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The Nature of Predators 2-73

🕑 Added 2024-09-23 11:00:15 +0000 UTC

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Byron Ritchie

It was in a g1 episode

kabhes

Where in MLP were racist penguins?

Aerowarrier

He never got to issue his complaint, that’s the entire problem. Unless she silenced whoever he told as well I suppose. But he likely would’ve been planning to go straight to the UN, not American authorities, since he’s smart and paranoid enough to not trust anyone in her government to actually care

PassengerNo

Sideswims instead of sidewalks. I didn't make that connection until I read your comment.

PhycoKrusk

They wouldn't have to report him; Jones would know exactly who any complaint had come from, and that's part of the problem. The actual scope of her control far exceeds her office.

Aerowarrier

That wouldn’t stop him from reporting Jones to human authorities though. She silenced him somehow, and he’s really only known by two other people who both helped Jones blackmail Tassi, so I’m hesitant to say they would care if he disappeared. Hell, they probably reported his plans to her in the first place

PhycoKrusk

@Vee I have to admit I am getting really interested in this line of thought. For as much as Sivkits eat (just look at the mountain of sugar Loxsel ate in the form of oranges), they have never been described as rotund or even as suffering from any of the symptoms of overeating. This strongly suggests that they eat as much as they do in order to get enough nutrients, because what they _are_ eating does not have high bioavailability.

Xilacnog

Jones may be disliked by most people but she got what she wanted from Tassi. A UN led by Elias, Zhao and Jones would have the run of the galaxy.

PhycoKrusk

She grew up in a militarily neutral country, worked for as militarily neutral government, and had a militarily neutral job where she did militarily neutral things. It would seem par for the course to me that she assumes that when things don't get done, it's because people simply didn't do them, rather than because some third party prevented them from doing it.

PhycoKrusk

Too messy to have him killed; he's got a high enough profile that it would be immediately investigated. But he's not so high profile that the UN can't function without him. Why kill him when it's easier, faster, and less noticeable to simply have his assignment changed to something where he doesn't have contact with alien diplomats?

PhycoKrusk

Contrary to popular belief, murder is not the first resort of an intelligence apparatus when it comes to dealing with governmentally significant persons: It's messy, inconvenient, and requires you to deal with other individuals who start to ask questions, and that only works so well in a large bureaucracy like the United Nations, because there will be an abundance of individuals you will try to silence who will not keep quiet because their desire to preserve their health is outpaced by their desire to spite and destroy you. Dustin is significant but unimportant: He is well known because if his time in first contact with the Bissems, but the job he does is not essential to the continued operation of the bureaucracy. Jones doesn't need to have him killed; she just needs to make a phone call and what do you know? His assignment was changed and now he's somewhere else where he doesn't have contact with foreign diplomats. Weird, right? An intelligence apparatus only resorts to the murder of a governmentally significant individual when that individual either is or will soon cause problems for the apparatus, and the apparatus doesn't know how else to stop them (i.e. reassignments, frame ups, and reputational damages aren't working). It's after character assassination has failed that regular assassination is pursued.

Aerowarrier

Reaaaallllllyyyyy worried about Dustin. He’s definitely being held somewhere, assuming he isn’t buried in a shallow grave or floating into a sun. Tho I really wouldn’t be surprised if Jones had him killed…

PhycoKrusk

Unfortunately, it doesn't seem to have helped them very much.

Aerowarrier

To be fair Tassi, the Sivkits had the word of a single, mostly crazy politician about where that group was and what they were doing. It’s understandable that they would be very hesitant to actually believe him

Space Paladin

Thank you for the support ❤️ I hope you continue to enjoy my stories!

TheBlack2007

If she hurt Dustin, Callsi will flail her alive.

Roscuro

The term neuraholic took me a while to grasp, even after reading that the drink is neurotoxin instead of alcohol. Very fun word.

JaxonJak

*Sigh* Tassi, I like you. Really, I do. But I have trust issues concerning people that are, at least a bit, overly positive. Imma keep my eye on you.

