Kiffy
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I may be cooking something (early sketches and ideas)
🕑 Added 2024-10-09 16:00:00 +0000 UTC I've been focused on doing something I always wanted to do: a cartoony superhero girl. I thought about it and I said to myself "well, not everyone would be turned on by a cartoony body, what if I also do a more defined one?" And that's basically how I came up with everything, this is Ruby and her lovely friend Bee. ---- RUBY ---- Ruby is a sassy and cocky 7 year old girl who lives with her parents on a nice neighborhood. She has just started primary school and while she's not the most intelligent in her class, this doesn't prevent her from standing out by her very strong personality, trying to steal the spotlight with her cocky attitude and arrogant comments. She's not always like this, when she feels comfortable or having a nice day she treats others properly (doesn't happen very often). Color red goes along with excitement, courage, energy, action, that's why red is her favorite color! Loves combining red clothing with her inherited blonde hair and beautiful blue eyes, but that doesn't mean she's the perfect stereotype of a blonde girl, as she usually lets herself go and eats a little too much, revealing a plump belly for everyone to see. One day by accident, she discovered that she had a very weird and rare ability, as she could make her body very voluptuous, emphasizing all her traits, gaining a lot of weight, height, but also strength! Not only that, but she also has the amazing ability of flying across the sky, she just doesn't know that yet. ---- BEATRICE ---- Beatrice (called Bee by her friends) is a sweet 7 year old girl who loves to smile and make her friends happy, even if she needs to get serious to achieve that. Lives with her father, older brother and mother, who made her bee costume without even knowing her daughter would use it to fight criminals. She loves color yellow; happiness, joyfulness, energy, positivity is what describes her best. At a very young age she discovered her special ability of making her little body voluptuous, so with a lot of practice and confidence she started using her powers more and more, even managing to fly and started to fight crime with her alter ego. --- STORY ---- The only story I have written so far is for the "first" part of the story or the "first" comic, how the girls met and how they got along. On her way home from school, in the middle of a park, a strange man rushed to Ruby. She was about to get kidnapped, but as she was about to finally use her powers, out of nowhere a huge black ass appeared flying and knocked the kidnapper out. She couldn't believe it, there was another girl the same age as her having the same abilities. The girl named Beatrice asked Ruby if she was okay, Ruby was just shocked and wanted to see that heroic girl later again. Beatrice promised that she would look for her tomorrow and flew away. The next day, Ruby went to the same park waiting for that girl to appear flying once again, but she saw her walking and smiling, looking like a normal 7 year old girl. After they had another exchange of dialogue, Ruby presented her new friend to her mother who was close by. She was happy for her daughter as she saw her finally having fun and smiling to a girl her age, something that didn't happen very often. Ruby's mother agreed on the idea of her daughter visiting her new friend, she was handled Beatrice's mother phone number and everything went just well. Once they arrived at Beatrice's house, Ruby met Beatrice's mother, a very nice housewife who knitted dresses and such. Both girls went upstairs and started showing her powers to each other, sharing information and life experiences. Beatrice told Ruby that everyone call her "Bee" as a diminutive of her name, also she told Ruby that her mother made her superhero costume, and she wanted Ruby to have one too. Oh and they also had sex, a lot of sex. As the night approached, Ruby needed to go back home, but she was very happy to have finally meet a lovely new best friend that she could relate to. ---- NAME ---- I still haven't decided a name for their super hero alter egos. These are the drafts I came up with Ruby superhero name: Pinky Pink Girl Gem Vermella (red in Galician) Bee superhero name: Black Bee Stingirl Joy Jaune (yellow in French) I like the color names in different languages, I just think they're neat, what do you think? ---- REFERENCES ---- As for references go, I was inspired by loud house for the designs, obviously not trying to make a 1 to 1 copy of it. Lola Loud was a big reference for Ruby. At the start I wanted to give Ruby orange clothing but it didn't look too well so I changed it to red/pink. Beatrice was inspired by Cricket from loud house, but I came up with most of her design by my own. It was HARD trying to come up with a good looking hairstyle for her, but I think it looks good now! I think that's all the info dump I wanted to share, any feedback is welcome if it means it will help me improve this project! https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/m5hltidvctgksqhm76wv7/RubyBee.zip?rlkey=wkmdwvcv2joplwokbixv3bht1&dl=0
Comments
Anon1600
Idea both heroines beating criminals by leaving their balls DRY and smothering them, like your PPG drawing. Also the girls cheating on the other's day cuz why not.
Clueless Artist
YOU COOOOOKED!! Love both of these designs! Ruby's little costume is cute as heck, I like that her belly is pronounced in the normal costume. Looks cocky and ready to tussle with any villain (or kidnapper) that gets in her way. Probably lead them on for a while, but at the last second, *WHAM* they get their butt kicked. Bee looks adorable, I have a weakness for black girls with pigtails, her tights look great! Love how they squeeze against her skin to show off her color underneath. Looks like they'd tear off so easily, I'm hoping Ruby can resist doing that. I feel like Ruby needs her skirt or tight thong in her super thick form however. Even if it shows off her little pussy, she should have something to break up her design a little bit. I like the little story as well, but I think showing hints that they like each other throughout the first comic would be a good idea, a blush here, a squeeze there. As for names, I think Red Hot for Ruby could work, and for Bee, Sting Girl is cute!
Kiffy
I love black characters, shouldn't be a surprise
NaughtyMouse
Really cool when artists have an appreciation for black lolis <3
Bla
I would say more characters who are hardly anthro, like that creepy twitter cat one. That is some fresh content!
Kiffy
what do you think I should do then
Bla
Honestly not at all excited to see even more realistic depictions of underaged humanoid characters by you, or anyone based off of Loud House, or another depiction of an overly voluptuous girl character. It would have been way better and less creepy if ya went against the usual grain and made it even more cartoony and unrealistic, just smth unusual. Characters being humans especially makes it feel unoriginal since there is just way too much of this stuff on this website already. Not my place to tell an artist what to draw obviously, this is just not what I wished to see from someone as talented as you are. Best of luck on it regardless, the expressions look very good.
Kiffy
I really appreciate the opinion!! I'm gonna make this post public in some days but first I wanted to hear what the members think about this
IceM
👀 More "short" girls AND they can turn into even curvier versions of themselves. Sign me UP. They're really cute designs, too! I don't know if they're just going to be beating up adults or fucking them into submission, but either way you could give them some names that reference their fighting styles/character traits (like their fat butts). That or how they target child snatchers. You should also pair the names together to see how they sound, seeing as they're going to be a duo eventually. "Jaune and Vermella" (It does sound neat!) "Honey(pot) and Shortcake" "Red Rose and Sting Girl" Excited to see more. Can't wait for the SWEATY 7yo GIRL SEX 👍
