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The Nature of Predators - Arxur Cattle World Battle (5/6)

🕑 Added 2025-01-02 12:00:09 +0000 UTC

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kabhes

Sapient, not sentient. Why does everyone at HFY switch these up?

John

MVP

Just Some Grass

You were at chapter 137

John

Can anyone help me find where I left off? Life kinda got in the way and forgot about NOP and that I was still paying for Patreon. Would have been around August 2023. The last I remember was the one empathetic Arxur spy showed up at the galactic species meeting.

Aured

this is a fascinating arc

EliasArt2Life

If Zarn’s responsible for all the soldiers who died, he’s also responsible for all the people they’re about to rescue.

EliasArt2Life

Yeah, but to be frank, it was hard enough to get them to agree to allow “mysterious allies” to call the shots. NO WAY were they getting them to agree to act as bait.

EliasArt2Life

Wow! A stampede where no one is stated to get trampled and killed! In all seriousness, it’s nice to know that the Federation’s proclivity towards stampedes was around so early. Rumi is endearing in every universe, it seems. Are the humans in the chopper wearing masks, or are they plain faced since no one out of the know is supposed to be in there? Either way, Rumi will probably figure out the truth rather quickly. It’s the soldiers around the human medics I’m worried about. I hope that, even with NOP coming to an end, we still get side stories and miniseries of it for a long while. It would probably be better that way, so that Prisoners of Sol can strongly establish the world and characters before giving side stories.

un_pogaz

That battle is won, now it's time to enter the real horror. Despite all their preparations, entering the farm will be a shock.

Gumcel

“Many of them were so riddled with bullets that their organs perforated their skin.” lol. I see what you meant when you said the early drafts were more hfy.

Byron Ritchie

Glad to see you’re still doing some nop content even if it’s just continuing this neat little au/proto-nop

Alekss Žukovskis

not telling your comrades about being bait is shitty. didn't even park vehicles and tell them to bolt at first opportunity.

Xilacnog

Also, I'm picturing space A-10 Warthog and "the hills are alive....with the sound of BRRRRRRRTTTT"

Xilacnog

Will the humans succeed in storming the farms? My dear author, the real question should be if they're playing Wagner as they do.

Kevo

It’s funny you ask will the humans succeed in the assault on the farms knowing you also said this is more HFY

PhycoKrusk

I have no actual idea, but even if it didn't feel any better in the moment, I still suspect I would rather be told "You can't save everybody" than "You can't save anybody": At least I could save _somebody._

TrendyLaws

It is interesting that even in the “Prototype”, you write the dual mind of the prey characters like this. Zarn can’t stop imagining the worst possible read of the humans actions, until he’s proved wrong without a doubt, and even then he’s suspicious and guarded… but also he can’t just ignore the mounting proof that he’s wrong, he just doesn’t want to confront that yet, so the boundaries shift to this all being a long game plot. It’s all quite compelling.

Yonael Blackwood

Noice.

Noname1225

Amazin gun run lol, can't wait to see what happens at the farms


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