Emmanuel Morín

Just so you know spacepaladin, I really like your stories AND altough it's not much I gladly pay to support you in Patrón. Greetings from México PS: I now like to image Loxsel getting airlocked among us style

DemonVee

Perhaps their backs aren't truly "broken" in the same way as the Venlil, just malformed in growth due to edited genes blocking vital nutrients in development. Kinda how axolotls are just missing certain chemicals to develop like other salamanders. They could be missing something their bodies should have otherwise naturally produced on their own, but now can't and their instincts now what is missing. On the other hand, before the Feds the sivkits were exsisting under then "Farmdom" So the consumption of food has always been intergral to their identity. Just in a sustainable way.

Gumcel

Eating the algae. They got over their crippling fear of water. Godamnit I was wrong.😔

EliasArt2Life

It’s nice to get a short, more lighthearted chapter this week! I hope we get some more of this. Good to see the Sivkits being beneficial, rather than detrimental, to the ecosystem for a change. I’m a little worried about the Checkov’s gun in the room; what’s going to happen when they find out that the Farsul, who they’ve been allowing to stay on their planet, are the same species that attacked them? I also find it strange that Tassi jumps to thinking that Dustin never made the complaint, rather than the “Jones sabotaged the lines of communication” theory that more people jumped to. Is it referencing Tassi’s trouble trusting others, or hinting that what actually happened is far less straightforward and simple?

CountryClub

What did Jones do to Dustin... Jones I swear to god if you killed my boy because he tried to expose you I'll cry 😭

Guardian

I -- i can dig a Mister Roger's pseudo-'cult'.

REDemon14

Good point

PhycoKrusk

Mr Rogers is relevant in every universe; he is a constant. Now, of course, I've convinced myself there is a small but tightly knit group of xenos who are doing what they can to make the galaxy a better place because "that predator in the cardigan" was so certain that they could.

PhycoKrusk

@RED It wouldn't really even be "clueless" in that case; if entering into a circumstance where you are about to suffocate, the brain will actually attempt to override your body to get you out of that circumstance. Either they are able to preempt the override, or the override is not there anymore.

Guardian

"Even in a story as grisly as that, there were helpers." Not sure if Mister Roger's is still considered relevant in our beloved narrative, but I see what you did there SP. Thumbs up.

NextMan

I’ll bet he was the “good cop” to Haliska and Nulia’s “bad cop” on behalf of Jones, for whom all three are on the payroll. I guarantee they are all her agents.

DDDragoni

Sivkits getting ABSOLUTELY lost in the sauce

Apogee

I am starting wonder if breaking the skivkits backs wasn’t the only thing they did to them genetically. Mabey they removed an inhibitor, so they feel hungry all the time despite how full they are, or even a mistake where the genetic changes caused a nutrient deficiency where their bodies can’t make it themselves anymore. Culture has a big effect on behavior yes but with the skivkits it seems to be more than just that.

Shajenko

It's a Bissem Christmas, Charlie Brown!

Shajenko

"You just need to learn how to roll with the punches, or flipper slaps in your case. " Now I want a scene with a Bissem slap fight.

REDemon14

God, if your reading of the drowning situation is right, then the Sivkits are more clueless than I thought. XD

PhycoKrusk

Wouldn't help. They aren't drowning because they're falling out of boats. They're drowning because they row out to the algae blooms, shove their heads in the water to eat and just don't ever come up again. That's my reading, at least. Which also implies that their locust-like behavior is not strictly social, but is psychological or even physiological, as you suggest.

Kevo

They replaced him with a more cooperative AI

Cheesy Power

I really like the reveal that Tassi’s love of aliens had reached the point of being unhealthy- it really puts her spiral into a whole new light. And addressing it by seeking out one of those old colleagues and actually helping them out is probably going to be allegory for her taking a healthier approach now- and how everyone in the galaxy really needs to take a look at themselves and fix their unhealthy habits.

Swan

I feel like Klasso's skills might come in use again soon, considering the SC will want to find those ghost Farsul, arks, etc. once the current clusterfuck is dealt with. I feel more sorry for that one guy researching artificial meat production, or some other thing that the SC has already mastered. Also, do Skivits just like orange things? (Skivit vampires on Skalga story when?)

