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The Nature of Predators - Nova's Children (3/10)

🕑 Added 2024-01-13 12:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Thalia says trans rights

Oh hooray, an attempted space lynching. I'm sure that won't cause an upwelling of generational trauma from Noah

BXSinclair

Absolutely, if they're gonna kill you anyway, make them do it in public

BXSinclair

They should have security, but any competent security would have intercepted the exterminators before they got close to the pair Then again, if the security are non-human, which is highly likely, that could explain things, as it's only been 15 years, any security they have would have to be old enough to be unmodded, so they might not have learned the whole "competency" thing

Rick VanHoute

Not letting your captors take you to a secondary location is the best you can do. Most times if you comply it won't end well.

Willy

Aren’t there a bunch of aliens on earth?

Willy

SP, please don’t let it end like this! Not Elia and Big Bro Ari!!!

Willy

They never were

Luiz Henrique Alves

@Gumcel, that's still working age and some 30 away from retirement

Mundane Purpose (big E)

These exterminators need to be put down like the rabid animals they are. I want heads to roll-and not the kid’s

Wesley Rigg

Agreed. I'm just wondering how subtle the rescue team is. I don't think even with the violent games that they are ready to see firsthand what a shotgun will do to someone's head.

Corporal Chunk

But wouldn't you call the police?

pogman

They're incapable of having fur, we are and yet we mostly don't. Hence the novelty of being "furless" in the galaxy

HiMyNameIsFelipe

My take is: due to the security issues the Williams family may face due to who they are, they are constantly observed by security forces. When the siblings left, they were probably also being followed, but much more discreetly. They probably noticed the tailgaters and prepared for backup and a counter ambush just in case. Now that the ex-terminators are at it, they are moving into action. I am making stuff up for my sake please let me be somewhat right

Wesley Rigg

Anytime I mention NoP to my dad he tells me that I read the most depressing shit lol.

Yannis Morris

And now I desperately want more

Wesley Rigg

William Kane and Rauln to the rescue! And William is still an asshole! And Rauln is still a pyro! And they still act like they hate each other! Let's traumatize these kids lol.

Lunam

....................Maaaaaan I am hoping for some Grade A Skalgan violence from Elia. Rambouillets/Mountain Goat vs the Ouessant GO!

autotheftgrand

You know? I'm starting to get the idea these people aren't very stable.

autotheftgrand

Missed that part. Makes you think they might just be bitter about losing their jobs, huh? And all this rhetoric is designed to rationalize their quest for petty revenge.

DemonVee

I wonder how they rationalize that... Willingly using the unmodding procedure that was handed to them by predators to help their children... But predators are still evil of course.

DemonVee

You want Humanity to take Venlil children and forcefully re-educated them like what the Farsul did... Even when looking at this on a callus mathematical level, that would be a disaster. Not only would it destroying the SC that's suppose to stand for freedom and equality between each species in an instant, as yes... That would be exactly what the Federation would do. Because you can't lead a revolution against an entity and expect it to last long when you repeat the exact same mistakes. But it would also take Humanities closest ally, a species so rebellious and fierce that the Federation considered glassing them, and turn them against you by proving everyone's imperialist accusations... Sending a clear message to other species in the Galaxy and undoing everything. You can't expect a zero tolerance policy for domestic issues. Either you give people freedom to live their lives and let some crimes slip through the cracks, or you turn your reign into a police state and start committing crimes on your own people. Plus, how I see it Skalga seems to have things relatively under control considering it's been only 15 years and their biggest initial concern was that they would be recognized as well known figures. Like, the crazies here are lashing out because of "how much has changed".

Sworishina

Nah, one of the Venlil in the exterminator posse is unmodded, remember?

