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The Nature of Predators 2-88

🕑 Added 2024-11-19 12:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Some Lvm

Dang! I really though the Underscales were smarter than this, but they did something very stupid, and now the terrorists are going to win... Here is the question though: Is anyone going to verify this archive footage? I mean, if we the readers treat it as exposition, we have to assume it is true. But realistically, I would not put it past the Ghost Farsul to plant these files knowing they will be captured, in an attempt to start a war between the Consortium and the Sapient Coalition. Even with their new fleet, the Remnants' chances of winning are slim to non, but if there is another major foe in the fray, those chances suddenly go way up. And the KC does not even have to fight with, or coordinate with the Ghosts. They just have to be too stubborn or stupid, or disorganized from the Jaslip attacks to immediately surrender. They can put up enough of a fight to significantly weaken the SC, and while the Consortium can't win, they can most certainly open the door for the Remnants to stand a chance.

Space Paladin

❤️

Mr Mopp

The krev are going to be mortified

JValz

Freaking love your story SP. Such a well orchestrated plot, layers of character arcs interweaving and correlating. Nothing is random, there’s ample known and unknown causes and effects justifying situations. Friggin well done and THANK YOU!

Xilacnog

I wonder if Aulan is really an Underscales asset or an ex-Underscales agent. I wonder if the bomb that Cherise and Quana was actually meant to weaken the Consortium enough to let them start a civil war

Wesley Rigg

Loxel abridged 7 “After all the Sivkits did to save the Krev from the Federation’s chains, it was they who gave counsel to our conquerors and sounded the alarm to attack our expedition!” Loxsel howled

Jagger

I remember hearing about this, and I'm glad it was brought to light and a handful of those involved were prosecuted. A shame more involved weren't brought to justice. It would be nice to find documents discussing more nefarious schemes. There was the Clinton emails, the Hunter Biden laptop, and I'm sure a few others I can't recall at the moment. Still, it's rare anything ever happens to the big names and entities involved.

PhycoKrusk

It does reframe the Yulpa arriving at Aafa not as part of the plan, but as a panicked reaction to the Coalition having a reasonable amount of success at Talsk (Ghosts were willing to destroy their own cradle to get what they want; the most dangerous sort of enemy) and then cleaning house at Nishtal. As I said in a previous chapter, Kaisal's extreme aggression in helping the JIB was another wrench in the gears; I'm sure the Ghosts expected them to be aggressive, but did not correctly guess the target of their aggression. Their plan from the start wasn't a great one; it relied entirely on everything going perfectly, with every action being followed by a correctly predicted reaction. But who could predict Loxsel?

PhycoKrusk

Really, this does recast the sudden appearance of the Yulpa at Aafa. They didn't show up because they saw an opportunity, but because the Ghosts far the excellent progress that was made at Talsk and especially at Nishtal and panicked.

PhycoKrusk

Depends entirely to what degree the Reskets build their own ships and equipment, and to what degree the Underscales have compromised those facilities.

Sroni

The Consortium (and the ghosts) expected that the SC will be divided on the defense of Aafa and Talsk. The aim was not the glassing of the plantes, but the destruction of a large part of the SC fleet, and sowing division between the SC members. This attack, in turn, would have presented an opportunity for the Ghosts to attack, "liberating" herbivore worlds from human oppression, while then the Krev could swoop in and save the humans. With the status quo restored, both the Federation and the Consortium could have went on, having an eternal enemy again.

Roscuro

It's pretty much what I expected, however, I wasn't expecting them to have their fingers in every inch of every pie.

Roscuro

I mean, the Panama Papers happened. Then the person who put them together got blown up.

Gumcel

But why would the humans call themselves humans to begin with? Anyways, cool twist, gives me an excuse to repost my copypasta: I’m not crazy. I AM NOT CRAZY. I know he swapped the numbers! 15-A. One after the sivkits, as if I could ever make such a mistake, never NEVER! I just couldn’t prove it, they covered their tracks, they got that idiot at the Underscales to lie for them. You think this is something? You think this is bad? This? This obor enterprise? They’ve done worse. That ship, you’re telling me that they hailed them and just forgot to mention it? No, they orchestrated it, The Consortium! They took advantage of refugees for decades! And I stood up for them! And I shouldn’t have. Took them into my alliance! What was I thinking? They’ll never change, they’ll never change. Ever since The Consortium was formed, always the same! Couldn’t keep their claws off the puppet strings. Oh but not our consortium, couldn’t be our precious consortium. Stealing them blind! And they get to lead an interplanetary alliance? What a sick joke! I should’ve stopped them when I had the chance! …And you, you have to stop them! You…

Space Paladin

There’s definitely a ton of commonalities between the Federation and the Consortium! Perhaps that’s why they could work together despite being enemies…they shared one thing that superseded the rest 😅 And yes, the ghosts’ plan was to get everyone to turn on humanity since it would seem we were playing our friends, orchestrating the attack all along…something something predator!

