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The Nature of Predators - Farsul Abductee (2/8)

🕑 Added 2023-07-05 11:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Yannis Morris

*However, we’d like to monitor your health. Are blood draws acceptable to both of you?”* Oh my god! This hurts so much from a future perspective! They fucking have blood draws!

Yannis Morris

Hell yeah, Greg

AlphaAllNight Gaming

Greg out here doing God’s work, making sure the aliens know about weed.

BXSinclair

While Danny is trained to sniff out lies, he also doesn't know anything about Farsul body language (yet). A good chunk of seeing through deception is body language

kenneth Moore

I am having a hard time getting into this side story. Probably for the best as I don’t think I am emotionally stable enough to handle whatever is about to happen here…

Michael

This mini series is gonna get really depressing isn't it?

Weston Simmons

Fbi the guys that specialize in investigation and sniffing out lies not a great choice for abduction considering fbi training does cover noticing lies and abduction similar to soldiers guys gonna notice the inconsistencies when they pop up then all hells gonna break loose with revelation after revelation this should be rough on both sides as the chapters continue great start tho.

GeneralLDS

and that human’s name was Danny

GeneralLDS

hope danny pulls some kind of fbi nonsense and hides a message for Veiq and completely calls out her bs

Alex

oh this is about one of those guy's with george murphy......i hope anyway

Sabrina Palma

So... if this are infect... we have Hunter and others infect with this disease... Covid-19 again?

Lokyar

Yes. Without B12, the cure is 100% fatal, as we miss that vital vitamin. With it, the cure is non-lethal... as long as you stay away from meat

Dcluigimario

The cure is 100% lethal to humans!? Also I forgot all about them not knowing our dependency on B12... Could those two factors correspond with each other?

EliasArt2Life

The Farsul probably did a posthumous brain scan. One thing I’ve noticed is that the Farsul ARE legitimate historians… aside from the whole suppressing history thing. They record EVERYTHING. The Venlil file alone was MILLIONS of hours of footage. I can totally see them doing the memory transcription. They just don’t seem to be reviewing this data, aside from the very general stuff. The Farsul are a perversion of what historians are supposed to be; they love the knowledge for the power it gives them, rather than seeking to gain understanding through understanding history. But a distorted historian is still a historian.

Quinn the derg

This could honestly be a unique starting point to NoP. Imagine if this was your first introduction to NoP, you’d be just as duped as Danny.

The Magician

It's gonna be a while before I stop reading the opening line as "Memory Transcription: Danny Phantom"

Shebzilla

Will Greg score any space cabbage any time soon? Will the Farsul clone some Mary Jane from the doobie he had stashed between his (redacted)? The galaxy may never know…

Flinty Flakes

I wonder how they got the memory transcripts from Danny here. Either the Farsul are taking brainscans or the Farsul put the dying humans back in cryostorage and we were able to take scans from there. In the main story, Veiq mentions Danny in the past tense, so he probably wasn't in the batch staffing the Archives. If the Farsul are taking brainscans, that probably means Danny is dead by the time of the main story; it also brings up the question of if the Farsul have memory transcription technology that lets them read the brainscans. If they put them in cryostorage, Danny might be alive and we might be able to save him. I don't know what the protocol is for handling dying humans.

towerator

Sooner or later you will pay for your lies, Veiq.

Unknown

Danny's got a pretty good handle on things and has a good chance of figuring things out. He's grounded enough not to immediately jump the conclusion that he was abducted by aliens, but accepts it pretty quickly once he has solid proof. He's calm enough to check his body for injuries and verify he's not dreaming or hallucinating. He wants to get out, but knows that going postal is going to get himself killed and instead decides to build the aliens' trust. If Greg's a hippie, there might be a chance that he's a vegetarian or knew vegetarians. If that's true, he might know the solution to the problem. However, even if he knew the solution I doubt he's going to record it (though the Farsul may question him about that if mentions it). Something that might set off alarm bells in Danny's head is if he finds out that the Farsul have batches of humans from multiple different decades. If the Kolshians just created a plague, then why would they have humans from 10, 20, 40 years ago? The other major one I can think of is the backward "predator bad" philosophy the aliens love to spout at every opportunity.

Apogee

Good hypothesis

EliasArt2Life

Yep. Danny is already putting two and two together. I don’t really have much to say about this chapter YET, so instead Id like to talk about what COULD happen. This isn’t a theory, since I have nowhere near enough information to make one; more of a hypothetical scenario. What if Danny figures out why all the humans die from the meat allergy, and THEN finds out the Farsul are working with the Kolshians? He could be on his way to ask Veiq why they haven’t been given any B12, when he figures it out, and decided to keep it a secret, or even mislead the Farsul, to protect the rest of humanity (and securing himself a legacy as a unseen hero). Furthermore, it would compound with Veiq’s hypocritical attitude towards humans; the Farsul were clearly the ones who recorded Danny’s memories, and likely did the same with all other humans. At least ONE human should have stumbled upon the answer, so the Farsul aren’t reading these records. Imagine if the reason Veiq and the others could never prevent “The Hunger”, was because they never bothered reading the memory transcripts of the humans who died, because they saw those humans as too primitive to have the answers. I just think it would be neat.

