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The Nature of Predators - Krev Exchange Program (7/7)

🕑 Added 2024-08-21 11:00:09 +0000 UTC

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pogman

Before starting this story I thought it would about Krev who see us as cute animals seeing our dark side for the first time, like Quana seeing Cherise's expression. And, while reading it I was probably hoping that Flevi would finally stop seeing Indrek as cute or an animal and we did kinda get that in the very end. Overall the story was not entirely what I was hoping but it was well written the last chapter was VERY good. I loved all the Ark lore.

RaptorRed

Maybe in the future we can come back to these two?

Maelstrom

Also, I’m suddenly imagining Indrek playing ‘Dance Monkey’ in his apartment and Suvrel dancing to it. XD

Aured

wonderful ending

AnAbsoluteVillain

Love these two, hope we get a reaction pieces from Flevi later for reasons.

AnAbsoluteVillain

We were gifted pets and hugs. All is well.

AnAbsoluteVillain

Give the people what they want! Down with the tyranny! Second second second!

Neu5Ac

Excellent story, although there are some bits that rankle me. This isn't one of them, but simply an observation: I feel Flevi hasn't really made much improvement as a person and is misinterpreting what Indrek is saying. It's not that he wants peace with the Krev out of a desire for friendship, but because it's just too exhausting to keep up the grudge: a sigh of resignation, rather than contentment, so to speak. He still feels humanity is being judged for their appearance rather than who they are as people, but has given up trying to resist that notion. Not to mention, he missed a beautiful opportunity to compare the Krev's sudden hospitality to a monkey trap, or to admonish all of Flevi's followers for seeing genocide as a first option rather than the last. If your intention was to show that the Tellans have had their wills broken and are just going along with whatever is easiest, and that the Krev don't fully grasp their brokenness and are just happy the humans are interacting with them, then this has been a subtly and beautifully tragic story. (This is the bit that rankles me,) Suvrel was really a lot of fun in the one chapter he appeared in; I wish he'd been in the following ones. He's done next to nothing since he was introduced, despite plenty of opportunity to do so: why didn't he try to comfort Indrek when he had a breakdown outside the Obur shelter? Why didn't he react when Flevi forcefully touched Indrek's beard (and why wasn't she at least a little wary of getting her claws so close to a potentially dangerous Obur)? Why couldn't he have at least been fussing with Indrek's hair or something for this chapter? I must rescind my previous theories on why he and Indrek got along so well. Instead, it's either because Suvrel was too weak to be aggressive due to an internal injury and gave his dying screech on the train, or that Indrek actually changed his mind in the shelter and that a schizophrenic Flevi has been imagining the monkey this whole time. Seriously, I'm very disappointed that Suvrel was barely more than a plot device. I was really looking forward to how he and Indrek would interact. I was going to suggest that he might migrate to Indrek's shoulder, given that that's a place monkeys on Earth like to be, and was hoping we'd get a better description than just his color, but those don't seem too meaningful when he hardly seems to be alive.

Kevo

I’d definitely like to see more Krev content in the future

EliasArt2Life

I feel VERY worried for Indrek. Consider everything he’s been through. He’s about to learn that it was all for nothing; that his family was UNLUCKY enough to make it to an Ark that ended up not being needed. Overall, this was a fine miniseries, but I feel as though it left some things unresolved. Sort of like the first Human Exterminator plot line. I wonder if this will get a follow up too. Also, up until now, we’ve had relatively little information about Hathaway’s actions. People have been derivative about him, and talked about how much they hated him, but aside from the first chapters, we haven’t really heard much about his actions. Indrek’s testimony is pretty helpful in fleshing out just why so many people hate Hathaway. Honestly, I think the main series needs something like this, for the benefit of the non-Patrons. I also wonder if Hathaway had ulterior motives for joining the Ark? Thinking about it, he seems a lot like someone who knows how to manipulate people & loves power, but doesn’t have a good understanding of what being in charge means/takes.

