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The Nature of Predators - Venlil Foster Brother (2/6)

🕑 Added 2023-12-06 12:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Zachary J. Dom

I can’t help but laugh at how hard the exterminators came in on this. It’s like the equivalent of the cops showing up at a high school, beating the shit out of a student, and then scaring everyone else away by shooting a flamethrower in the hall.

paintmelikeyoudoyoursheilas

The fire was pretty funny but you can argue the crutch was sort of justifies given the kid was about to carve someone up with a fucking knife and had a posse of equally insane cowards. Just because they aren’t adults doesn’t mean that kids/teens aren’t strong

Wingit98

It would be super interesting to explain all our different mythology to the xenos. I wonder what the krakotl would think about the regular use of avian imagery in general in our myths.

Alekss Žukovskis

For a second there i thought Cylek got his psychopathy from Vana

Rusty Deviant

I know, but who’s to say what a venlil with an older lineage of genes might express. Only SP knows and we gotta wait to find out!

Alekss Žukovskis

But our Neanderthal genes that stayed behind give increased empathy?

Alekss Žukovskis

"ah yeah, we visited Dossur, got occupied, an angry lizard broke us out, so we helped facilitate his rebellion, so now we are working for him, went to the Grayscaled wriss, so now we are working directly under their Chiefest of Chiefs."

Some Lvm

Nah, the school is still predator infested, all part of the job!

Some Lvm

To be fair, most of the kids probably though Luala's show was cool, from a distance at least. I wonder what she would think about the legend of the Phoenix...

Swan

Somewhat related sidenote: I hope we get to see Lisa and Olek come back to Skalga on leave at some point and visit the family; I just think the reaction to the inevitable "So where have you been?" question would be hilarious

Sherman

I dont know why NOP is such a nexus of "america bad" rhetoric and im not even american.

Byron Ritchie

Agreed 👍

PhycoKrusk

When the Exterminators can't, _they_ can! When there's no one left to ask for help, you still ask them. But you'd better be specific, or it's going to get... messy. No request too small! No order too tall! No job too dirty! When the going gets tough... the tough get filthy! William Kane of Earth... Rauln of Skalga... Luala of Nishtal... And Fyron of Talsk are... The Filthy Four! (Rated "R", in select theaters Friday)

extraintelligence

I wish you cared as much about what we have to say when we offer constructive criticism as you do when we get the names of your side characters confused.

PhycoKrusk

Sure there is, and the first step is exorcizing the demon: The Federation.

PhycoKrusk

With luck, Cylek's issues are nothing that can't be fixed with cognitive therapy and antipsychotics.

PhycoKrusk

Come on, you're overreacting. It's not like they didn't put it out!

PhycoKrusk

Even once they are, they're still going to be heavily integrated with the exterminators, so at least in the city, Humans will still be able to exert _some_ influence. Plus, everyone at the local facility has been fired if not also incarcerated, so it would need to be restaffed from nothing. Good opportunity to get better people in. Maybe even a psychiatrist.

Gumcel

Honestly “tomato is a fruit” is just nonsense. No sane person uses the botanical identification when refering to plants they eat, unless it’s in a scientific setting. But people keep insisting on calling tomatos fruits for whatever godforsaken reason.

Rusty Deviant

I would’ve thought so except he keeps being described as far more effective in an actual fight, with strong punches and a useful headbutt

Gumcel

Maybe he just has an aggressive personality? I mean in real life everyone has a different temperament; so I don’t see why it can’t be the same for the aliens. It’s pretty obvious that “herbivore = weak and cowardly” is just propaganda.

Space Paladin

Will and his squad are some of my favorite characters. Hell, they’ve probably had as many total appearances as some main story characters 😂

Space Paladin

Also, Will is suspended right now 🤔

Space Paladin

Vana, not Volek! Volek is Will’s boss

Apogee

@Reptani. I think your on to something there. Also we should do a poll, how many of us are male and how many are female?

SnackcakesMcGee

iirc it's a family business

Jacob Garcia

I'm willing to bet it runs in the family. She just inherited the company and all the prestige that came with it.

Reptani

I am a bit surprised there hasn't been more pushback against it, considering how divided the galaxy is and its legacy of totalitarian, traditionalist societies.

Reptani

@Mr. Walker, it could also be a subconscious choice by SP due to the fact that humans are more "masculine" compared to the aliens---we're larger, stronger, less emotional---and the aliens being "feminine" overall---smaller, weaker, more emotional. Of course, that's only under Federation genetic and psychological engineering (And those are just our traditional gender roles, I'm not expressing an opinion on them). Then again the Venlil are pretty much violent psychopaths ...Or maybe SP and the NoP fanbase are just a bunch of hormonal male furries lol

Reptani

I don't think this is what people meant when they said dogs are man's best friend :( But I always love the stunning displays of professionalism from Will and his friends. Also: > "...get the kid and take him to the van—quietly." lmao The sheer, bestial brutality of this chapter is everywhere with impunity, from Cylek to the exterminators, but I guess that's just another Tuesday on Skalga/VP. And Cylek... If Venlil police are so corrupt that they'd let a child have his flesh carved up with a knife, I mean. Jesus Christ. Their society is demonic. There is no saving it. I'm enjoying this story, though!

