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The Nature of Predators - The New Arxur (8/10)

🕑 Added 2024-09-21 11:00:08 +0000 UTC

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REDemon14

"If I had a nickel for everything SP broke the hip of a female Human sniper in an Arxur side story, I'd have two nickels. Which isn't a lot, but it's weird that it happened twice. "

kabhes

Both times a hip too.

Aerowarrier

Given how she talked, there’s probably more human mercs employed by those two. Hopefully she can contact them and tell them it’s time to move on before hit squads are sent after the rest of them

Maelstrom

I was seriously like, “oh shit, he didn’t!” when Hossat said the camp wouldn’t trouble them anymore. I suddenly knew he wasn’t just clutching to keep his poison vials inside and hidden when he got his face dunked in. Well played, SP.

Sci-fi reader

Depends. Up a cliff face? Sure. Goats a great. Get a goat to repeal down from a helicopter or climb up a rope or cargo net? Not so much.

DemonVee

Maybe that's her play? No Betterment Arxur would come to her rescue, but her team... It’s also a way to bloat the legend, each of their kills adding up.

DemonVee

Humans do have really powerful noses, they poke out of our faces for a reason. The thing is, from what I understand is that most of the nerves don't connect to concious parts of the brain. So "you" might not smell anything, but your subconscious does. It's often the reason why some report getting an eerie feeling of a presence when there is a intruder in their house, or some animal hiding near by.

Stueymon

I guessed they were going to be human a few chapters back. Better endurance and climbing ability rather made it obvious. Every conflict has a private military involved at some point. Why get paid grunt wages when you can make bank for abandoning principles?

EliasArt2Life

So the Sniper WAS a human, not a Nevok. Too bad. I was hoping for a Nevok to COMPLETELY smash the Arxur’s prejudices, but I admit that a human was more likely, aside from the foreshadowing of Hossat’s climbing abilities. “I know they’re clever and reckless, but that strong? That proficient in firearms? No! We have to have…something that makes us superior.” Well, you guys are much stronger than us in most ways, you have heightened senses of smell, where our noses can’t even out perform most of the herbivores, you are nocturnal, where we need technology (that leaves us vulnerable to flashes of light) to see in the dark, you have tails that act as a 5th striking limb, deadly teeth and claws, and you have tough scales protecting you. Honestly, the Arxur are physically superior to humans in most ways. But we’ve always been faced with threats that were better equipped and stronger than us, so we’ve learned how to maximize our few strengths, create new strengths through technology, and minimize our weaknesses. We aren’t superior, just different, and good at leveraging that difference. Also, Zefriss’ reaction was GREAT! So, former military personnel turned mercenary. That’s the sad cost of peace; those who made their living from violence (necessary or not) often have to adapt. And if they can’t adapt, they usually start disrupting that peace. Hossat’s actions… I morbidly impressed by his effectiveness and efficiency. A whole camp taken out with just a few vials of neurotoxin. Impressed AND disturbed. Poisoning’s a rough way to go. I hope that (once it set in) it was relatively painless and quick.

DemonVee

I don't think she's that much of a risk now, the team would only be fools not understanding that they're holding all the cards here. She's an immobilzed Human with a broken hip. In a region that culls the infirmed, that lacks necessary medical facilities and already looks down on her species by default. On top of that she's a Betterment secret that risks harming their cause if known to the public, a risk that can no longer do her job. The few people who knew her identify are mostly dead by Hossat's hands, and if others can tracker they're more likely to want her dead to remove a loose end. With that, she has to know that her best chances of getting of Wriss without dying to her injuries or getting finshed of by an Arxur is through the team transporting her back to collective territory and under Isif's custody. So bombs, screams or any other ways to get her attention are probably off the table.

arthur D. gonzalez-martin

didnt the russians do that with the blowing of that dam

Elliott

That intel and propaganda is NOT worth getting outed to by the SC, or losing your life over. Without her they don't have much of an advantage as they've apparently thrown everything into an assault on Isif. Any advantage her life has is vastly overshadowed by the risk and disadvantages of keeping her alive.

Elliott

You fail to realize how great a risk she poses. Imagine she screams at an enemy checkpoint, detonated a hidden bomb while meeting Isif, has a tracker on her. Then even if they try to blackmail the UN, she could claim they're lying and give the SC just cause to intervene, spill the news about the war to them, assuming they kill her then it looks like the collective just killed a random human, don't kill her or let her talk and it looks like the Collective is holding one hostage. You have to think of the optics this could give and be spun by parties like Jones. Enemy Intel isn't valuable enough to put your entire planet at risk.

Gumcel

Ok I disagree with those saying that it’s not worth it to bring her back. She has potential usefulness as a propaganda tool, has intel on the enemy and has been shown to be exceedingly competent in her job. The Collective is more prosperous and have her captive, betrayal is an easy choice. She has no loyalty to Ilthiss and after switching sides any hope of returning to Ilthiss evaporates. She has absolutely no motive to betray them and return to Ithiss.

Gumcel

“Obviously, I know that! That’s why Ilthiss paid us in raw minerals, as well as cultural artifacts. Ancient art and relics from Wriss are, or will be, invaluable to many interested buyers. I can tell you where they are. I haven’t shipped them home yet.” “Us” implies that they’ve hired an entire mercenary company, rather than just one individual. “I reclined on the seat, snorting; Isif would agree with me on that matter, which was a large part of why I followed him.” :arxur_clueless:

Sci-fi reader

You mean like IBM, Coca-Cola, Ford, General Motors, Westinghouse, and Kraft?

erickjosemolina

Lo sospeche desde un principio

Conure King!

Earth governments borderline do that in the modern era, irl.