Gumcel

“No, Flevi. We’re a cosmic mistake. Everyone, the Krev included, looks at us and sees dumb, violent apes. It’s not like we preserved a damn thing of what matters about us. My dad did a little tech work, setting up those vaults and some wireless networks in the cavern, then he’s more worthless than dirt! Once Hathway could send a phone call to his minions, it’s to the mines with the old man! It gave him a heart attack—killed him anyway.” Least idiotic Hathaway moment.

Space Paladin

There could be a follow-up to Indrek finding out earth survived!

DrewTheHobo

Bet we’ll have a little follow up, maybe a second miniseries toward the end to tie up the relationship

Alekss Žukovskis

it was about when robo-meier visited Tarva: "...alleging that Veln had scandalous something on multiple occasions ... bla bla bla"

Matěj Kratochvíla

"multiple human mistresses"? The hell did I overlook?

Maelstrom

It was wild, but on the other hand, a typical political scandal these days, lol.

Maelstrom

7/7? I thought we were gonna see how happy he will be to find out Earth is still alive and kicking, and how much it would wreck him to think that all he was put through was seemingly for nothing. Perhaps another side series from someone else’s pov that covers how the others deal with it, with some reference to or cameo for Indrek? Or will it all be a part of the main storyline?

Byron Ritchie

Oh yeah that’s definitely going to leave a few mental scars

Aerowarrier

Guy’s gonna throw a fit when he learns not only was Earth not destroyed, but I bet Estonia wasn’t even touched, so his family never had to leave in the first place

Byron Ritchie

Considering the last line I wonder what you have planned for them? All well I’m glad to see their friendship blossom (or possibly more 😉)

Sci-fi reader

Hard story to write. Wouldn’t it just be just a lot of empty space between the Milky Way and Andromeda? Hope they don’t get eaten by Tyranids. 😀 Could be a Snowpiecer kind of story. Or like what happened on Battlestar Pegasus. Yikes. A bit too dark for me though.

Aerowarrier

I hope we learn a bit about Veln’s apparently rampant corruption and how he had multiple human mistresses in the Venlil One Shot. That was WILD line to read and then just never have any more information about

DDDragoni

"Indrek Saar’s story wasn’t over yet." *story ends*

Space Paladin

Thank you! Not all characters have to become romantically involved haha, I’m glad you enjoyed seeing Indrek’s personal journey come full circle 🙏

Space Paladin

The Venlil one-shot is Governor Laisa’s story, so we know a bit about how she became a pro-human Governor post-Veln! 😅

Space Paladin

Someone mentioned the idea of writing an ark that didn’t have the hydroponics failure, and would’ve been 1/3 of the way to Andromeda at canon FTL speed. I would love to see that fanfic come to fruition! 😅

Sci-fi reader

Thanks for the chapter. Glad Indrak is recovering. It just occurred to me that NOP is some what like Battlestar Galactica, except the humans won. I happened to listened to the Edward Olmos interview on The Sackhoff show during yesterday’s commute. He talked about how the show is about making the choice to survive after a nuclear holocaust that killed everything. The voyage in the Ark must have been awful. Someone needs to write a story about life on another ark. Just don't go looking for the 13th tribe. 😆 https://podcasts.apple.com/ca/podcast/the-sackhoff-show/id1693475686?i=1000665122100

Steve Hayashi

I want an epilogue or some kind of denouement. How does everyone react to the interview? What about Suvrel? What happens to Flevi? This can't be the end, can it?

Alekss Žukovskis

weve been robbed of potential romance :(

th3h4ck3r

Great series, felt quite a bit like the original Human Exterminator and Cilany's series combined. Now tell me more about that Venlil one shot...

Alekss Žukovskis

well tried

Wholesome Redditter

Hold on, I’ll do that in a second

Assailant

Who else out here Kreving they Exchange Program? Great chapter! Gives me some ideas for stuff to include in my fic… but I’m glad to see Indrek let go of his hate, and I’m glad to see they didn’t become romantically involved like some speculated: that would’ve been a bit much all things considered. Still, nice ending

Noah Munson

…second…

John

Trying to prevent idiots from saying second.

pogman

First


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