SimpleArtist

That's true, however, I reckon Elia woundn't be feard and hated by most of the planet, like Ari is being right now

TheBlack2007

Most of the hostilities within the group are either Rauln on Fyron or William on Luala and Rauln. Usually, the worst Fyron receives from William is some mild teasing about her interests - which doesn't automatically spell toxic relationship. With some work on themselves the two might actually have made it work out - not holding my breath though.

autotheftgrand

Like she realized this after the fact and re-remembered it that way? Also, oh yeah, memory transcription. I guess she couldn't've died before at least getting a brain scan, so she'll probably be ok. Maybe that brain scan was performed in a hospital burn ward on a, now permanently disfigured, venlil but hopefully not. No idea about Ari though.

autotheftgrand

What? "This'll teach you for dyeing your ears young lady! You're not an adult until I say you are!"

Blake S

Oh my god tarva sent them, the timing is to perfect

Corporal Chunk

Ah shit, they might "Cure" ari too if they somehow got the cure from the kolshians

Mark Baculna

He had a mental breakdown. He was so invested in tarva that when he realozed tarva is about to lose another that something in his brain switched off. Let us all pray for his recovery.

Yannis Morris

“They’d be bad enough not having fur” Don’t let's this kid talk around Harchen/Tilfish/Verin/Mazic (perhaps), Takkan, Kolshians, etc

autotheftgrand

I just had the most horrible thought. They're gonna beak Elia's legs and make her like a Venlil SHOULD be. Cut her nose off too.

Piittis

It'd be very nice to see this group of morons accidentally torch themselves alive during whatever ensues. Exterminators could certainly use a taste of their own medicine.

Space Paladin

Humanity First could attack them on Earth too, for being xeno sympathizers/xeno kids :/

Bungus Grungus

Because that would be pretty messed up to do.

ToddTheSquid

I have an extremely intense desire to climb through my phone and rip the flamethrowers from the hands of these twisted, vile creatures, threatening to burn *children*, and give them a taste of their own medicine.

Guardian

If the envelope is indeed destroyed, would it jot be possible to resend its information? Of course, SP has said in another reply thread that this is a 'c9ming-of-age' story, so allow me to propose a wild theory: No heroic cameos. The siblings win the day themselves, either through some soul-searching or ass-kicking. Ari retrieves the results, but deposits them in the nearest wastebasket. He doesn't jeed them anymore; he knows who his family is.

Mike Barth

Going to be honest I really don't see that relationship holding up more then on an off because of how volatile and dysfunctional that group is. Pretty sure if an actual serious attempt at a relationship happened they'd hate each other even more within 3-5 months.

Gumcel

Yeah but they’re an exterminator from tonalu city; whereas vana was the owner of a flamethrower company in dayside city.

Gumcel

Either a stroke or an ai took over his computer.

Gumcel

Pretty sure he was 27 in human exterminators; so he’d be 42-43 now.

Gumcel

15 years

Vladi Vladi

why not? Its only been 20+ years since the war ended. Why shouldn't the aliens be mistrustful and violent?

Vladi Vladi

Your response makes perfect sense, as what i proposed is intentionally what the Federation would do. Indeed, threatening people that they must either tolerate the demonic refugees and teach their children the same or have their society collapse is not a democratic solution. But what response should humanity employ in its desperate mission of attempting to convert Skalga into a Pro-Human world in a timely manner?

Vladi Vladi

yeah, silencing and controlling people is illegal under the UN. The entire point of democracy is that everyone has a voice. But that doesn't mean you should stay idle as people move from threats to violence.

PhycoKrusk

She's going to sell Wheaties.

PhycoKrusk

They aren't doing what you have suggested because Earth is not doing imperialism anymore. It's very telling that your proposed solution to the issues on Skalga is to subject the indigenous population to a set of rules you would never agree having forced onto yourself.

Amanda Chowning

Hey, U of M! I graduated from The University of Michigan, lol. I really want to see her go there, haha. And looking at the comments, seems like I’m not the only Michigander here.

Conure King!

Did you fall on your keyboard?

Amanda Chowning

As someone who graduated from U of M, I’m super excited to see it here.

Conure King!

The same reason antivaxxers exist IRL.