Space Paladin

I’m glad that you enjoyed the big reveal! It puts a lot into perspective 😅

Jagger

If only it were this easy to uncover current age government corruption. Just find a big document confessing to everything. Though even when we do find evidence everyone just gasps, shrugs, then goes about their business.

Heroman3003

Ahh, there it is, the full truth. It's gonna take a bit for it all to sink in for me yet, but there are a lot of elements that were predicted and some that weren't. But, in the end, turns out the Consortium did know! They knew all along! So it appears the Underscales and the Ghosts are the two enemies, who worked together at some point but fundamentally are not the same. It's possible that they can be dealt with one by one, divided or that they'll unite by the end, though I kinda doubt the latter. It's interesting to hear that the Ghosts were the ones on the defensive during their contact and negotiation. It's fascinating that they're really the weak one, while the Underscales are the powerhouse, even being behind their forces. A very ironic mirror of the Archives and the Shadow Caste, with farsul also being a sidekick there. The war was artificial in order to specifically tear apart SC and get humanity hated by their former allies, before being destroyed! Yes! At least that part remains true! I was right about something! Muahahaha The fact that the Ghosts are aware of multiple arks is concerning. It almost sounds like they intercepted at least one other ark, and if so... The fate of that bunch of humans is ironically worse than that of most of Earth. RIP. And to the less reveal and more personal parts of the chapter... It's painful to see both Gress' and Taylor's reactions to it all. Gress, because all his worst fears about the evil of Consortium he faithfully served are being confirmed, Taylor because it's like, what, third? layer of 'my suffering was pointless' to his already depressing history. They'll need to find someone to lean on, even if they do have each other. Speaking of Lecca, though... There is one good way to get her out. If she were to visit Tellus and Loxsel's play.... Although if severing of ties is immediate, it might not be viable. Between the civil war in the Consortium and both of Tellus/Tinsas claimants going against Consortium itself, the travel might be restricted. Though... Peak, worst, horriblest irony would be if Gress the Hostage Negotiator had to negotiate his own daughter back... Oh god is that where this was going all along?! I do also like reactions present from Tassi's and Meier's arcs. This does feel like the point where the three arcs, Tassi, Taylor and Meier, all converge and stand united in the new goal. They'll likely all go their own ways on what they need to do after it, but this is a great moment. The enemies are finally known and clear. All that's left is to unite our allies, bolster our forces and bring to justice those that sought to create fear and suffering to further their own influence. A small theory before I end off... Ghosts mentioned that they had to strip a lot of 'remote override' kinda things out of Consortium ships. There is a civil war in the Consortium right now. With one side being a mix of ex-Consortium and Arxur military... And if they don't know about those backdoors or didn't remove them... That might be a recipe for disaster for Radai's Rebellion. Either way, great chapter and the veil of mystery has been lifted. We already were in the endgame, but now it truly feels like we're on the final stretch. Can't wait to see all this resolved! Thanks for your wonderful writing, SP!

A B

"Their concern for us makes me feel all fuzzy." 😆

jervictor jer

The idea was for what I get to frame the Humans from the Arks as the main instigators of the attack, this way the Farsul tough they could go to all the hervivores inside the SC and said that it was all a long ruse to kill them all, and that the refugees are the true humankind, to either make them join the remenats or atleast make them abandon the SC and weakinging humankind. about Radai, well those attacks were ordered by the council, that as far as we know they weren't in the conspiracy, bassically the council trusted the Underscales to be their eyes and ears, but the Underscales not wanting to lose power and control fed the council wrong information to make them complacent or act as expected, so yeah, if anything letting Radai do the attacks show that until very recently the Underscales had no big power... and all the actions were done by the council that was being fed very wrong and very useless information, well until the council got bombed and now the Underscales are free to do all they want are free to do all they wish.

