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Chapter 8: Early Calls and the Serpent | In Naruto With an Achievement System
🕑 Added 2025-05-31 11:38:42 +0000 UTCIn Naruto With an Achievement System
Chapter 8: Early Calls and the Serpent
The atmosphere in Academy Classroom 1-B was deceptively normal. It had been a few weeks since the jarring news of Iwa’s devastating attack on a major Konoha supply route had rippled through the village, casting a somber shadow over everything. But here, amongst the rows of students, the morning routine was proceeding as usual. Chatter died down as Midori-sensei stepped to the front, ready to begin the day's lessons – perhaps a review of shuriken accuracy charts from the previous day's drills, or maybe another dive into the dry and unecessary details of Konoha’s political history.
Just as Midori-sensei opened her mouth to speak, the classroom door slid open. A chunin I didn't recognize, wearing the standard uniform but carrying an air of official urgency, stepped inside. He bowed briefly to Midori-sensei.
"Hana-sensei, apologies for the interruption," he said, his voice formal. He then straightened, his gaze scanning the students before landing on two specific individuals. "Yuuki Kagurazaka. Anko Mitarashi. The Hokage requires your presence."
A jolt, sharp and cold, shot through me. The Hokage? My first, instinctive thought was my Attribute Distribution. Had someone finally noticed something definitive? But then… Anko? Why Anko? That didn't fit. If this was about my secret ability, her presence made no sense. The slight confusion tempered the immediate surge of dread, though a knot still tightened in my stomach. I kept my expression carefully neutral, just offering a small nod of acknowledgment.
Beside me, I saw Anko straighten up, her initial surprise quickly morphing into a flash of excited anticipation. Being summoned directly by the Hokage was a significant event, and her expression clearly showed she thought it was for something good.
Around us, whispers immediately erupted. Hayate and Yugao, who were sitting just ahead of me, exchanged worried glances in my direction. Kurenai, a few seats over, looked concerned for Anko, a slight frown creasing her brow.
"Understood," Midori-sensei replied to the chunin, her own expression unreadable. "You are excused, Yuuki, Anko."
We gathered our things amidst the renewed buzzing of the classroom and followed the chunin out into the hallway, leaving a stir of curiosity and speculation in our wake.
The walk to the Hokage's tower was short, the path familiar from countless trips to the nearby training grounds. The chunin leading us was silent, his pace brisk and purposeful. I walked beside Anko, my mind racing, trying to connect the dots. If it was just my ability, Anko wouldn't be here. That much seemed certain. So, what else could it be? I could not think of any other reason to be summoned directly by the Hokage. I could already feel an ache starting to settle in my head.
Anko, on the other hand, seemed to be enjoying the attention from passing villagers and shinobi who noted the official escort. She puffed her chest out slightly, attempting a swagger. "Wonder what the old man wants with future top shinobi like us, eh, Kagurazaka?" she muttered to me, a cocky grin playing on her lips.
"No idea," I replied, offering a noncommittal shrug. Speculation was pointless until we were actually in his office.
The chunin led us into the Hokage's tower, up a flight of stairs, and into a small, formal waiting room just outside the Hokage's main office. The room was sparsely furnished – a few plain wooden chairs, a low table with some outdated village pamphlets. It smelled faintly of old paper and polish.
"Please wait here," the chunin instructed before bowing and departing, leaving us alone.
Anko immediately started pacing the small space, unable to sit still, her earlier excitement now mixed with a visible restlessness. "This is it! Maybe we're getting a special mission! Or maybe they recognized my awesomeness and want to promote me straight to chunin!"
I chose one of the chairs and sat down, trying to project an outward calm I didn't entirely feel. My mind was still a whirlwind of possibilities, but the gravity of being summoned directly to the Hokage, bypassing all other instructors or intermediaries, was definitely sinking in. Whatever this was, it was serious.
The minutes in the waiting room stretched, each tick of a distant clock seeming to echo in the quiet space. Anko’s pacing eventually slowed, her initial manic energy giving way to a more subdued, nervous fidgeting. She’d occasionally glance at the closed door to the Hokage’s office, then quickly look away, muttering to herself. I remained seated, focusing on keeping my breathing even, trying to quell the undercurrent of anxiety. The formality of the situation, the hushed reverence that always surrounded the Hokage's tower, was oppressive.