Apogee

What’s the word for when the kidnapper/murder thinks their friends with their victim? Psychotic? Honestly it’s so much worse than a villain who knows it’s NOT POSSIBLE to be FRIENDS with their VICTIMS. It’s just creepy, it’s like this gross unnatural feeling man. Good job writing this SP! Your nailing the vibes.

Yimnoshant

B12 deficiency in humans results in death within 2 years. Veiq isn't old, the lifespans of the archive humans are short.

Byron Ritchie

“We are protecting you from a race called the Kolshians that wants you dead; that’s the truth. We can show you their rhetoric to prove it.” I mean… that’s kinda the truth, although she is definitely presenting it in a dubious way

Indinatr

Is Veiq extremely old, or did they just recently wake them up?

Pyroraptor

Thanks for the chapter!

Cooldude101011

Damn, I thought at first that the guy was one of the people rescued.

Swan

kinda hope Danny sees through the conspiracy and starts working against them in someway, like feeding them false info about humanity and it's millitary tatics or something ("Humanity totally never figured out how to build a submarine", "No one would be insane enough to jump out of a plane in combat", or "It took us like a thousand years to go from electricity to landing on the moon; you guys have plenty of time to figure this cure thing out") Edit: Examples of false info are a bit too blatant, but you get the idea

Rick

At least the brothers are together, would be even more terrifying to go through that alone.

Swan

Think it's just lies (Spreading the "cure" as a disease is a pretty bad idea, as it'd get noticed, and likely combated plus you'd just exterminate humanity with extra steps)

Ondram05

So let me get this straight, the farsul and kolshians abducted some humans to give them the disease and send them back to earth to spread it, and these specific farsul stopped them from being sent back? So does that mean that these specific farsul are actually the good guys? Sorry if im wrong i forgot what veiq said in 125 or 126 or 127 or whatever. Edit: i just reread a bit of 126. I am going to cut veiqs throat out and choke her on her own spinal cord. I really hope danny and everyone else learns the farsul gave them the cure and it becomes clear to veiq that danny doesnt like her, because in 126 it sounds like veiq still thinks danny liked her or something and if that doesnt get resolved and veiq doesnt realise danny didnt like her i am going to have a fucking breakdown. SP pls

Anthony Mears

We know what she's like from the main story. It's safe to say that she's not malicious, just deceptive and deluded. Not excusing the lies but they ARE trying to prevent the Kolshains from killing them... just in a twisted way. Evil things can be done with good intentions.

Byne

The thing is, none of them are malevolent. They genuinely think they're doing whats best.

HiMyNameIsFelipe

Probably. They have such and advanced yet poor understanding on the topic, that I wouldn't be suprised if they just didn't know.

John Benjamin Cate

Veiq is an utter bastard. I hope they were imprisoned and shamed before everyone in existence

Talon

On the other hand, if it's viral and makes changes to DNA that way, I guess not bothering to try and keeping them quarantined makes sense.

Talon

Danny definitely doesn't make it. I remember Veiq mentioning that being his name. Which really sucks for him because he's pretty likeable, if a little uptight. If anything, I'm very surprised that the Farsul didn't offer to sterilize the humans to avoid passing on the cure (which sounds terrible, I know) when they realized they couldn't reverse it to save those affected.

Koda

Now I’m wondering if all the Farsul look like cocker-spaniels or if there are other earth-dog breeds they can resemble🤔

Mylax Kindflame

Knowing who these aliens are really does change readers’ perspective a lot! It’s both intriguing and infuriating that the Farsul haven’t figured out the nutritional issue yet. Maybe the Kolshian cure specifically targets B12 as one of the indicators of ‘meat’?

HiMyNameIsFelipe

Per what we saw on the other chapters of the main story, I think Danny might not make it. At least.l, per some theories, Veiq got attached to a human who did not make it.

Anthony Mears

What a deceptive POS. They really "hate manipulation " don't they?

jervictor jer

just for the lies I hate Veiq even more... and we didn't even start the miniseries... either she becomes better or worse from here...

Jonathan Cardoso Mota

Okay, so Danny does nothice there's weird things afoot. And he seems to be quite willing to actively try to make friends if anything as a way to get information.

Kaiser Marcqui

It's a bit hard to get a read on Veiq, but I don't think she's purely malevolent. Her intentions are nice; the problem is that everything else... isn't.

O5-69

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