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Chapter 25. It's Not Murder If I Ask For It

🕑 Added 2025-01-30 19:49:21 +0000 UTC

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NameGame

Hang on a minute, what happened with the eyeglasses? Layered the prescription over the monocle's lens? The lens is broken. "A crack ran through the lens, likely from the battle." So he has a prescription over a cracked lens that he's going to be wearing all the time? If the enchantment was on the lens, and not the monacle's frame, then it's somewhat surprising that it still works at all, much less that it's able to accept new enchantments. Thanks for the chapter.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! OH!! Seems like I skipped the last chappy was wondering about the transition here lmao!

Ace_the_owl

Oh yeah, I meant to say the first and second years, as third years and up are totally different beasts. Thanks for the correction!

Uroš

I agree. He's trying to go about it all on his own. There are bound to be some people he could trust. His parents. The headmaster seems like a good sort. Sam...

lenkite

I feel not communicating this to his parents is a mistake. His father could probably get the wyvern's heart for him with little trouble.

lenkite

> I don't need to remind you that's forbidden, regardless of your year This doesn't quite make sense since you said many mages choose the [Battle Mage] path in their 3rd year which involves wielding fluid. If they won't train using fluid then then isn't the combat training useless ?

BlaueFeder

he should focus on that. It's the difference between a normal life and a life of suffering, which he can easily imagine, because he went through it already. It makes no sense to do anything else in the meantime....

Pseudo

So quick thought, I would think Adom would want at least an anti-breaking enchantment on his glasses that now have an irreplaceable artifact in them. It seems a little strange that he wouldn’t want a little insurance of durability on them given all the danger he has been in.

Eldar Zecore

Some potential interesting plot points I’ve randomly thought of: recruiting future badasses for our future team (can be done early on or in the future), hunting for Hermit Masters (of Fluid or Magic and/or combat) for training, discovering/exploring ancient ruins which are unknown now but were eventually discovered in the future, Helping Sam’s Mom, stumbling upon a conspiracy (preferably not World Altering, maybe an assassination of a Duke or Baron?) I’ve made them vague to keep my reply a bit small lol

Nick

Tftc

Uroš

Woo! Nothing better than waking up to a bunch of new chapters. (It's evening for me now)

Uroš

I hope Adom manages to finish and consume the cure with more than seconds to spare. At least hours. Preferably days.

EsZeus

Ohh, awesome. Good to read that haha Well, looking forward!

Ace_the_owl

It will, I promise. School life was more of a setting for the first book, and I won't spoil it, but with me starting the second book soon, there will be a few changes. I believe there were a lot of hints so far ;) Also, since I will be writing the second book after I am done with the edits, you guys can feel absolutely free to let me know what you think would be good plot lines to follow, I am almost done with the outlining, but additional input is always good!

EsZeus

I love the story :) Just: I really hope it switches away from school life. It's... Interesting for a long while, but it sometimes loses it's uniqueness and it's getting boring ^^ Never was a fan of school life in the long term. Dunno how others see it xD

Ace_the_owl

We're over 200 on Patreon! Ha! I did NOT expect this. Thank you all so much. I wanted to put out the chapters as quickly as possible, but I needed to tend to real life stuff too. I promise I am finishing completing this tier today. And because we reached a milestone, I'll add one bonus chapter too! I'll be answering the comments as soon as I am completely done editing the chapters left. Hope you enjoy the chapters everyone :)


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