Finally, the door creaked open. Not the chunin from before, but a different individual, older, with the stern, weary look of someone who dealt with endless bureaucracy, presumably the Hokage’s secretary or an aide. Her gaze swept over us. "The Hokage will see you now."
Anko practically jumped to her feet. I rose more slowly, taking a steadying breath. We followed the aide into the Hokage’s office.
The room was large and circular, dominated by a massive wooden desk piled high with scrolls and documents. Behind it, large windows offered a panoramic view of Konoha, the village sprawling beneath the Hokage monument. The air smelled of aged wood, ink, and faintly of pipe tobacco. Bookshelves filled with various tomes lined one curved wall. It was a room that radiated history and authority.
Hiruzen Sarutobi sat behind the desk, his expression serious but not overtly stern. He wore the official Hokage robes and hat, the symbols of his office. He gestured towards two simple chairs placed before his desk. "Please, sit."
Anko almost skipped to her chair. I sat more deliberately, my senses on high alert, trying to read the atmosphere, to glean some clue from the Hokage’s demeanor.
He watched us for a moment, his gaze thoughtful, perhaps a little tired. Then, he folded his hands on the desk. "Yuuki Kagurazaka, Anko Mitarashi," he began, his voice calm but carrying an undeniable weight. "I have summoned you here today because your instructors, particularly Midori Hana, have brought your exceptional progress and notable potential to my attention."
Anko visibly preened at the word "exceptional." I kept my expression carefully neutral, though my heart rate quickened.
"The village," Hiruzen continued, his eyes shifting between us, "is currently facing significant challenges. As you are no doubt aware, we are officially at war. In times like these, Konoha must utilize all of its available strengths, and that includes identifying and nurturing promising young shinobi who can contribute to our efforts sooner rather than later." He paused, letting the gravity of his words sink in.
"Therefore," he stated, his gaze firming, "after careful consideration of your skills, your dedication, and the current needs of the village, I have decided to grant you both early graduation from the Academy." He offered a small, almost imperceptible smile. "Congratulations. As of this moment, you are Genin of Konohagagure."
Anko gasped, her eyes going wide with a mixture of disbelief and unrestrained joy. "Genin? Already? YES!" She clenched her fists, practically bouncing in her seat. "I knew it! I told you, Kagurazaka!"
My own reaction was more internal, a complicated wave of emotions washing over me. Surprise, definitely. Early graduation hadn't been on my immediate radar. A year ago, this news would have filled me with pure dread. Now? Now I was stronger, vastly so. My physical capabilities, even without factoring in Attribute Distribution, were likely beyond most war-time chunin. I’d honed my basic Academy skills, practiced chakra control relentlessly, even could my own in kenjutsu. And I knew, with a grim certainty, that people far weaker and less prepared than I was currently were already serving, fighting, dying.
So, the dread wasn't as acute. There was nervousness, certainly – the sudden shift from the structured environment of the Academy to the unknown dangers of active duty was daunting. But there was also a grudging acceptance, a sense that this was an inevitable step, just happening sooner than anticipated. I could do this. I had to do this. I simply hadn't expected it now.
I managed a respectful nod. "Thank you, Lord Hokage. We are honored."
Hiruzen acknowledged my thanks with a slight inclination of his head. "Your dedication has earned it." He then turned his attention back to the matter at hand.
After a moment, allowing us to process the news, I spoke up, voicing the practical question that had immediately formed in my mind. "Lord Hokage, thank you again. But… a genin team typically consists of three members, does it not?"
A flicker of something – amusement? satisfaction? – passed through Hiruzen’s eyes. "Indeed it does, Yuuki. Astute. Your third teammate has already been selected and is awaiting his introduction." He turned slightly towards a smaller, less conspicuous door at the side of the office. "You may enter, Asuma."
The door opened, and Asuma Sarutobi stepped into the room. He was taller than us, already carrying himself with the confidence – or perhaps arrogance – of someone who knew their worth. He wore a standard, new-looking Konoha hitai-ate tied around his arm, and his movements were casual, almost swaggering. He looked a bit older than us, maybe a year, which would still mark him as another early, though less dramatically so, graduate.
"Asuma," Hiruzen said, his voice taking on not changing in the slightest even when addressing his son, "these are your new teammates, Yuuki Kagurazaka and Anko Mitarashi. Yuuki, Anko, this is my son, Asuma Sarutobi."
