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The Nature of Predators - Venlil Foster Brother (1/6)

🕑 Added 2023-12-02 12:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Warutteri

YAY! More Dustin and Jimek ❤️ Those two kiddos are some of my all time favourite characters 😊

Wholesome Redditter

Kane my beloved

pogman

This story's characters attitudes are a complete 180 from the main story's cast and I absolutely love it. Reads like a fanfic

Alekss Žukovskis

" 140 dECIBELS TO GRYFFINDOR!!!"

Adam Myers

Anyone else getting this vibe? This is me thinking of the tone that Callsi will have. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fBziSx7RtqY

Tazeell

Well I can't see how any of this is going to go well. Kid's be doin the dumb, as kids do.

Wickerwood

Not my first choice. Considering how much the bird crushes on him.

Adam Myers

Probably unpopular opinion, but I think Dustin needs to let Jimek do his bleaching tradition next cycle. It will show growth on his part that he trusts his brother.

Adam Myers

I an hoping that Luala gets this and asks Volek to organize an Exterminator-school assembly thing. That would satisfy the technical requirements, while keeping Will on a short leash.

Jackson Urwin

Is this gonna be how William Kane invents the exterminator version of cops coming to your school and telling you to respect the law?

richfiles

Fyron and William sitting in a tree Face B-I-T-I-N-G

EliasArt2Life

Ugh. This is worrying. I seriously hope that this is about Jimek learning to leave his need for revenge behind. We’ve already got a story about Slanek falling prey to his need for revenge. Also, I hope that Rauln sincerely apologizes to Dustin by the end of this. Will is right; with the Guild phasing out flamethrowers, Vana’s about to lose her power to protect Cyclek from consequences. A little patience is all that’s needed. I hope Luala or Fyron talks some sense into these guys. Or Callsi. The best person to go to was Volek, not Will (although there was no way for Jimek or Dustin to know that). If the trouble between Jimek and Cyclek goes much farther, it’ll likely turn into another Predator Disease scare, which she doesn’t want. Also, the idea that someone bullied by a person with connections to the Guild having no choice but to join the Guild for protection is a bad look, and Volek would want to avoid that getting out.

Reptani

I feel like this is going to end in chaos lol

Yannis Morris

He hears that Dustin was defending his brother and *still* labels it bloodlust but “for a good reason” like how Rauln made that HF dude suffer

Amanda Chowning

Anyone else really hate Rauln in this episode? I expected him to apologize to Dustin after seeing him again, after knowing what humans are really like now (at the time, he thought it was an inevitable situation where a human would snap, and not truly defending against the bullies). Not demand Dustin, a child trying to stand up to bullies, apologize to HIM after he wanted to violently burn him to death. Even if he didn’t know the specifics, he should have at least been informed the human CHILD was rightfully defending a venlil pup from physical abuse by bullies the time the exterminators were at the school. The only thing that slightly makes it ok is that he went all bleeding heart after hearing Dustin being concerned about his brother and used that as a reason to protect the venlil (saying that Dustin shouldn’t have to live with that stress). But between the school/likely the exterminators knowing Dustin was acting defensively, and Raulin knowing what humans are really like now, he shouldn’t have assumed the human child was acting on bloodlust. He’s the one that owes Dustin a HUGE apology. I’m also kinda concerned his brother still went ahead with taking Dustin inside after hearing said exterminator burned another human to death. While I know Dustin is the protective older brother, his younger brother shouldn’t unnecessarily put him in danger. He put his brother at risk of being violently burned to death just because he didn’t want to be beat up at school himself. That’s incredibly selfish. The only characters who are reasonable and likable people in this chapter are Dustin and his mom. I can believe Dustin would put himself at risk of painful death to protect his little brother from getting beaten up.

un_pogaz

*Look the ping-pong betwen Rauln and William* Hm, they looks like an old couple, they realy cute. This spat is absolutely wonderfully written. And when you know how much the two care about each other, it's even more delicious.

TheBlack2007

Will flat out told it's probably the incident that will get flamethrowers banned from use - although the date is six weeks prior to Veln's election so who knows if it actually still comes to be. Anyway, the drawback to people with a tendency to panic in the line of duty using a weapon with the potential of causing insane collateral damage should be obvious enough if it wasn't a damn cult we were speaking of...

Sci-fi reader

The kids and my favourite Exterminator odd couple.

gilean23

The Three Stooges or The Odd Couple.

Space Paladin

https://www.reddit.com/r/NatureofPredators/s/JA7YRwNjxM

Mr. Walker

Wil and Rauln belong on a gritty-'modern' 90s reinterpretation of the "Three-Stooges."

Lokyar

Last week we taught you how to burn hensa, the week before was a predator the humans call a "puppy", the week before that was another human gift called a "kitten"... tonight we have a special surprise! A full on larval human "child"! Don't forget to wear your eye protection and flame proof gloves before you grab your flamethrower!

Joe bro

I mean, she pretty much told him that ain't happening, but that doesn't necessarily mean anything. However, she may have to fight for that spot.

Joe bro

Welp, time for the additional aid of 'self-loathing' dipshit and 'totally doesn't need anger management' dipshit. What can come from their assistance in this whole debacle? Nothing good, that's for sure. I await the outcome...

Alekss Žukovskis

Someone give me a link to that picture SP commissioned with a venSocked Jimek.

Thrownawaz

But don't worry, he has a support group... No wait! I meant Emotional support, not as backup!

Thrownawaz

Right! Fyron! I kinda really wanna see her delve into vampires and other cryptids

BigSneppy

Aw, the Venlil have their own version of the scouts… why do I have a feeling it’s evil in some way?

Byron Ritchie

I’m sad that laulaxwill ain’t canon and rauln seems to inherit wills worst traits but I love this chapter nevertheless

Yannis Morris

Not liking Rauln all that much. Like even if the guy deserved the slow painful variety of death: Going in a refugee building and setting it on fire has so many things wrong with it (The one I most expect to matter to him being that that very nearly killed *everyone* inside. Including William). And Rauln shot that guy in the head, so the flamethrower torture was so very deliberate. But very interested to see how he reacts to the fact that this “predator child who can’t contain his bloodlust” has a better relationship to his Venlil brother than Rauln has with William

Anemoia

Jimek the little ball of floof and arson 💜

dmg

Please make Fyron x Will a thing please please please

DemonVee

Glad to see all of them back, really excited about this one. Also... Fyron x Will mention 😎

Youre a swedekisser arent you

Rauln... doesn't quite -ship- Will x Fyron, but he does think it exists. He and Will must bicker more than even Arxur do. I do rather hope that they don't end up causing trouble, but that would be far too much to ask for from anything involving William and angry children.

Mike Barth

Jimek woke up and desired violence.

Adam Myers

I love this story!

Tyler Ellis

Very glad this is back! And also very glad it’s taking on the perspective of Jimek! Feels refreshing to have a continuation story with the focus being on a different character than the previous!

Paperclip

Callsi's totally gonna be busting them. She'll be instantly onto them, track them down and confront them at the last minute. You can't hide from an experienced parent like her.

print Path

First!

Jackson Hazeltine

First!


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