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Chapter 18. Goodness

🕑 Added 2025-01-29 01:29:05 +0000 UTC

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Ace_the_owl

That's definitely something I can work on. I'll see how to make it feel less 'convenient'. Thanks for the feedback!

Richard Davis

If I were to wage a complaint, I suppose the only thing would be that it struck me (knowing as much about mechanics of magic as I obviously do *sniff*) as implausible that insanely powerful mages, who built a millennia-enduring gauntlet and labyrinth of such subtlety and power, could not have somehow reserved a little more magic in the battery to allow Adom to consult their simulacra a few minutes longer. The magic expired *right* then..? Just at the story-appropriate moment?

Richard Davis

Good ending. Appropriate mix, I thought, of 'Bob' 's crustiness and warmth. Lovely description of the outdoors after the dark confines of the cave. And "I need to sleep" -- a surprising but apt denoument.

Philreads2

I think this chapter was absolutely awesome. Probably the best so far. Quite the enticing reveal… 👌🏻

BlaueFeder

tftc!


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