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The Nature of Predators 2-9

🕑 Added 2024-02-05 12:00:11 +0000 UTC

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Jared Eakman

No on introduce Naltor to Bondarenko, no matter how amusing it might initially seem, it can only end in disaster.

Feranmi Akinlade

"I thought I was over it from videos and simulations, but in person, with all the sensory input, my mind betrayed me." Your coworkers are literally omnivores. You didn't need a simulation for anything. It's literally so obvious. Follow them to a restaurant. Sit with them and watch them eat meat. Anyone designing a preparation program and included simulations without any real world exposure is unspeakably dumb! And from an in-universe perspective, it doesn't seem very believable that no one thought of this. So this just has to be blamed on the writing. The entire arc of her losing it and running out wad wholly unnecessary, since the entire plot could have progressed pretty much the same without that little detail. And this particular explanation for it definitely doesn't work. This whole plot point feels like a contrived attempt at generating conflict in the story. And this conflict isn't even important for the plot. So it should just have been omitted tbh. It strains credulity. My suspension of disbelief simply can't handle this one.

Feranmi Akinlade

To add a positive comment, I really love these Bissem chapters. They're my favourite. The planet is already shaping up to be a very interesting addition, with it's complex political climate and dire ecological condition. Excitedly looking forward to how the story will unfold.

Alicja Pielichowska

Just realised I’ve been reading Haliska’s name as halsinky

Alicja Pielichowska

Yayyyy Tassi!!! My favourite narrator, and she uses common sense 😁😁


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