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Chapter 91: Exchange

🕑 Added 2022-07-01 19:31:53 +0000 UTC

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Cyril Sarnath

Hi! Thanks for the feedback. I understand the concerns about Shaper. A lot of that is due to him being a mysterious man, but once more details will be provided, I hope his motives and background would put him in a different light.

Connor

Hey man I really enjoy your story. Pacing is good and the POV’s work well. (I don’t normally like them). On critique and take it with a grain of salt as I am just a reader but Shaper seems like a deus ex machina.


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