DDDragoni

Humans may be good climbers, but we've got nothing on Goat Legs

Jagger

I was going to say the same thing about Arxur advantages. I've always pictured them as fairly muscular bipedal crocodiles, so I'm sure they'd excel in bursts of strength and a slower metabolism. We'd probably beat them in the endurance department, but endurance doesn't count for much if you're already stuck in the jaws of a large muscular reptile.

Sci-fi reader

Not much leverage. "Ms Brenner? Why she is a known fugitive for tax evasion, and was never employed by the government." In fact, her employer, Booz Allen Inc, fired her months ago. We are free nation. People are welcome to come and go. Booz Allen? We contract out our administrative and IT support work to them, as we have for over century. Nothing to see. Hey, want some free pagers and walkie talkies?

Sci-fi reader

CIA has got to CIA.

Sci-fi reader

Good old Blackwater, I mean Xe, I mean Academi, I mean Constellis. Or maybe just good old Booz Allen.

Pierre Florendo

Operation Paperclip?

DreamEnvoy

"surprising our Arxur characters more than the readers." Most of the readers that is. "It didn’t make sense that Ilthiss would hire a “leaf-licking” simian, or that a Terran would join forces with Betterment." Which is why I'm among the few who are somewhat surprised. I would think Ilthiss would have too much pride to hire human mercenaries. Honestly a bit disappointed the reason she accepted the job is so simple. No sympathy for Betterment or anything. Just killing for the money. A mercenary with mercenary reasons. Hossat poisoning blood while being bloodboarded was cool, though. I was curious how our group would handle the return trip.

BiasMushroom721

Lets look at it another way. She willingly works with nazis. Shes a nazi. She actively sabatoged the people fighting the Nazis. She did such a good job she improved the Nazis position. She helped the nazis kill more people. She doesnt even care. Shes not worth it. Shes a nazi

Alekss Žukovskis

what about that intel? plus, no one knows yet, that the legendary loyalist Sefturna Sniper has just become a double agent. She is extremely useful in my eyes.

Alekss Žukovskis

how self-aware XD

Alekss Žukovskis

with Jones meddling? pick a target your size. optics mean nothing to lizards.

Alekss Žukovskis

did i just read that right? orbital dropped toxin capsules?

REDemon14

Hysran never ceases to make me smile! And the sniper is *drum roll* A HUMAN! Who else was gonna put their nose in someone else's business? XD You are *different* Zefriss. You have natural weapons that are good for hunting and self-defense. Claws, fangs, denser muscles. We have tools, tactics, and a natural sense of projectiles. Casey: Good Morning! Raza: Uhh, morning? Casey: Sus! Casey putting that stamina to good use. However, Hossat's got them mountain goat legs! Military contractors, of course. I do find out sad that Siffy wouldn't take human aid while the anti-social arxur would. I personally think taking her alive is a good idea. She has a broken hip, meaning she ain't going anywhere, Betterment arxur don't like wounded "allies" (I don't know if they'd just kill her, but still), she has an economic incentive to joining Isif now. With her injury, she isn't going to be fighting, which is all she has to offer Betterment, but with Isif she can sell him Intel, she would have gotten a good bit with her time fighting for Betterment and she doesn't need to be able bodied to share it. Hossat, you sneaky hare! Guess he really did have enough toxin to kill dozens of grown Arxur. "No one deserves such a fate." Most of me agrees, but part of me has a kind of schadenfreude when objectively evil people meet less than peaceful fates. (What does that say about me? ○_○) I do wonder how the whole tank situation is going back on Isif's end. Guess we'll figure out next chapter :) PS: Why do you keep breaking the bones of female snipers in arxur side stories? Has a female sniper wronged you like the birds?

Alekss Žukovskis

yup thats a human. and damn hysran just striding up to her and tossing her down was cold AF.

un_pogaz

>We have to have…something that makes us superior.” “Superior”, you're looking for the wrong thing Zefriss, you are different. You're bigger, stronger, you have claws, bone-shattering jaw strength and an incredible sense of smell. Ah, and your scales protect you from scratches far more than our soft skin, so brambles and nettles are no problem for you. But more subtly, your solitary, ambush-predator origin certainly makes you much better natural snipers than the rest of us, you just need training and practice. >“Don’t worry about that camp,” Hossat said with a dark chuckle. “They’re well taken care of.” ... oh son of a bitch, he emptied poison into the pot. Smart. Well, it was a human mercenary and there was absolutely nothing ideological about it, which is a good thing considering how much worse it could have been. Even if she's absolutely unscrupulous and too easy to buy, you can't trust her for long. Raza's reluctance to use poison is commendable, but war is ugly. Poisoning a water supply that could be used by civilians is truly immoral, but if you're sure it will only be used by enemy soldiers... why not. Ah and Hossat is the Goat.

BiasMushroom721

I love how we humans understand we aint worth the trouble

Elliott

Exactly, not only could she give away their position, but even assuming they get home, what's from stopping her from claiming victim on camera? That'd give the SC justification, however flimsy, to act. There are just so many scenarios this goes wrong, and most of the rewards from making those risks could be gotten still by just executing her. It's incredibly stupid.

Anthony Mears

contractors never change

Ndreda

Not sure if this is already fixed but there is a small typo "roundedthe corner" missing one space. Edit. I did say the sniper is a soldier of fortune

Elliott

I'm not typically the merciless ruthless realist, but keeping her as alive is way too much of a risk. That's basically putting your life into the hands of a former enemy. Not just that but it sounds like they're going to take her straight to Isif, which is also largely a bad idea. Kill her, recover evidence and her body, use it as leverage against Earth anyways since she's not much more useful alive as a political tool as she is a liability.

BiasMushroom721

Ugh, I would have just shot her and been done with it. Shes bad news and not worththe risk

Dookus Maximus

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