Aerowarrier

Well I was kind of right from the beginning. Had a feeling the Underscales were working with the Feds in one way or another. Didn’t expect it to be that recent of a development though, I’ll admit that

Elliott

If their plan was JUST to cripple the SC in these attacks why not go after the Yotul or worlds more critical? They expected the defense to cripple their fleet, but also didn't? What would the goal be then? Destroy planets that served no use to the SC and take out a handful of ships the SC sent to defend them before going whoospies and peacing out? My point is given a full set of info even their expected outcome seems iffy to me. Best case scenario in their minds they destroy a few of our ships as we abandon these old Fed worlds, destroy those Fed worlds, leave, and then?

Elliott

Why would the Underscales allow the attacks to be on the now defenseless Federation worlds they chose to target? Maybe I'm just confused on what the they knew based on their conversations with the Farsul because if they had a full picture I don't think it makes sense, it would've been smarter in this case NOT to attack at all and instead arm the Farsul further instead of letting Radai do any major attacks.

EliasArt2Life

I suppose it’s a blessing, then, that the Ark ships were sent out with the intent of never being found. It’s possible, but it would be a shot in the dark endless void of space. Given that the Ghosts were preparing for war, they probably wouldn’t have had the resources to allocate to a thorough search. Hopefully…

PhycoKrusk

I don't like the implication of this recording. There was more than one ark, after all, and having found one surviving on Tinsas, it would irresponsible to assume that the Ghosts haven't spent time looking for the others. Suppose that they've found one. If they reveal that, would the UN still refuse to negotiate with terrorists?

TheBlack2007

Krakotl UN Peacekeeper and Extermination Fleet child soldier raised by a human.

TheDudeAbides

Who is Cala again? I'm curious but I won't have time to go back and read the previous few chapters again until tomorrow

TheDudeAbides

Well we can definitely narrow it down to after the Jaslip homeworld was destroyed and before Taylor knocked out gress at least.

Bow-Tied Engineer

Here's to hoping for a revolt. The first payloads fired at the Krev should be a few trillion datacards with those videos on them.

Ron1990

Woah, what a chapter! So many things fall in place. I like it... no, I love it very much.

EliasArt2Life

Ah! Just as I was getting worried that the story might be getting a bit predictable, Space Paladin throws THIS curveball at us! I don’t know if revealing that we know this information is smart; I doubt that the Consortium gave the Ghosts ALL of their fleet power, and they probably have a number of backup fleets. That being said, given the Shield representatives, I doubt we can keep it secret for long. I think that, aside from the obvious, one BIG blow to the Consortium is how the Ghosts predicted that they’d try to stop their attack of Earth, and already removed the Consortium’s remote control. THAT above all else might force them to attack the Ghosts too. Ironically, the part of the Ghosts’ plan that worked the least was their attempt to cause the SC to dissolve. Oh, there were high tensions, to be sure, but the SC was managing to hold together in spite of that. This recording has just wiped out what dissent remained. I guess that’s just a case of the Ghosts being so caught up in their own propaganda that they’ve fallen for it, hook, line, and sinker. They couldn’t comprehend humans working so hard to protect non-affiliated species or their allies having enough evidence of humanity’s good will to forgive them for what a few thousand had a hand in. Yeah, it’s time for war with the Consortium, one way or another. Wide spread manipulation, willing collusion with our enemies, and allowing the Ark humans to suffer to maintain their control. There’s no more possibility for actual diplomacy; what diplomacy there was to begin with was a farce. Whether or not they like humans, their actions have been clear acts of war. The fact they did it with a full understanding of what they were doing, and attempted to hide it, is what makes diplomacy impossible at the moment. Well, time to sot back and watch what happens next. I suspect humanity will be reminding the galaxy how they beat the Kolshians despite only being on the Galactic Stage for under a year.

DDDragoni

God damn bastards. So much suffering. So much death. Just to maintain the grip on power.

Leon Wolf

“I don’t understand why! Is it really just about the truth now giving the Krev a reason to stay in power?” I think you meant "not giving" here

Byron Ritchie

Oh man I feel like the SC is about to heavily increase their support for the jaslips and radai’s forces both for practical reasons and moral reasons and also our of pure spite

Mark Baculna

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Th3pineapple _

Yeah I'm glad I stuck it through, I'm very invested in how things will go from here.

James

I feel bad for SP because people had your same opinion and thought it was just bad writing when SP had a purpose for them much later in the story.

Alekss Žukovskis

how unfortunate that Tailor is already present on Tellus and has broken the alliance with the wider humanity. the hairdo was just forshadowing.