Wingit98

I think actually fighting a predator and realizing we're not as monstrous and unbeatable relative to a Venlil inspired a lot of confidence in Rauln, even if he didn't really win. And it sounds like pretty much every human is a furry in the future. It's just people bangin' people. Some of them have fur and tails, but variety is the spice of life and everyone is sapient here, so whatever.

Wingit98

I think it's a reference to Stephen King's "It". The bully in that book tries to carve his name into the fat kids belly like an absolute maniac.

Wingit98

I think all the time about this series in general being a TV series, but I specifically think about the Human Exterminators' characters having their own spin-off show like Criminal Minds, except everyone but the human is kind of an idiot. And the human is also kind of an idiot.

Mr. Walker

I mean, Earth cops get away with some pretty fucked up shit

Mr. Walker

@Som Lvm & @DragonCat, I was going to attribute the trend to SP15's own masculinity.

Mr. Walker

Fair enough.

EliasArt2Life

I think that the UN needs to get involved in this. Sure, we aren’t supposed to interfere and tell the Venlil how to run their planet, but this involves us. Human children are attending Venlil schools, and if they allow this, think of what could happen to the humans. Fear is a major motivator in bullying, and Cylek shows that he had no issue going after someone that people suspected of having a strain of Predator Disease, so being actual predators is no guarantee to protect those kids. Especially if the school still hand waves it, like they did before. That is unacceptable, and as long as human kids are attending Venlil schools, so changes would need to occur.

Mr. Walker

@Som Lvm, context specific meanings, jargon, and linguistic nuance are very interesting.

DragonCat

@Mr. Walker It’s because the majority of the audience for nop are horny men. This is a Reddit story after all

Mr. Walker

Cylek is like the bullies in a Stephen King novel. Anyone else remember the switch-blade welding psychos from the "IT" miniseries? Note: Regretably I have not read the book or seen the new movie. I will get to it when I get to it.

Tazeell

What an aweful kid, how even connections let someone bring knives to cut people up on the regular is beyond me but I also don't know anyone with those to know either way. Time to lock this kid up for public safety. All went down weirdly well timed for the lack of planning.

Tazeell

He really is going to turn out a serial killer alright

Alekss Žukovskis

its just all of us, man

extraintelligence

I wonder, did Volek build her flamethrower company from the ground up, or is "Volek" a family name? Or perhaps it's tradition to rename a company when someone new takes over.

extraintelligence

Yes, how uncharacteristic of Will to do things he'll get in trouble for . . .

Tyler Ellis

Cylek seriously reminds me of all of those serial killer documentaries, where when they interview old school mates and they explain how they always did the most disturbing and fucked up stuff when they were younger. Like “yeah when we were in boarding school one time he snapped a squirrels neck and left its entrails under my mattress”. Cylek isn’t a bully, Cylek is going to grow up a serial killer. Also I really do hope Will has a thing for my favorite Farsul bc gauging her reaction (and fanfic) she does have something for him.

SimpleArtist

Terrorizing the same school two times in a row? Rauln is about to get blacklisted :v

Wingit98

The exterminators really have no rules at all about restraint, huh? Will just bashed a child over the head with a crutch and Luala started setting the school on fire and no one seemed to take issue with either.

Some Lvm

@Mr. Walker - well, gee, thanks for that! Now you made me take stock of them and... You seem to be right! And now my brain is trying to figure out if there is any significance to this...

Some Lvm

@Mr. Walker: interesting - I never looked up the formal definition, and though it was all about which part of the plant it was...

LeeVaughn Graves

*Today, Rauln got to beat up and terrify an evil child. It rocked*

Yannis Morris

Well this is at least a month before Veln puts those Facilities out of human authority

Mr. Walker

Is it just me, or are all of the cannon 'xeno x human' ships 'f-xeno x m-human?'

Mr. Walker

Category error. In botanical anatomy, a tomato is a fruit. But, chefs need their own jargon where they distinguish between sweet plant-ingredients and savory plant-ingredients. Words mean different things in different contexts. Also, the litteral definition of the word 'vegetable' includes fruit: "a plant or part of a plant used as food, such as a cabbage, potato, carrot, or bean."

