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Chapter 23. Golem
🕑 Added 2025-01-30 01:00:23 +0000 UTCHere's the thing about golems: they need cores to function. That's like, Magical Engineering 101. Day one stuff. The kind of basic fact you learn right after "don't eat mysterious glowing mushrooms" and "yes, that ancient tomb is probably cursed."
So when you're holding a golem's core in your hands, staring at the very definitely core-less golem whose eyes are now glowing a serene blue, you start questioning everything you know about magical engineering. And possibly your life choices.
Adom stood there, [Fireball] spell burning hot and ready in his palm, aimed at what remained of the golem's exposed frame. Behind him, a low growl filled the room as the cat's form began to shift and expand, fur rippling as muscles grew and stretched until a full-sized puma stood in its place, teeth bared and ready to pounce.
"Wait," Adom said, holding up his free hand.
Something wasn't adding up.
The golem hadn't moved. Hadn't attempted to reassemble itself. Hadn't tried to recover its core. It just... sat there, pieces scattered across the practice room floor, eyes glowing with that steady blue light. Watching.
Adom's spell flickered slightly as a new thought occurred to him. He'd been ready to reduce the construct to ash based on pure reflex, but this wasn't matching any known pattern. The golem had been fully capable of violence in the labyrinth, yet now, even in its most vulnerable state, it showed no signs of aggression. His mind was racing through possibilities, each more unlikely than the last. A backup core? Some sort of residual power? A really elaborate trap?
"This is either going to be the most interesting discovery I've made," Adom said to the puma, "or the stupidest last words anyone's ever had."
The puma made a rumbling sound that somehow managed to convey both "please don't" and "you're going to anyway" at the same time, but remained tensed and ready, blue eyes fixed on the golem's remains.
The soft hum of the [Fireball] spell provided an oddly comforting background noise as Adom took one careful step forward, then another. The crystal lights in the practice room cast overlapping shadows of the scattered golem parts across the floor – a scene that would've been almost artistic if it wasn't so unsettling.
"Hey there," Adom said, immediately feeling foolish for talking to what was essentially a head with glowing eyes surrounded by metallic parts.
But then again, he regularly had conversations with a cursed cat, so who was he to judge what constituted normal conversation partners?
The golem's eyes tracked his movement, but that was all. No sudden movements, no attempt to reassemble itself, no ominous whirring sounds. Just that steady blue glow, like a pair of calm lakes on a moonlit night.
Adom glanced down at the core in his left hand, still pulsing with those strange runes, then back at the golem. Something about this felt... deliberate. Like walking into a room and finding everything slightly out of place – not enough to scream 'trap', but enough to know someone had been there.
"You're not supposed to be active," he said to the golem, keeping his spell hand ready. "That's not how you work. That's not how any of this works."
The golem, predictably, didn't respond.
The puma, now back into its cat form, had moved from behind his legs to a position where it could watch both Adom and the golem, its tail twitching with what he'd learned to recognize as analytical interest rather than fear.
Through Riddler's Bane, the core's runes shimmered with that same ethereal blue glow, their geometric patterns forming intricate webs that seemed to pulse with ancient power.
Runes were the building blocks of organized magic – precise geometric patterns that could accomplish specific magical effects when properly arranged. A modern runicologist might pride themselves on knowing a few thousand of them, but there were millions upon millions of possible configurations, each with its own unique purpose.
Even for Adom, who had spent years studying these mystical geometries, these particular patterns were far beyond anything in modern use. No surprise there – if this core truly dated back to Orynth's time, it would be roughly a thousand years old, placing it squarely in the Third Age.
The Ages of Magic were a testament to humanity's cycle of triumph and catastrophe.
Four times now, human civilization had climbed to dizzying heights of magical achievement, and four times it had stumbled spectacularly, forcing each new age to begin almost from scratch.
The Third Age had ended when some brilliant fool had attempted to pierce the veil between life and death, trying to resurrect their lost love. The Second Age collapsed after an equally ambitious attempt at time travel tore reality apart at the seams.
Each time, the accumulated knowledge of an entire civilization was largely lost, leaving future generations to piece together what they could from fragments and ruins. The Fifth Age had advanced magical engineering far beyond its predecessors in many ways – modern runic arrays were marvels of efficiency and precision, refined through centuries of methodical study and experimentation.
But sometimes the old ways held secrets that time had forgotten.
These Third Age runes were different from the standardized patterns Adom knew – not crude or primitive, but following a completely different philosophy. Where modern runes were precise and specialized, these were adaptable, interconnected in ways that defied current magical theory.It was like finding an intricate water clock in an age of steam engines – not necessarily better or worse, but achieving similar goals through fundamentally different means.