Th3pineapple _

You know this makes a lot of earlier plot points so much better, there was so much seeming stupidity that it felt like someone was just trying to make a conflict out of nothing and it turns out someone was. Malevolence makes so much more sense than ignorance/stupidity.

DreamEnvoy

I have to wonder how long ago was this interaction between the GF and the KC. When in the past 25 years did the KC learn the truth? "The scaly mammal nodded in Terran fashion. “Yes. That has always been what they cared about. Authoritarians will do anything to maintain their stranglehold, and that’s…easier when the people are pacified. When they believe it’s for their own good.”" KC and Federation both. Federation by perpetuating the fear of the Hunger, KC perpetuating the fear of the Federation. Not too different from the empire that came before as well. Parallels galore. "We agreed to leave their people alone, and they, in turn, would provide us with a fleet." Well that explains what happened at Grenalka... "With humanity helping planetary attacks, their precious alliance would disintegrate. We could win back the herbivores, when they saw their ‘tame’ predators for the raiders they are!" So their plan was to get the SC to disband once it was discovered humanity was on both sides? I hope I'm understanding that correctly. I absolutely love how NoP2 has come full circle. It started with a war between SC and KC via ignorance, and now it's turning into another SC-KC war via newfound knowledge.

REDemon14

So the Krev Consortium (or at least the Underscales) knew all this time. All of the suffering of the Tellish, all the labor and lost childhoods, all the screwed up development that their youth underwent; it was all for nothing. Damn The KC only care for power, just like how the Shadow Kolshians could have saved the prey from the Arxur. All the pain and agony the Orion arm has experienced, all because someone wanted power. We of course knew the KC public had no idea the Tellish/humans were enemies of the Federation. Hopefully the SC, Jaslip, and Arxur will remember that when they take actions. I do wonder if Radai actually knows about this. Taylor ponders if Radai saw something related to this and that’s why he went full rebel. If that is the case, Gress has been sitting on this revelation since around 2156, when Bauldan gave him the data. The truth was so close to you, Gress. The irony, that the Ancient Sivkit protected the Krev and the other races in that space from the Federation, only for the KC to willingly help the Ghost Feds. Tragic. At least this revelation might bring the Sivkits and the Tellish/humans closer. So the KC made the ships! That explains the numbers. 300,000 ships being built over the course of possible decades is completely feasible. The KC itself has a drone fleet of a million. Who knows how large the fleet of the Remnants could actually be? Add on to the fact that there are ships attacking Remnant space right now and the SC runs the risk of being overrun if those ships turn on them. The worsening plight of the Jaslips was also the brainchild of the Ghost Farsul and Underscales. Damn, the Underscales have way too much pull in the KC government. That entire war that started with the Sivkits fleet being destroyed was all planned. Intended to make the Humans look bad. And the worst part, *It almost worked!* Remember how some of the SC members reacted when it was revealed humans were attacking SC space. Korajan walked out for a short time and Tassi had to take a break. If it wasn’t for Meier’s speech, the Ghost Farsul’s plan would have largely succeeded! The final part of the plan was to make humanity look so foul that the Ghost Feds would have taken the herbivores back and then wipeout humanity. All this work just to exterminate one species. The gasps from the Assembly really make me think how much the xenos have changed in their view of Humanity. There was once a time where some of the members took action to wipe out humanity or were indifferent to their survival, now they are horrified that someone would try to turn them on their human friends. Their concern for us makes me feel all fuzzy. Now everyone is up in arms, even the Sivkit! Hell, even the Shield (or at least the Duerten) have picked the side of the SC. Now I understand why the Farsul tried so very desperately to keep this data out of Human hands. All their best laid plans are about to crumble, all because some primates wanted to make friends. Oh yeah, Lecca and Gress’ cira ex. Yeah, getting them to Tinsas will be a bit difficult if they declare war on the KC first. Just hold off for just a bit, huh guys? If the SC can somehow broadcast this recording to the populace of the KC, they will likely outright rebel against any forces of government and the KC could be crippled, if not outright destroyed. So many smalling points of NoP 2 make so much sense now Looking forward to the fallout of this reveal! Keep up the good work!

Kingarthur

Well looks like they got the enemies they asked for now

Swan

Getting Gress's family out is gonna be really interesting, and really dangerous (Maybe Cala and her squad will come along as "Diplomatic guards", in case things go south?)


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