Assailant

Glad to see that some of Tassi’s optimism and hope is still there, even when she’s not *consciously* aware of it. She may not believe there’s much hope, but she’s still encouraging and optimistic to her friend. I see racism is a universal concept. Goodie. Not that that was ever in doubt. The Sivkit drowning themselves is something I never thought about, but is absolutely something they’d do. Little goobers. Side swims. Interesting. A much more practical response to their diminished walking ability than what I’d considered. Glad to see you got over this speed bump, SP. Sorry for suggesting it. It turned out well though, if that’s any consolation. Keep up the good work!

Anthony Mears

this is why I think something happened to him. it's not in his nature to just let that slide. my hope is he's locked up somewhere and not in a cement pylon.

DreamEnvoy

Ah memlifin. With that and Skalgan alchohol in mind, I have to wonder if there's ANY alien hard drink humans can handle. “Bringing the Sivkits here was ingenious, Tassi. Turns out they have a taste for all of that algae that’s gotten us into a doom cycle,” We were right! Anyways, great chapter as always. Having certain professions and skills become obsolite from alien first contact was something I never really considered before.

REDemon14

Welcome back, Main story SP :) Tassi vacation chapter, poor thing needed it. Someone should put a pool at where ever the Bissem are staying on Earth. Some of the locals don't seem too happy about the aliens. New insult unlocked; long-ears. Klasso to the rescue. Acting as a pengu bouncer for Tassi. Fugu for swim-birds where we also learn Tassi is a light-weight. "The primates shouldn't be too keen on ordering death in a bottle. " That's an uphill battle itself, Tassi. Someone should give the Sivkits floaties. Like what we give out children XD I still think something is going on with the sivkit diet. Like something is missing that's making them so locust like. Klasso may think his skills are obsolete, but the field of science actually quite fickle. New discoveries and methodologies are discovered almost daily. You just need to learn how to roll with the punches, or flipper slaps in your case. Also, there are still uncharted stars and nebula out there. Some may even have life. The SC could use someone like him to search for such signals. Tassi is slowly getting some of her optimism back. Here's hoping she can rebound fully from this. I'm getting rather worried for Dustin now. Hope he's ok.

Byron Ritchie

Never thought my little pony and nature of predators would have racist penguins as a commonality Good chapter btw

Byron Ritchie

I presume he’s been having a long talk with nulia and Haliska about their treatment of tassi

AnonymousDoge

What the hell happened to Dustin? I don't see anyone talking about it but the dude has been missing since Tassi brought up the blackmail to him.

Space Paladin

Thank you!

Logos

> long as they show you they’re nice side. Small correction, that they're should be their. That said, nice chapter. These are some of my favorite chapters of this story. No battles, no trauma dumping, just aliens being dudes. I also really love the Aliens exploring Earth chapters. My favorite side story you've done is of the Harchen reporter covering Earth.

Sci-fi reader

I have always enjoyed these every man POV stories. People’s lives go on while things of galactic scale happen, but events in an every man’s life can be just as interesting, and in the long term just as important. Looking at you Justin’s mom and Cara’s dad.

Willy

Good chapter as usually, Love SP

John Benjamin Cate

It was so much fun to see Tassi meet an old colleague. A little reminder of the scale of everything, and seeing how everyone has things going on.

RaphaelFrog

At least Sivkit's eternal hunger and locust mind set is being used in good way💀 Also welcome back from the break! I'm looking forward to see next chapters >:)

Heroman3003

This is such a great chapter. I am so happy to see Tassi in her element, among her people, struggling to fit back in. But also getting proper opportunities to just be herself. Seeing Ivrana be changed by the alien arrivals in real time is fascinating. I do love all the lore tidbits, from the guts bars, to the sivkits struggling with the swimming, to humans trying to eat the alien fugu, to all the tidbits about FAI from Klasso... It's wonderful little glimpse at what Bissem are about. There is strong sense of 'normality' to their way of life too, despite how alien it seems to us the readers. I like that. Also, this chapter does seem to set up some good mystery points. Like what happened with Dustin trying to report Jones' interference and how well will Tassi's attempt at returning to SC politics go. Seeing her realize that she needed to keep her optimistic outlook intentionally, in order to use it to make a better world, is honestly a great direction for her character arc. Her just becoming bitter and cynical would have been an easy way out, but this feels a lot more compelling and enjoyable to see happen. Great work on the chapter, as usual!

Danny Luca

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