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The Nature of Predators - Nova's Children (7/10)

🕑 Added 2024-01-27 12:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Danny Luca

Tarva straight up got in Isif’s face. She has never been far from the violence

NextMan

At cannon rates of 4.5ly/hr, it would take ≈63.376 years to travel to the edge of the Andromeda Galaxy.

PhycoKrusk

Aha! Carry on, then!

everything very

This chapter really got to me :0 ,fully made me cry :p Also first canon hijabi ?:)

everything very

Yeah, like a massage?

Yannis Morris

The host is named Tom

Corporal Chunk

No i mean the next miniseries

PhycoKrusk

His reaction seems completely normal to me. Besides, this is just what Elia *remembers* about that day. Memories change over time.

PhycoKrusk

I doubt very much that a Dossur being Isif's best friend remotely approaches common knowledge. I imagine that Isif himself features somewhat prominently in punk culture, or at least his image does; being far away and isolated allows him to remain mysterious, so he could very easily be a punk icon because the full details of his life are not known to the general public. He almost certainly is a well-known figure in metal culture (especially since there were, by 2136, already two songs that very clearly foretold his arrival at Earth and spearheading the rebellion; "Painkiller" and "Shepherd of Fire"). There's probably even some niches of pop culture where he can be found (probably as the God-Emperor of Arxurkind for starters). For most people, he's probably just a name in a political science book.

PhycoKrusk

It's presently the most underdeveloped *because* it was bombed the most; if it hadn't been for the extermination fleet, the African Union would have, by 2152, been the dominant economic power on Earth. All of that to say that it seems very unlikely that cellular and satellite networks have not been fully restored after 15 years.

PhycoKrusk

We had our two chapters of first contact; next two should be ark 3

un_pogaz

Generally speaking, the entire Arxur Collective needs a follow-up. The Kolshian, Yupla and other Fed's races are either in good relations with the Coalition, or under their direct supervision, so it's easy to imagine how things are going. The Arxur... they come back a lot farther than any other race. Then we add Isif, who was an incredible emotional investment in wanting to save this entire race single-handedly. The impatience to find out what happened is unbearable.

Corporal Chunk

Hold up, i just realised somethin, Taylor Trench, the guy on the Ark ship is the name of the host of 666 News from Hazbin Hotel, dunno if this is intentional or not but very cool!

Corporal Chunk

How far is Ivrana from Earth?

Corporal Chunk

Tbh, Zhao probably worked something out with the Venlil... And plus the Venlil got no military at the end of the war so what the hell would they do?

Corporal Chunk

I... That... I guess maybe?

Corporal Chunk

Ye, sounds like the kind of name i make straight out of my ass tbh

EliasArt2Life

Haliska.

EliasArt2Life

@Space Paladin Oh. Well, I feel stupid. I can’t believe I didn’t think of that… Excited to see what happens!

Yannis Morris

@Adam Meyers I mean I assumed most of the Venlil technically owning Earth was that Humanity wasn’t recognized as part of the Federation

Adam Myers

So, weird question, does Elia enjoy Ari petting her and vice versa? I would imagine that this would be a benefit to having a human/Venlil sibling. From how Slanek described it, I’d imagine it would be enjoyable to both, and something appropriate to do with friends and family. I’d imagine this would be connected to our nails evolving for grooming purposes, it is probably why we and our pets like the sensation.

Adam Myers

I mean yes, technically Earth is the property of Skalga from the perspective of federation law. (It is possible that it still has an effect on SC and interstellar law given how useful precedent is in law)

Corporal Chunk

Quick guess, the next series is gonna be a bissem citizen reacting to aliens n shit, maybe he help calm down Haliska

Corporal Chunk

True... Maybe the rest of them exterminators shows up for the final for a fist fight..... With Noah and Tarva. Like, tarva gives in to the violence since her kids are in danger

Space Paladin

The Olympics with Elia!

Space Paladin

It’s 16 ly away! Canon FTL travel is 4.5 ly/hr

Terry Yu

So the whole gang can go from Skalga to Earth in 1 day? Where exactly is Skalga located? Is it another name for Canada?

EliasArt2Life

My dad did some similar stuff to this. So, maybe they aren’t COMPLETELY out of their minds. That being said, Lesedi lives on the most underdeveloped continent in an area that had some of the most bombing. It’s possible she doesn’t have access to phone lines or other communication methods?

EliasArt2Life

This was a nice chapter. I’m glad to see Ari was able to, at least partially, come to terms with his feelings on the matter. What a nice resolution. … Wait… “7/10”?!? Uh-oh… what are you up to Space Paladin? I have no idea what you’re going to put into the next 2 chapters (the 10th will almost definitely be a conclusion chapter).

E Martinez

y tho :(

Yannis Morris

@Kevin Randall How long would it take to reach Andromeda?

Greg Gougeon

Skalga and earth a quite close.