Cinnomen Sticks

All exterminators are evil and should be pushed off a cliff

Vaill the protogen

Space paladin your a evil person, I didn't think it was gonna happen like this

PhycoKrusk

The idea isn't that you'll be safe (although, let's have it, that is what usually gets communicated), but that there'll be witnesses. Most people will be deterred by this fact, and the ones that aren't probably wouldn't be deterred by anything.

Tyler Ellis

That whole notion of “if I get in view of the public I’ll be safe” is a misconception. You are no safer in public, think about it, you see two strangers getting into an altercation in a public place, you don’t know the context of the altercation or who started it, one of them even has a weapon, are YOU going to be the one to jump in and break it up? Of course not, everyone else will have the same line of thinking to.

Some Lvm

Hmmm. Skalga does have higher gravity than earth, doesn't it?

Some Lvm

@TheBlack2007 my first play through went all the way with a shotty. Very good in early game, I just wish I knew gorilla arms give you boost to weapon requirements... My favorite weapon in Doom too, both the original and 2016. They aren't really realistic, but you can't beat a shotty in video games. As for Noah, you would be surprised what a good dad will do for his kids... Although I suspect either someone else comes to their rescue, or Elia is about to show what she learned from some earth culture, "Get away from her you bitch" style.

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Mr. Walker

Well, memories change when we revisit and rethink them. These are memory transcriptions.

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This did occur to me as odd to think you have a gun to your head but then still have mental clarity to guage if it's quite right

richfiles

Man... Elia better not get Nancy Keriganed right before her big Olympic debut!

Vladi Vladi

ok...why isn't human military intelligence monitoring Skalga and deeply infiltrated in all domestic affairs though? How could humans let Venil and other aliens educate their own kids with no supervision? They KNOW the aliens aren't gonna forget their programming its part of their religion and culture. For any other alien planet, who actually cares, right? But Skalga has the highest human population, after Gaia. They should've bunkered down and made a clear statement: either you raise your kids exclusively with the estabilished truth, regardless if you actually believe in it or not, or you don't get electricity or heating and all your farms get raided. "But that's Predatory! That's what the Federation would do!" I wonder why? Is it because its hostile alien space that would never buy their wild theories otherwise? The aliens are the exact same people they were thousands of years ago. These are still Venil, aggressive, stubborn goats who only listen to you if they fear you or have no other choice. They don't care that humans saved them. They don't care that humans found the truth. Why should they care? They are old, have nothing to lose. Letting them be independent means making the lives on human refugees on Skalga miserable for generations...a VERY democratic world government move, but still foolish

SimpleArtist

And this, my friends, is why is inmoral to CHOOSE to raise a Human in Skalga, depite having the means to move to Earth.

Mr. Walker

"My first thought was that it was a gun, but when it dawned on me that it was a larger instrument, I figured it was a flamethrower. " --- NOOOO!! YOU MONSTERS!! DON'T YOU DARE HURT THIS WHOLESOME SIBLING DUO!!

Yannis Morris

Hate to stand against Elia but you gotta do something monetizable between Olympic attempts. And hey, no reason it can’t still be something athletic

Yannis Morris

At least my negative predictions still had the fam together when they were getting hatecrimed. And now we got kidnapping

Mr. Walker

Geesh SP15. Right in the feelings

Mr. Walker

It might be easier to parkour on earth.

Mr. Walker

Oh! Maybe his parents are a pair of on the run from the law! Sophie "The Butcher" Schneider and her husband Lawrence "Claw" Kacey. Wanted for mass muder, drug smuggling, sapient trafficing, money laundering, terroristic threats, and space piracy.

EliasArt2Life

Honestly, the kids should have been told about the Predator stigma before going to school. It’s either a couple extra weeks of blissful ignorance, but having to confront the problem on society’s terms, or breaking it to the early, but they have time to prepare on their terms. Their ignorance didn’t protect them from the truth. I’m going to guess that Tarva or Noah followed the kids, and will come to rescue them. Either that, or one of the passerby who saw the confrontation tells the proper law enforcement. Let’s hope neither of them get hurt; Tarva already lost one kid, and either of them getting burned will torment her.