The glowing patterns beneath his monocle hinted at principles of magical engineering that had been lost in the great collapse.
Politics hadn't helped, of course.
The older races – the elves with their thousand-year lifespans and the dwarves with their carefully guarded archives – had their own reasons for keeping certain knowledge from reaching human hands.
Can't really blame them, given humanity's track record with world-ending magical disasters. A few strategic "accidents" here, some conveniently lost manuscripts there, and human progress remained carefully measured. Just another layer in the complex dance of inter-species relations that had shaped the magical world for millennia.
These runes, though... these were something else entirely. They spoke of an era when human mages had stood at the height of their power, before hubris brought it all crashing down. And now here they were, glowing with impossible life in a core that somehow worked even when separated from its golem.
Adom spread his notes across the practice room's floor, positioning them where the crystal lights cast the clearest illumination. The cat – he really needed to give it a proper name one of these days – perched on a stack of reference texts, tail swishing with scholarly interest.
"Right," he muttered, sketching the core's outermost runic circle in his notebook. "Modern containment runes are derived from older patterns, simplified over centuries of refinement. These have to connect somewhere..."
He traced a [Mana Flow] rune in the air with his finger, letting a trickle of power illuminate the pattern. Next to it, he sketched the corresponding pattern from the core. Where the modern rune was elegant in its simplicity – three clean lines intersecting at precise angles – its ancient counterpart sprawled like a thorny vine, branching into subsidiary patterns.
The cat's ears perked up, and it made a sound somewhere between a meow and "obviously."
"Yes, yes, I see it too," Adom replied, adding another sketch. "The secondary branches aren't decorative. They're..." He paused, squinting through the monocle. "They're fail-safes. Alternate power channels. Modern runes are more efficient, but these... these are adaptable."
Hours slipped by as Adom filled page after page with comparative diagrams. The cat moved between positions – sometimes watching the golem, sometimes batting at his quill, occasionally making that distinctive grunt that meant "you're thinking about this wrong." Each time he thought he'd grasped the pattern, some new detail would catch his eye, sending him back to his references.
"Look here," he said, tapping his quill against a particular sequence. "We use [Power Containment] runes as pure boundaries – energy goes in, stays in. But these older versions..." He traced the pattern with a finger glowing with mana. "They're more like... membranes. Permeable. They don't just contain power, they..."
The cat's tail went rigid.
"They transform it," Adom breathed. "That's why the golem's still active. The core isn't just a power source – it's more like a... a template. The actual energy could come from..." He glanced around the room, suddenly very aware of the ambient magical field generated by the practice room's crystal lights.
Carefully, he sketched a modified version of a modern [Energy Detection] rune, incorporating elements from the ancient pattern. A drop of mana to activate it, and...
The air lit up with flowing streams of power, all converging on the scattered golem parts. The cat yowled a warning, but Adom was already moving, fascinated by the implications. "It's using the ambient magic! The core wasn't the power source at all, it was just the- shi—!"
The golem's arm moved faster than anything that size had any right to, missing Adom's head by inches as he threw himself backward. The cat – now very much a puma again – caught him mid-fall, breaking his tumble as the fist crashed into the wall behind them.
"Right," Adom said, heart pounding as he scrambled to his feet. "Note to self: successful magical breakthrough does not always equal good magical breakthrough."
The golem parts began to twitch, and the blue glow in its eyes flickered to a deeper, darker shade.
Another set of runes caught his attention - spiraling patterns that seemed to fold in on themselves.
"No way," he muttered, sketching furiously. The cat peered over his shoulder with unusual intensity.
Back in the labyrinth, he'd seen this golem use Fluid. At the time, he'd been too busy trying not to die to question how a construct could possibly manipulate it.
But here it was, written in the runes themselves. These patterns weren't just storing mana - they were processing it, compressing it, forcing it through layers of increasingly dense runic matrices until...
"It's artificially generating Fluid," he breathed. The cat's tail went completely still - a sign Adom interpreted as surprise. "These mad geniuses actually created a runic sequence that can transmute raw mana into Fluid."
He could recognize maybe one in every dozen runes in that particular sequence. The rest were completely foreign, following principles that violated half of what he knew about the subject. The fact that it worked at all was nothing short of miraculous.
"I could spend years studying just this section alone," he muttered, adding another diagram to his growing collection.
