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Chapter 44. Dominoes Waiting To Fall

🕑 Added 2025-02-18 14:02:08 +0000 UTC

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Ace_the_owl

Oh man, I am so sorry about this you guys, I think I need a clear schedule for posting before this becomes annoying. I'll figure this out this very week. Just need to have the remaining tea out of my laptop and we'll be good to go

Ace_the_owl

Oh, I am still figuring Patreon out and am probably at fault for this, I'll set up the notification system today to avoid this kind of things, thanks for the heads up, Maze

Ace_the_owl

Thank you so much! Hopefully, things will only get better :)

Ace_the_owl

Haha, yeah, I think I'll follow your advice and divide the chapters to make them more 'digestible' Uploading th first and second parts now!

Ace_the_owl

This is sooo good to read. I really hope it lives up to the standards

Ace_the_owl

Thank you so much!

Ace_the_owl

Oh yeah, The Imperial family's name is Savarnis, I made a mistake there, thanks for pointing it out! it should be good now

Guilty343

Truly you are cursed with Cassandra’s tears

Mark

The prophet 😆 Still love you Ace!

Simon Hoerder

I was wondering: As far as I understand the Crown Prince and the Iron Wolves are of the same empire. But in one place it is referred to as the “Sundarian Empire”, a few paragraphs later it’s called the “great empire of Savarnis”. What’s up with that?

Dylan King

This was probably my favorite constructed chapter right here, balanced developments with foreshadowing and establishing characters and personalities very well. It fealt very political, you could see that everyone was maneuvering but not necessarily what the outcome would be, solid work.

Hellnhavoc

This is currently my favorite royal road story. I look forward to the conclusion of this arc and the villains getting their stupid grins wiped off their faces.

Gopard

Can't wait for the next chapter! Though since I'm in Europe and actually trying to fit to my healthy sleep schedule currently I will probably read it tomorrow morning at the earliest anyway lol!

Gopard

Yeah wow 17K that's literally about 80 minutes for pure average reading speed with about 2 hours (average) to actually take in everything. Did one of those super huge chapters hit RR already? Because I'm really curious how readers there would react. Some stories I remember getting some literal 0.5 star reviews because some idiots were too annoyed by one or two much longer than average chapters...

Broseph

17k, that's gotta be some kinda record. I know you like to give these robust chapters, but damn

Angel

Oh no.... you jinxed it by saying the next chapter will come out today. Based on history, that means tomorrow.🤔😂 All good though🙂 ... great story.

Michael Owens

I got to say - this is shaping up to be one of my favorite stories on Pateron. Good job! I actually keep checking to see if there are updates because I can't wait for the next chapter!

Viktor

Thats amazing

Maze

Great chapter, thanks! Do you happen to have an overview of changes that you made to the previous chapters? I got about 5 or six emails about new chapters that i'd already read.

Ace_the_owl

Next chapter, The Promised Day, coming today. As I said, I won't drag the finale too much, so, I plan to finish it with the final fights in the next chapter. A long one, sitting currently at 17k words, that I am gonna be editing as well. About 10 hours from now. I hope this was enjoyable, thank you all so much for readind, and for the feedbacks, Catch you soon!


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