constant annoyance to me. "He saw Valiant as he darted through the chaos like a rabid thing, his movements frantic and desperate. His short sword found necks and eyes." I can't for the life of me place how big he is. Sometimes he is mouse sized sitting in a pocket or peoples hands, other times he is stomping on ghoul heads or somehow reaching peoples throats and doing damage with a sword that is like less than a inch long if he is mouse sized and that's a short sword. either he is to small to fight and do these things or he isn't and can't fit in these places.

Chaz Baz

How fast does he heal now?

Mike L

Sick fight

Gopard

No they hold all the materials they needed to experiment IN THAT CITY... Adom already knows just as everyone else if it comes to a fight the Iron Wolfes win. They also know that the Crown Prince is part of the conspiracy just not how involved he is. They ALSO know this conspiracy is big enough to have funding and also researchers who adapted Kim's original research (he was killed originally without actually making the weapons themselves) So I don't see Adom actually thinking the greater Organization behind all this which is in league with royalty is really that attached to a gang's holdings or doesn't realize NO MATTER WHAT those holdings are already lost. The only reason things wouldn't escalate is the conspiracy being revealed... But if things Escalate the Iron Wolfes win and the Prince and his allies have to flee anyway... That also wasn't too hard to predict, if they know 1500 Imperial troops can't beat the Iron Wolfes than they know the Prince knows the same... The only reason Gale was defending shipments before was because he didn't have anything better to do nor any actual threats in the vicinity who could potentially face him. Everybody knows this had changed though. Kim was priority number one and additionally also someone who was being searched for. AND its not like they think the enemies are stupid right? Obviously the Children of the moon realized Adom was kind of affiliated with Cisco so they would consider The Iron Wolfes enemies and if they somehow get info on who killed Adom Sylla they would storm the undertow... I feel like the only thing really bothering me is the Trap for Gale. That doesn't feel like something People like Arthur, Noss or even Adom's Mother would sign off on, they should have enough experience with "high value targets" to know the strongest Asset won't be far from the most valuable thing especially with signs of trouble...

Jacob

Because the gangs are holding all the materials needed to eventually make the dragons breathe and they already had the professor contained, and as far as the prince knows no one knows he had the professor

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I thought the trap was locating Gale and surprising him or using Kim as bait... Honestly thinking Gale would come to defend anything other than the Professor the moment something goes to shit seems strange... They know that the Prince and thus the entire enemy knows about the 2 day deadline why would they keep defending a useless position the night before the deadline ends? Personally I would have thought bringing the whole team maybe even 3-5 more start knights (it's not like the enemy would count if there are 399 or just 396 right?) to find the professor first that seems the most likely point where they find Gallahad as well... And then though they obviously didn't expect the crown prince to send his personal guard as reinforcements sending "just" one Star Knight against am Opponent known to be a strong knight and mage both seems minimalistic... Hugo and Kaius feel completely out of their weightclass in this kind of fight the Golem has one arm off and was before basically one punched by Gale... Also is there a specific reason why Adom didn't bring the Golem to the fight the moment Game attacked? Everything else is mostly "hindsight being better than foresight" but that's seems strange. He didn't actually believe he can take Have for even one exchange if the guy fights seriously right? (BC that seems obvious he never actually beat any kind of fluid user in any fight not to mention a super strong one).

Hellnhavoc

Enjoyed this one! It shows growth. He lost to Superman sure but he put up a fight. He is only in a 12 year old Body. Imagine 3 years from now. And he was never a battle mage either. Was always crippled before. I liked it.

Ryo5678

This part appears to be repeated twice "Professor." Adom gently removed Kim's hands. "I can handle myself." "Handle yourself? You're what, thirteen?"

Nick Youngstrom

Great chapter! Really good pacing for the fight!

Ace_the_owl

Sorry about the late post. I actually rewrote the whole rest of the chapter, as I was not satisfied with the previous one. This one, I think, is a bit better. The image of Gon is how I imagined Adom's face to look like right now, it was so fun to rewrite this. Took 4 hours but man I loved every second of it. I hope it's as enjoyable to you guys, too. Next chapter will the be last part of this conflict. Cheers!


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