*****
Scattered papers rustled as Adom paced the room, running fingers through his disheveled hair. His monocle caught the moonlight from the high windows, casting prismatic patterns across his diagrams.
The hour of the wolf.
"It's not just storing power," he muttered, while yawning and adding another hasty sketch to his growing collection. "Look at these branching patterns here – they're not containment runes at all. They're... they're more like a nervous system."
The cat chirped inquisitively, batting at a diagram with its paw.
"Exactly!" Adom's quill flew across the page, matching ancient patterns with their modern equivalents. "Modern golems use rigid control runes – direct commands, binary responses. But these..." He traced a complex spiral pattern, letting mana illuminate its branches. "These allow for adaptive responses. The core isn't just a power source or a control unit – it's more like a... a template for consciousness."
His hands shook slightly as he drew a new diagram, combining Fifth Age precision with Third Age adaptability. The first attempt sparked and fizzled. The second left scorch marks on the page. The third...
The third pattern hung in the air, shimmering with potential.
"That's why it responded to the ambient magic. The core contains the pattern, but any compatible energy source can power it. It's brilliant, really. Terrifying, but brilliant."
Hours melted away as Adom worked, the cat alternating between helpful suggestions and judgmental naps. Each breakthrough led to new questions, each solution revealed deeper mysteries. His fingers were stained with ink, his sleeves dusted with chalk from countless erased attempts.
"The key," he said, marking a complex series of interlocking runes, "is the resonance pattern. Modern golems use standardized control runes, but these..." He pressed his palm against a freshly drawn array, pushing mana through it. The pattern absorbed his energy, shifted, adapted. "With the right modification, I..." he smiled. "I think I can make these attune themselves to the my personal mana signature."
The cat's tail twitched – approval.
"One more element." Adom's voice was hoarse from hours of muttered calculations. He sketched a final set of runes – a hybrid creation combining modern stability with ancient adaptability. "A control matrix keyed to my specific mana frequency. Without it, we'd have a fully conscious construct with no loyalty parameters. In theory."
Finally, after triple-checking every connection, he lifted the core. New runes of his own design now intertwined with the ancient patterns, glowing with a subtle resonance that matched his own magical signature.
Adom took a deep breath, weaving a [Shield] spell and raising it around himself – the strongest he could maintain. The cat shifted into its larger form, muscles tensed beneath midnight fur.
"If this goes wrong," he said, positioning the core above the golem's chest cavity, "we run. No heroics."
The puma huffed in agreement.
"Three..." His hands steadied as he aligned the core.
"Two..." The shield strengthened around him.
"One..." Ancient runes pulsed in harmony with his additions.
"Rise." The word carried power, echoing off the stone walls as Adom pressed the core home.
Blue light rippled through joints, coursing like liquid lightning until it reached those massive eyes. Adom stepped back, shield humming, while the puma's muscles bunched in anticipation.
Theory was one thing - he'd spent hours modifying those runes, weaving his mana signature into their very structure.
But would it work?
The golem stood motionless, its magical field pulsing in perfect synchronization with the core. Just as the calculations had predicted.
Adom and the puma shared a look. This was the moment of truth.
Magic, at its core, was all about intent. Every mage knew this - it was why the most powerful spells came from the heart rather than the tongue. And Adom had done something rather clever with that principle. He hadn't just marked the core with his magical signature; he'd woven it into the very fabric of the golem's consciousness matrix. In theory, the construct should respond not just to his magic, but to his will.
In theory.
He cleared his throat. "Raise your right arm?"
The golem's arm lifted in one smooth motion, holding perfectly steady at shoulder height.
Adom contained his excitement.
No, no. Too soon to jump. let's try...
"Lower it."
The arm descended.
Adom's quill slipped from his suddenly trembling fingers, clattering to the floor. He stared at it for a moment, then at the golem. "Would you... um, please pick that up for me?"
The golem moved with surprising grace for something its size, kneeling to retrieve the quill. But here was the real test - before Adom could say another word, the construct was already extending its arm, offering the quill back to him.
Just as he'd hoped. Not responding to words at all, but to the pure intent flowing through that modified core.
"YES!" Adom leaped into the air with a whoop of joy, papers scattering around him. "I DID IT!"
The puma, finally satisfied that the immediate danger had passed, shrank back into its smaller form, giving him a look that somehow managed to be both pleased and exasperated.
Adom's celebration froze mid-jump. "Oh."
The cat's ears perked forward inquisitively.
There was more to this golem than simple tasks.