Kevo

It would take 925 days to cross the whole galaxy from side to side

PhycoKrusk

"There was a definite sense of awkwardness, approaching a stranger’s doorstep without any forewarning." W H A T . Are you out of your collective gourds? You can't just show up at somebody's house unannounced like that. What, you couldn't get Wolf to pee as a representative from some genealogy project, saying they have a confirmed match for a relative and asking if she wants to meet them? This is like, Civilization 101 stuff.

print Path

The end is upon us

print Path

I'll reclaim first place soon enough

PhycoKrusk

print Path is first because print Path is first. The cycle is broken the seal is opening

SimpleArtist

Ari.... he's 15, right? despise how young he is, he seems quite.... quick to assume? Often times I see that Adoptees have either a quiet anger towards their birth parents, or a complete dismissiveness towards them. (Regarding them as just bad/irresponsible/drug addicts). But Ari seems outraged at the prospect of his mother giving him up after EARTH GOT BOMBED AND BILLIONS DIED. If I was him I would assumed my birth parents died, only after I was a little more grown I would be inclined to find more. Damn, after finding out my Birth Mother was alive, when she gave me up, just to die months later, I would feel nothing but love for her, knowing that she wanted me to live a good life rather than to grow up in a dying country, as an orphan riddle with the same sickness that took her. Yeah, I choose to believe Skalga mess him up and that's why he's acting that way. No human should be raised there.

Gavin Pierce

Thats even slower than Star Wars, so i think its realistic lol, they go a little too zoomy zoomy😂

Vladi Vladi

Also, Mr Paladin, or anyone really, was there ever a reunion between the Zurullians Chief Hunter Isif rescued? I hope we get to see a bit of how the media perceives Isif nowadays and how they perceive his best friend Dossur... Yes I am getting slightly bored of Human perspectives and want some nice critical thinking from my favorite saurian, what of it?

Vladi Vladi

MAN... is this whole exchange awkward without voices and faces. Your baby nephew you could not support as a teenager after your entire family died comes back years later FROM THE STARS as the adoptive son of one of the most important humans in centuries... the entire exchange Really really Really needs some body language and audio because without it, its quite the comedy. Congrats on making it feel at least a bit serious with the tools given, paladin

Tazeell

Well that went pretty well.

ToddTheSquid

Ayy, someone beat print path! Congrats!

Space Paladin

FTL in NOP is 4.5ly/h, so Skalga is 16 ly away 😅 it sounds fast, but the more you start zooming out…space is huge. Still takes a long time to go past the Orion arm!

Space Paladin

We do still have Elia at the Venlil Olympics!

John Benjamin Cate

A good meeting with the aunt! Hope this ends well

Byron Ritchie

Good point

Paperclip

Yeah, but seeing what the kids already had to go through even with that kind of protection on Skalga (it is possible that the agents had to be more secretive or strategic there lest someone have a breakdown over "predators with guns", but I digress), I'd be terrified that someting bad would still happen. That's just me, though.

Hayden Hodge

Last part of this story will coincide with the ark ship 3 plot line. They are going to eventually get desperate and send a signal back home with Adaan being the speaker. Called it here first. (Just tinfoil hat conspiracy, this is not founded on anything)

Hayden Hodge

I think with everything that’s gone on in this galaxy some suspicion is warranted. Just shows the great writing of SP. we are still holding on to old feelings of the last book.

Byron Ritchie

Huh i guess me being suspicious of the aunt was me being stupid Anyways it’s quite a wholesome chapter

print Path

For what?

pogman

I'm sorry

Edmund Lam

Except you kids don't have special forces ningas protecting them. There is probably a drone overhead, a tactical team hidden in the next house and a snipper with crosshair on Lesedi’s head.

un_pogaz

It's going great. It's sad, but as Lesedi says, the situation after the bombing was a desolation on every level. And damn, seventeen, yeah she was really young for that. Hmm, the story could really end there, so I'm very curious to see the final twists and turns. Ari's story arc is over, so it will certainly be something for Elia.

Adam Myers

The race for one…

Paperclip

I have a perfectly reasonable answer for why I'm late today, I promise. Skalga to Earth in A DAY?! That's some *fast* FTL. I kind of want to see a diagram and stuff of tech in the NOP universe. Also, personally, I would NEVER let my kids go alone into what is basically a stranger's house. Yes, they're related, but I don't trust people like that. Noah staying behind is expected, because I think that's something he would do. But Tarva? I'll be surprised if she didn't at least think about going in. But at the same time, I have a feeling that Zola wouldn't have let all four of them in anyways, because stranger danger and all. Sorry for the rant, just a lot of thoughts!

Adam Myers

A pleasant simple chapter.

Corporal Chunk

Well uhh... Not much interesting thing really happens here, wonder what'll happen in the 3 episodes left

Mark Baculna

Ang ari has relatives on that ark ship huh

Mark Baculna

Seventh

print Path

Yeah I think you beat me or maybe we commented on the same time

Willy

No

Scout

Jeez that was fast

Corporal Chunk

Third

pogman

Uh oh

print Path

First

pogman

hiii


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