SimpleArtist

I may be the first person to chant for violence, however, I can't help to be really worried for Cylek, I wonder if they'll truly help him change his behaviours, or if they'll just torture him until becoming numb. No child deserves torture, even if they're cruel It never ceases to amaze me how much the Venlil are terrible liars x'D Dustin for the win! I noticed that Jimek calls his own mother by her name in his own thoughts, that's an interesting cultural difference, calling everyone, including authority figures, by their given name, kinda like Icelandic people. Thank you for the chapter!

Mr. Walker

I thought Will was involved in animal control only. Could he get in trouble for this?

Brianreal

I ship it, but for some reason I also want will to be like "I really don't like Fryon that way, guys, I'm serious!" At then end of this

Andrew Boivin

Rauln: “You attacked a cop dipshit” Will: BONK Laula: FLAME

PiñaPiloto

Dude. Shut the fuck up.

Byron Ritchie

Honestly I think after the main series wraps up the next should focus on will and his squad mates That’s just my opinion though so yeah

Space Paladin

Thanks! Glad you’re enjoying it 😅

Youre a swedekisser arent you

Rauln is truly the most based asshole Venlil around, literally beating Cylek and daring his mates to join in. He's also the most firey Cupid the galaxy has ever seen. Long live Fywill!

Dragon Writer Luc

Immunity to consequences is a great way to find out how evil people can be. It's clear Vana has never tried to discipline her child, and quite possible that she believes her business is immune to any threat, even public opinion. Sadly, this is close to a real problem that needs addressing, and it's often not as simple as putting the kid on drugs and adding a psychiatrist. (Remember, we have another "nonconforming" character that was put on drugs for years.)

Yannis Morris

I mean, Luala was definitely alive when the Extermination Fleet happened

ToddTheSquid

Meh, they're about on par with US law enforcement. At least they only kidnap the children instead of shooting them all, Jimek included, like a US cop might.

Thrownawaz

It's not just that, it's also the lack of barbs pointed her way. Just about everyone else gets them, even Luala, who's in a similar boat. Also it's just a frenemy's ship, so take it with a grain of salt

Rusty Deviant

You got me wondering now if Rauln is a throwback, like how some humans can present some Neanderthal characteristics

Edmund Lam

William is my favorite asshole.

Adam Myers

Based on her reaction, I think she supports the ship.

Jonathan Cardoso Mota

This is past when reforms start. Reforms start at the end of the Predator Disease series, Human Exterminator 2 happens *after* that series, and Venlil Foster Brother starts directly after the end of HE2

Yannis Morris

This isn’t even the first attempt!

PiñaPiloto

Wow, they're still the galaxies worst law enforcement, lighting a school hallway on fire and kidnapping children. Pretty on par with everything else we've seen lmaooooo.

Dragon Writer Luc

I faced a lot of bullying in middle school, but none were so brazen as to try carving things into me. The most I got was free water bottles at a high velocity. I wouldn't say Cylek deserves electroshock, but some sort of juvie or boarding school would be a good idea. One that doesn't allow knives.

Paperclip

Definitely a sadistic monster. Human psychologists are 100% going to find something messed up with his head, if they're present. I'm not sure if the date this happened means Cylek's getting wheeled off to the Federation's crazy bin or just put on medicine and getting therapy, but I hope it's the latter.

Yannis Morris

I don’t think “Not treating Fyron like she’s responsible for something that happened centuries before her grandparents were conceived” is a sign of romantic attraction.

Some Lvm

Well, its a good thing there is a PD facility reform all through out Skalga. Cylek needs a good psychiatrist... Even than, I am not sure he can be salvaged. And looks like Rauln does not really need any genetic modifications - he decided he can go all "old school" Venlil as is. Probably a bit too early for it being socially acceptable though. Sadly, now I am left wondering if Will is a closet furry, and if Luala will be jealous, should anything between him and Fyron actually happen...

Jonathan Cardoso Mota

My dude what IS Cylek. That wasn't bullying. Like, fucking- "I'll carve his name on your flesh to show you what happens when you hang out with humans" is a degree of evil that is past bullying. This boy has Real Problems that need addressed.

Some Lvm

Ah, yes, the sauce of that Terran fruit every store on earth is inexplicably intent on hiding in the vegetables section. Must be a predator thing - not being able to tell one type of plant from another...

HiMyNameIsFelipe

Bully get put down, like deserves

Adam Myers

I am loving this series already.

John Benjamin Cate

I am very curious how this screening will go, especially with how the flamethrowers are no longer to be used. I wouldn’t be surprised if there’s a ton of flip flopping from the commander of the office.

Ha! Get goofed silver spoon!

Paperclip

I don't know if using flamethrowers against kids in a school is the best look, regardless of the context, but I guess the ends were worth the means.

Adam Myers

So excited!

Jackson Hazeltine

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