The core's architecture had revealed layer upon layer of combat runes - formations, attack patterns, weapon stances. This wasn't some simple worker construct or messenger automaton. This was a knight, a warrior, built for the battlefield. The same deadly efficiency that had nearly killed them in the labyrinth was now under his control.
"I got an idea," Adom said, a grin spreading across his face as the cat's ears flattened in preemptive disapproval. The room suddenly felt full of possibilities - and maybe just a hint of future regret.
Adom pulled out the Flamebrand sword from his inventory, turning it over in his hands.
The craftsmanship was evident - perfect balance, elegant lines, deadly purpose in every curve. Growing up as a knight's son meant he could at least recognize quality, even if he couldn't use it properly.
He'd seen enough of his father's training sessions to know that becoming proficient with a blade took years of dedicated practice. Years he'd spent hunched over books instead, learning runes and occasionally punching things that annoyed him.
Strange how satisfying that had become, actually. When had he started enjoying the feeling of his fist connecting with enemies? Probably around the same time he started collecting scars and getting into increasingly questionable situations.
He extended the sword toward the golem, handle first. The construct's fingers closed around the grip with precise, practiced movements.
"Show me how this is supposed to be used."
The golem settled into a stance. Then, out of nowhere, the blade erupted into flames.
It could do that?
"Oh." Adom blinked. "Right. Flamebrand. It's in the name."
The demonstration that followed made Adom feel slightly better about his own inability to use the weapon. The golem moved like liquid metal, each strike flowing into the next, leaving trails of fire in the air that hung for moments before dissipating.
High guard, low sweep, thrust-parry-riposte - movements Adom recognized from his childhood but had never seen executed with such mechanical perfection. The blade sang through the air, its flames showing patterns that would have been beautiful if they weren't so obviously deadly.
The cat watched from atop a table, tail twitching with grudging approval.
"Well," Adom said as the golem returned to ready stance, flames still dancing along the blade, "that's definitely better than me smacking things with it and hoping for the best." He had effectively just gained a personal knight, one that would never tire, never question, and apparently knew exactly how to use a magic sword.
The corner of his mouth twitched upward. "I wonder what else you know how to do?"
*****
Morning.
The sun felt particularly offensive today, its cheerful rays completely at odds with Adom's current state.
He stared into his untouched coffee, watching the steam rise in lazy spirals. The private dining room's morning light felt too bright, too cheerful, and definitely too early. Across the oak table, Cisco methodically spread butter on his toast while Marco arranged the morning's documents with precise movements.
Valiant sprawled in his chair, tail swishing against the polished wood. "Rough night, huh?"
"Interesting one," Adom managed, suppressing a yawn.
"Ohoho," Valiant's whiskers twitched. "Interesting, he says. I bet it was interesting." He winked, grinning. "Very interesting, if you know what I mean."
Valiant laughed heartily, tapping the table.
Three sets of eyes turned to the young mouse beastkin. All had different intensities, but carried the same sentiment. Disappointment.
The silence stretched.
Valiant's laughter died slowly, like air leaking from a balloon. He glanced between their faces, tail going still. "You guys have no sense of humor."
Cisco turned another page of his morning report.
Adom wasn't quite sure what to make of Valiant. The young mouse beastkin treated everyone like a childhood friend, even those he'd just met, skipping entirely past the usual social graces that made interactions bearable.
Perhaps it was the exhaustion from last night's work with the golem making him irritable, or maybe it was just his age showing, but there was something particularly grating about someone who acted like the court jester at a funeral.
Cisco paused in his methodical toast-buttering, nose twitching slightly. "You smell like cat."
"Ah," Adom took a sip of his coffee, keeping his expression neutral. "Got one recently."
"WHAT?!" Valiant nearly knocked over his cup, tail straight as a rod. "You? A cat? Those things are vicious! My cousin got scratched up real bad by one last month! Said it looked at him like he was breakfast!"
"It's just their nature," Adom said mildly, thinking of judgmental blue eyes and surprisingly supportive purrs. "They're independent creatures. They do what they want."
"Independent? More like murderous! Did you know they play with their food? Actually play with it before—"
"We're aware of feline hunting habits, Valiant," Marco interrupted, not looking up from his papers. "Some of us even appreciate their efficiency."
Valiant shuddered dramatically. "Efficiency. Right. That's what we're calling it now."
"They're also excellent judges of character," Cisco added, with just the slightest emphasis that made Valiant's whiskers droop.
The conversation drifted into a comfortable lull, broken only by the clink of cups and the rustling of papers, until Cisco finally set down his toast and cleared his throat.
