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The Nature of Predators - Star Crossed (7/13)

🕑 Added 2024-04-03 11:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Kevin Quintana

It said shank not knife so presumably she made it on the station. But even still, aliens don't seem to wear clothes in this universe so who knows how she hid it or how security missed that.

Dcluigimario

I can understand the way that kenzo feels. But if he should be angry at anybody, it should be the space station security! Were they not screening the aliens who were coming on to that station? That Kolshian should have never been allowed to have that knife. Even in the future we suck at providing security when we're supposed to

EliasArt2Life

This is feeling more and more like a farce the longer it goes on. At least Chloe is considering other options, other than just asylum. The problem with this scenario is that the only person trying to help Kelvanis is a reclusive human who is completely out of her depth, with no training because the man who was supposed to mentor her is a jerk. There are probably a half dozen avenues, but no one told Chloe of them, and no one is willing to use them for Kolshians (aside from Chloe). I’m hoping that Percy shows some good moral character and bails them out, rather than just being a bystander. Even if he doesn’t like Kolshians, he should still be able to recognize how bad the system has become. In the end, we don’t really know anything about him. I’m curious exactly how bad it is for the UN; the minimal amount of effort here doesn’t match what the UN did everywhere else in this setting. Even if the UN didn’t care about Aafa, I doubt that they’d leave the station UNDERstaffed. And allowing guys like Kenzo to remain on board, when he’s a diplomatic incident (not just with Kolshians, but with humans) waiting to happen, also doesn’t fit with the UN’s MO. Either the new Secretary General is not up to snuff, or there’s a lot more going on. It’s been theorized about, but I don’t think we’ve gotten any confirmation yet.

gilean23

THIS. Kelvan is not eligible for asylum, that makes perfect sense. But he should be a great candidate for more standard immigration/a “green card”.

Neu5Ac

Honestly, his denial wasn't unfair. His planet is under quarantine (technically a combined embargo and blockade, but I've given up trying to correct SP15 on military/political stuff), and asylum is reserved for those who are in imminent danger. Kelvanis' reason for applying for asylum was that he wanted to pursue a certain career path, which is not at all an appropriate reason to request asylum. What he should be doing is applying for a work visa, although he'd almost certainly get denied for that too given that his planet is under total embargo and blockade.

Guardian

NoP is chock-full of paradigm shifts, so it would certainly fit the theme if that were to happen. Fingers crossed.

T___

The asylum premise is what's wrong here. They are all suffering down there, even if not in constant, mortal danger. The generation that was kids then, or were born after, they are suffering. They should be offering exchange spots, and relocation for unradicalized, unprejudiced persons. You know, immigration. The SC is soon going to have a huge problem with a planet full of radicalized Kolshians who actually have a legitimate reason to hate UN and SC. Also, some relief efforts are overdue.

TheBlack2007

That's far too elaborate for what I would give the UN credit for. Also kinda wrong to toy with someone's feelings like that.

TheBlack2007

Sometimes I hate to be right... Raising such a severe Policy Violation with actual, criminal implications may end up backfiring horribly for both of them.

TheBlack2007

Kelvan could also make the case of her taking advantage of him. Chloe was his case worker. All it needs is to mention he felt like rejecting her advances would make her sabotage his case. Now, despite Chloe instructing him to do it, I still don't think Kelvan is actually willing to go that far. After all, this goes beyond "putting your neck out" - he may subject her to serious criminal allegations the UN may choose to investigate further independently of him. If that happens, he may get his asylum but at the price of having to testify against his lover - or he breaks posture and gets deported. Honestly, going down that route is a lose-lose situation.

Apogee

Ah chemicals, their brains are swirling with chemicals. Rose colored glasses make everything look sweet but you can’t have that honey without dealing with bees.

Rohn Carver

my assumption is that a kolshian goes through the process of getting an appointment, tells their story; story gets a kind of background check to see if it is plausible or made up, what emotions are they having?, how are they conveying information?, how do they interact with others on their floor?, do they try and interact with humans outside their appointment?, after they gather all this then a new test emerges, How do they handle Rejection? what is their reaction? are they calm and collected or do they have a suicidal/homicidal outburst like that farmer lady did. they are then loaded up back onto a transport that goes to a far smaller station closer to the planet so it seems like they are getting sent back where the next part of their "Appointment" begins; to test situational awareness and interaction with human society so that if they Do pass the last hurdle. Thee U.N knows that it won't turn into a incident with many deaths.

OmegaMon02

Or it could open up a massive legal debacle because of all the blatant bias and more importantly MASSIVE lack of training

JaxonJak

Granted, laws under the newer UN and by extension the SC could be different. But I'm fairly certain that Chloe could be imprisoned for this. Or at the very least something like a revocation of security status or travel ban type of deal. I might be wrong, but this could be construed into a national security type deal. Never underestimate the shit the government is willing to throw at you just to not say they were wrong.

Youre a swedekisser arent you

This chapter is is probably the definition of bittersweet. They're both willing to take the fall for each other, trying to get the other out of harm's way. I hope that SR will work out, or somehow someone swoops in and says "Actually, we've re-rewiewed the file, you're accepted!" however that would happen. I also feel like Perry would actually get along with Kelvan once he realises that he's a genuine guy. That guard just seems worried for Chloe more than anything, so he might take a liking to the future fandom favourite cetacean!

StormTheSquid

You could've ended that last sentence after "can't get done". Rebuilding a society from total collapse is nigh impossible without outside help, and doing so in a way that's better than what it was before *is* impossible when all that's being done by keeping them there is fostering resentment towards the UN. The UN caused this mess, they need to clean it up, and doing nothing and rejecting almost all asylum requests is only going to make it worse.

Pineapplepilot

Didn't they mention that he got rejected because his life wasn't in danger? Personally, him being rejected makes perfect sense, the UN can't just grant asylum to any "good person," there has to be a reason. The kolshian's punishment is that they have to rebuild their society, that can't get done if there's only bad people on Afaa.

Dragon Writer Luc

I think the proper complaint to lodge would be that she asked inappropriate or otherwise unhelpful questions about his case because getting to know him personally is not as effective for the sake of the application.

un_pogaz

Get married after 24 hours together? It's bold, but in the theme of this series.

un_pogaz

Right, Kelvanis was quite realistic about his chances to pass. That doesn't make this quite refusal any less unfair. And now the real intrigue of the story begins, I wonder how it's going to be resolved. And if Kelvan succeeds to getting himself hired on the station, I want to see Kenzo's face when he hears the news.

Byne

"I’m going to research any workarounds for your denial, or other options to get citizenship on Earth." I wonder if marrying an Earth citizen gets you Earth citizenship? They'd be rushing into it like crazy but that hasnt stopped them so far.

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