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The Nature of Predators - Krev DND (1/3)

🕑 Added 2024-12-01 12:00:16 +0000 UTC

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Assailant

Quana and Cherise signed up for a fun little bit of stress relief, and instead got roped into watching Gress and Taylor flirt. Poor girls.

Space Paladin

I’m glad you enjoyed this! I just try to do things that are different, mix it up often…variety is the spice of life 😅

straw salmon

Im hooked already!!! How do you know your audience so well?!?! I just started getting into DND and now it just POPS up here too 😭 can you read minds?!?! (Peak story btw)

Roscuro

...Juvrelor...I've been very forgiving of Gress' weirdness. But I swear he's just as bad as furries. And Taylor is somehow getting revenge by being just as bad in the opposite direction while also egging him on. How I'd love to hear Cherise and Quana's commentary on their nonsense.

Harlej

That's something that I didn't knew I wanted until now

Gumcel

The intro notes were written for "any humans new to the game" and if they were written by Gress, then it implies that Quana is familiar with the game. Buncha goddamn nerds man.

EliasArt2Life

“Now all you need is an entire chapter of the characters arguing about the rules. (jk don't do that) XD” I’d happily read that and then throw my own hat into the ring.

EliasArt2Life

Well, this is interesting! @Space Paladin I think you’re doing a fine job with writing fantasy here. You also made a wise decision in patenting the game off of the older role playing games, rather than the newer ones; newer ones are more focused on giving players the ability to play their way, and removes many of the restrictions on classes and races. It’s good for an RPG, but bad for a narrative fantasy story. In a way, fantasy and sci-fi are almost the same thing, just in a different setting; an investigation into what humanity is, made by placing humanity (or human stand ins) into a world full of different and unknown species. Your biggest challenge here is that this setting should, theoretically, be about asking what the Krev are, but since it’s a also a sci-fi story (albeit indirectly), it also has to simultaneously answer “what is humanity”. Theoretically. But this ALSO has to be an actual RPG campaign, which doesn’t always follow literary rules. A hefty challenge, and VERY interesting. Can’t wait to see what else you have in store! Based on the descriptions, it seems like this game is more recent for the Krev. It seems strange that the setting has all of the KC races, but didn’t mention playable races taken from Krev fantasy. The only thing mentioned was the Fossil Fires. I suspect that this game is based off of a game made by the Smigli, and that’s why it has so many alien races, but fewer fantasy ones. I’d like to get more of a look into Krev fantasy races, but this lets us know a bit more about how the Krev see the other species in the Consortium, so that’s nice too. Gress getting frustrated that Taylor asked to roll for something he wasn’t supposed to roll for AND succeeded on that roll? Check. Gress caves in the tunnel conveniently after Taylor suggested a plan that would have skipped all of the dungeon? Check. It looks like I was right about the Krev not being prepared for human shenanigans. Here’s hoping that Taylor doesn’t skip a boss in a single turn. Or cut out the whole second phase (like I once did). Though, Cherise may be the one Gress REALLY has to look out for; Taylor’s the type to try to mess with the GM constantly, Cherise may be the kind to play along, until she find the one thing she can do to end a whole plot line at the start (i.e. giving the hag a cupcake. If you know, you know.)

DDDragoni

Gress named his DMPC *Juvrelor,* that is awful and I love it. I don't think I've seen this particular method of writing a dnd-style campaign before- firmly from an in-universe perspective, yet clearly able to see the players making rolls and teasing each other through their characters. I like it, very fun!

REDemon14

The moment I saw who was playing what, I knew these goofs were gonna be all antics XD A Resket NPC acting as a guide by the DM sounds like a good amount of the DnD's I've played. A good balance to the lunacy of the players. Gress and Taylor reversing species just opens the possibility of *so many* shenanigans! Very interesting for Quana to pick a magical Jaslip. Given the way she talked about ghosts in the sivkit bunker, she seems to be the type of player that wants to play as an ideal version of herself. Cherise just went "What sounds interesting" and chose to be a giant illegal worm. Story premise (in the CnF world and NoP) sounds quite interesting. A bunch of mythical beats long thought dead suddenly come back to life and start ribbing amuck and the only people who could slay them have been disbanded so you must rebuild...and all you have are these gaggle of idiots XD. I wonder what the CnF lore for humans suddenly appearing is. Iirc, pathfinder does actually have aliens from other realms, so maybe that? The little comments outside of the game (Not sure if it would truly be considered "fourth wall breaking" since *we* aren't being addressed) are so *real*. Many of those who played DnD know these moments. Now all you need is an entire chapter of the characters arguing about the rules. (jk don't do that) XD Looking forward to the antics of these dufuses! You're fantasy is looking pretty good so far!

un_pogaz

The interactions between Blessa and Juvrelor are Taylor's holy revenge on Gress. But I'm willing to bet that Gress finds attitude all gouffy. *5min later, Gress lost all his ontenance in his role* Urgh, me and my mouth. I think it's hard to judge your fantasy writing in general because it's a retranscription of a DnD party, which is very specific and different (all the additional players actions).

DreamEnvoy

"Mavai had been sent Kamta, on the coast," I think that's a typo. Should be "sent to Kamta"? That aside, for your first fantasy story this is a fun read. I like the little 4th wall-breaking roll reaction and that bit of railroading at the end.

John Benjamin Cate

Love the shenanigans. The players finding an easy bypass that the dm has to scramble to justify a reason it isn’t used is brilliant

Alicja

lol Taylor making fun fun of gress’s cute instincts

Lanker

Interesting that Gress is both controlling a PC and GMing, though I presume that Juvrelor is not going to live for long considering his choice of dialogue.

Swan

I love the slight 4th wall breaking, and how Gress's style of DMing seems to be "Fuck around and find out" (Have Mavai abandon Blessa due to the previous BS check) Looking forward to more of this (hope we get some certified DND moment's of someone rolling like 10 nat 20's or 1's in a row at some point)

Soldier Lsnake

Looks really like a dnd campaign

Mutedmirth

As someone who plays in several ttrps I love the dip to meta gaming comments and trying to stay in character with the GM hints such as rocks fall you all need to continue *together.*

mitsos_pr

Also, a lot of love from me as well SP:) Take care ❤️

pogman

Hello, Peak just dropped

mitsos_pr

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