"As entertaining as this morning's zoological discussion has been," he said, wiping his hands, "I believe we have more pressing matters to discuss?"
"Thanks for meeting on such short notice," Adom said, settling into his chair. "Eren mentioned you had something to discuss as well?"
Cisco nodded, his usual calm demeanor carrying a hint of tension. "There have been... complications with your order."
"Complications?" Something in Cisco's tone made Adom's stomach tighten.
"The wyvern proved more troublesome than anticipated. Ambushed our first hunting party near its nest. We lost good people." Cisco's fingers drummed once on the table. "I've dispatched a second team, more experienced with aerial predators, but it will delay things."
"How long?"
"Two weeks. Perhaps three at most." Cisco spread his hands apologetically. "We'll adjust the price accordingly, of course."
Adom forced himself to breathe slowly. Two weeks. He ran the calculations in his head - the preservation spells on the other ingredients would hold, barely. The cure was still possible within that timeframe. Just... tighter than he'd like.
"Two weeks," he repeated, more to himself than the others. "Alright. We can work with that."
"Now," Cisco said, leaning back slightly, "what did you wish to discuss?"
"Right." Adom set down his cup. "Few weeks ago, I was attacked. Broad daylight. My friend was with me." He paused. "Children of the Moon. Helios's people, without question."
"How did they track you?" Cisco asked.
"The Undertow incident. They slipped a tracking spell on me during all that mess."
"Cunning bastards," Valiant muttered.
"They are."
"So you want to kill the vampire," Cisco said, reaching for his cup. "Getting him out in daylight won't be easy, but we could do it if we try."
"Not quite." Adom's voice was level. "Killing Helios won't stop the Children of the Moon from coming after me for retribution." He let the words settle. "Which is why I think it's time we dealt with them. All of them. Permanently."
The clink of Marco's pen against the inkwell was the only sound in the room. Valiant's whiskers twitched once, twice, then went still. Even Cisco, who rarely showed surprise, sat a fraction straighter in his chair.
"You're not suggesting a mere disruption of operations," Cisco finally said.
"No," Adom said simply. "I'm not."
Comments
NameGame
Hmm. I'm reasonably confident that Adom isn't sane. He saw the golem was still prepared to kill him, but after mucking around with it a bit he powered it up anyway. With no safety precautions, no restraints, no disassembly (like removing both legs and an arm), no thick wall between them, no other mages with Control spells already engaged to ensure it couldn't move if/when it tried. Just powered it up and let's run, even knowing it's at least as fast as he is at a full sprint if not slightly faster...and being a golem it won't get tired at a full sprint like he would. Definitely not sane, or even particularly close to it. Looking forward to the Children of the Moon conflict, but there's something strange about the deal. If Cisco would be the one to benefit from the Children being removed, and all it costs Adom is 5%...it leads to the question, why didn't Cisco do it already? That 5% is peanuts compared to having his operation grow and the profits that he'd make every month (plus the benefits to his intelligence network). Cisco can surely cover that 5%, and already has the motivation, so I'm not really sure what he was waiting for. This was a weird deal and it's not really clear what Adom's 5% did to push it from not doing it to doing it. I don't get it. Curious when Adom is going back to get the rest of the money to pay Marcos, that bill will come due and he hasn't even considered going to get the money yet. Thanks for the chapter.
Chaz Baz
No starlight energy magic. Anti-most things? Def vamps.
ALEXEI
Unless the golems were holding back their swordsman ship didn't seem that impressive during the trial. I mean he lost to a 12 year old with no training and a leprechaun.
Gopard
Thanks for the chapter! A first test for his personal knight Golem maybe??? I was always wondering about that Sword why he only used it as a super sharp blade and not more lmao!
EsZeus
Thanks :) Glad your Patreon is taking off with a great start!
EsZeus
Nice
lenkite
Hopefully he won't once again go days without sleep and collapse again. are none of the profs complaining about his attendance ?
Richard Davis
Such delicate understatement.
Ace_the_owl
Thank you for reading!
Ace_the_owl
Coming up! And thanks for reading!
Jacob
Whoot please give me all the chapters this story is great
Eldar Zecore
What Oldest Dream said, don’t pressure yourself!
the oldest dream
thanks man, take your time
William
Tyftc(s)
Ace_the_owl
Hello everyone, sorry for the late post. I am currently editing all the chapters and will be completing this tier to 10 chapters today. This is the first of a series of 6 other chapters that will be posted in the coming hours. I double checked the chapters to make sure I did not make any mistake during the edits, so I hope it'll be enjoyable!