TheBlack2007

I thought more about the one my Solo uses in Cyberpunk 2077 - Low Tech and low budget but lots of power for when you need to blast someone straight through the wall behind them, all while blabbering nonsense like Old Man Henderson himself! Don't see Noah go full-on dunk and buzzed scotsman though.

PhycoKrusk

Guess we get to find out if Ari does actually have the Williams charisma. Or maybe he's got that "predator ingenuity", and turns their unmodded assailant against the rest of them.

Mr. Walker

'Snot bubbled in Ari’s nose. “Am I going to have…bloodlust? I don’t want to hurt Elia.”' --- Should probably warn him about intrusive thoughts at some point.

PhycoKrusk

I hate that what you said is technically true. Guess we get to find out just how fatal a Human's fury actually is.

Alekss Žukovskis

Supertechnologically advanced shotgun, i might add. Like magnetically accelerated, armor-piecing sedatives

PhycoKrusk

I would guess E-lie-a, but I've been thinking Eel-ee-a to myself since the start, and now I don't know.

Space Paladin

It is slice of life/coming of age in many ways, but they also have unique attention and challenges, with who and what their parents are—I’d be remiss not to work that into the story. Especially thematically with what happened to Tarva’s first daughter

TheBlack2007

You're right. Didn't read the "about my age" part properly. Could still be them, though - being one big, unhappy, disgraced, formerly wealthy turned poor family. Not sure if we ever learned anything about Cylek's family beyond his mother. The youngster may have been well on his way when shit truly hit the fan.

Apogee

But this son is unmodded and is younger than cylek would be

TheBlack2007

I can't believe I haven't thought about this before reading this chapter over for a second time, but could the mother-son duo be a disgraced Cylek (Jimek's Bully back from his school days) and his mother, Vana - who used to own a flamethrower company and was heavily involved with the Guild?

Space Paladin

Fixed!

autotheftgrand

"pulling out a weather envelope," is that a special kind of envelope or is that suppose to say weathered envelope?

TheBlack2007

It's probably a mix of both. Overall Venlil and other Alien societies likely grew more tolerant of Humans since the main motivation behind their Xenophobia was fear stemming from misinformation and ignorance. And fear can be countered by exposure. As Humans just continued to live among them and most people realized they weren't vicious, bloodthirsty or even just more dangerous to be around than the average herbivore. This however doesn't mean anything in regards to those who actually hate Humans for what they are and how they have upended an order that lasted for centuries. Namely former Exterminators and their associates.

Anemoia

Ik, I'm not saying treatment of humans got worse, because Ari being able to simply walk down a busy street and only get stares and street crossings is a hell of an improvement from a life-or-death scenario. What I'm saying is the general sentiment of human-phobia must be much easier to propagate now that there are adults who were never alive for those days

th3h4ck3r

If anything, now we see how anti-human racism is now ingrained and normalized at a societal scale, not just like NOP1 where it's mostly a panic/fear reaction but now it's just true xenophobia that's become part of the local culture.

th3h4ck3r

It states that it got much better. We didn't see a lot back in NOP1, but things like threatening to shoot humans for entering bars was a thing and human kids were almost torched because of a school fight. And even today, it seems like most humans live in some sort of ghetto outside the city, probably the same one built for the refugees from the BoE. So comparatively, being the Boogeyman to some random Venlil kids and having people cross the street to avoid you is relatively tame. As much as it hurts to see people avoid you, it beats people wanting to *lynch* you.

Anemoia

Regarding the 3rd person pov at the beginning, I imagine anti-predator sentiment has actually increased a little since the end of the war, rather than decreased. It's easy to tell your kids times were so much better before humans when they weren't alive to see for themselves.

PiñaPiloto

FUCK, man. I was hoping this would just be a nice slice of life story. Y'know, a break from the senseless violence and racism woulda been nice SP.

Niko15

Nothing like being kidnapped on a way from the Space Inpost

Space Paladin

Obviously, this story is sunshine and rainbows, like all my stories! *innocent smile*

autotheftgrand

I think William was in his 20s during NOP1. I thought that was a bit young for a grizzled, doesn't play by the books but gets results, cop type of character. He'd be in his 30s or 40s now, not even old enough to be one day away from retirement.

autotheftgrand

Okay, its hilarious we're all coming to the same conclusion. Somebody needs to swoop in and save them! Particularly somebody with experience handling murderous Venlil.

Edmund Lam

Ari, I am your father…

BigSneppy

Maybe they’ll get saved by Billy Kane and his Farsul wife

DemonVee

Haha I hope... Just a sneaking feeling tho, did William have a baby brother/sister or niece/nephew who died during the invasion of Earth? Wouldn't it be a huge coincidence if there was a connection between the two just as they met]

TheBlack2007

Up next we have Noah grabbing his shotgun and going off to save the kids. The line of him keeping digital tabs on the kids was probably dropped for a reason and the shotgun is a little freedom of interpretation on my end.

Some Lvm

Ok, so totally not the direction I expected this story to go... Angry vindictive exterminators? Oh boy...

Some Lvm

I think I found Ela's parkour channel, and it looks like she decided to go blond again: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ULdtRjpOkQE

Adam Myers

Wolverine here living in Wolverine (no really), lol

Adam Myers

That was what I was thinking too. I am surprised to hear my alma mater referenced. I am pretty stoked about it.

Wingit98

I mean, look how long racism has survived on just our planet with just our species

Jason Young

Hmm given the amount of years that have passed its probably more likely that a Jimek who obviously tutored under Willam Kane and the rest saves the day

Taliesyn

Oh, also, as a Michigan resident, I approve of Noah's excitement for the U of M acceptance, even if I'm a Spartan myself.

un_pogaz

>a voice in my head was telling me that they were something more sinister than fans, Are these four Venlil with a very short furcut, like exterminators? Obviously, such fanatical institutions don't like to disappear without taking as many innocents with them as possible. I'm genuinely curious to see how important the remains of the Federation and the Exterminators will be in NoP2. Curious to see how it will end (no fucking chance that 2 children so diplomatically important has not under surveillance). And who will be the savior: Police, Nulia and Marcel, William Kane and the Four Musketeers, Jimek and Dustin, by themselves? Place your bet!

Byne

I predict the kids will escape relatively unharmed but in the scuffle the test results will get burned by an errant flamethrower blast. Or Ari will drop them and the ex-terminators will get them and publicize the results if they show negative stuff about his parents. Either way I dont think Ari leaves with the results.

Byron Ritchie

I wonder if a certain exterminator squad will save the day?

th3h4ck3r

First Venlil Wolverine! Go Blue!

TheBlack2007

And now, enter one aged Human-Venlil exterminator duo to save the day...

Byron Ritchie

I’m thinking the same

Taliesyn

And today the Venlil will get to learn what happens when you fuck with a human's children.

Paperclip

The HE cast always finds a way into separate stories, like ants into a home. It's inevitable, so why not welcome it?

Edmund Lam

Will my favourite asshole William Kane come to the rescue?

Paperclip

Also, is her name pronounced Ell-ee-ah or E-lie-ya? It's been destroying me for a bit now lol

Youre a swedekisser arent you

Oh god, the children are in danger. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Why'd you have to hit us with the rainbow, SP? Why?!

TheGoldenTank TGT

Oh boi, the kids are one step away from turning into marshmallows. Hope they get out alright...

Andrew Boivin

I’m slowww

Paperclip

Wow, this took a sharp turn REAL fast. It's interesting that the predator rhetoric survived even into the unmodded generation. Shows how even with tons of evidence, ignorance still thrives.

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