Asuma sauntered over, stopping a few feet from us. He looked us up and down, a slightly dismissive smirk playing on his lips. His gaze lingered on me for a moment, then Anko. "So these are the fresh-faced prodigies, huh?" he drawled, his voice laced with a casual condescension. "Hope you two can keep up. Wouldn't want to be carrying dead weight on my first team."
Anko, never one to back down from a perceived slight, bristled immediately. Her earlier elation was replaced by indignant fury. "Oh, we'll keep up, pretty boy," she retorted, stepping forward slightly, her hands clenching into fists. "The real question is, can you handle us? Or are you just coasting on your daddy's name?"
Asuma’s smirk widened, clearly unbothered, perhaps even enjoying the reaction. "Feisty. Good. Might make things interesting."
"That's enough," Hiruzen interjected, his voice calm but firm, instantly cutting through the budding confrontation. Anko reluctantly stepped back, still glaring at Asuma, who just looked amused. "You will all have plenty of time to get acquainted, and to learn to work together. That is the purpose of a team, and the responsibility of your Jonin leader." He paused, a significant weight in his voice. "And for your Jonin sensei… I have chosen someone with exceptional skill and insight." He looked towards the main office door. "Orochimaru, if you would."
The main office door, the one we had entered through, slid open silently.
And Orochimaru stepped in.
My blood ran cold. Not a figurative chill, but a genuine, physical drop in temperature that seemed to start in my gut and spread outwards, making the hairs on my arms stand on end. All the carefully constructed composure, the quick acceptance of early graduation, even the slight annoyance at Asuma’s posturing – it all evaporated, replaced by a raw, primal dread that clawed at my insides.
He moved with a quiet, almost liquid grace, his pale skin a stark contrast to his dark, waist-length hair. His golden eyes, slitted like a serpent's, swept over us – Asuma, Anko, then me. There was no overt malice in his gaze, no discernible threat, just a calm, unnervingly intelligent assessment. He wore the standard jonin flak jacket over dark attire, and a polite, almost gentle smile touched his lips, a smile that didn't quite reach those unsettling eyes.
OH. OH GOD NO. FUCK. ME. My mind screamed, a frantic, internal litany of denial and horror. This wasn't just being found out about Attribute Distribution. This wasn't just an inconvenient early graduation. This was Orochimaru. The future S-rank missing-nin, the mad scientist who experimented on children, the one who would eventually brand Anko with her Cursed Seal, who would betray the village, who would murder his own sensei – the very man standing before us now. My carefully constructed plans, my hopes for a relatively controlled progression, shattered into a million pieces. This was a catastrophic derailment.
"Team," Hiruzen said, his voice cutting through my internal panic, though it sounded distant, muffled. "This is your Jonin leader, one of Konoha's Sannin, Orochimaru."
Orochimaru offered a slight, almost imperceptible bow, his gaze lingering on me for a fraction of a second longer than the others before moving on. "A pleasure to meet you all," he said, his voice smooth, cultured, with a faint, sibilant undertone. "Asuma-kun. Anko-chan. Yuuki-kun. I look forward to guiding your development." The diminutive "chan" for Anko and "kun" for me felt disturbing, almost patronizing, yet delivered with perfect courtesy.
Anko, completely oblivious to my internal meltdown, was practically vibrating with excitement. Her eyes were shining with pure hero-worship. "Orochimaru-san!" she breathed, her voice filled with awe. "It's… it's an honor to be on your team!"
Asuma, despite his earlier cockiness, also looked suitably impressed and respectful, offering a deeper nod than he had to his father. Being assigned to a Sannin, even his father's former student, was clearly a significant posting.
I, on the other hand, was struggling to maintain any semblance of composure. I forced my facial muscles into what I hoped resembled a polite, if somewhat strained, smile. It probably looked more like I was suffering from severe constipation. I managed a stiff, jerky nod, unable to form words, my throat suddenly tight. The polite facade Orochimaru presented did nothing to alleviate the terror churning within me. This was a predator in sensei's clothing.
Hiruzen surveyed the newly formed team. "Asuma, Anko, you are dismissed for now. Orochimaru, you can arrange your first official team meeting later today or tomorrow. Yuuki," he said, his gaze returning to me, "please remain for a moment longer. Orochimaru, I believe you should hear this as well; it pertains directly to Yuuki's unique development."
Anko looked momentarily disappointed at being dismissed but brightened at the prospect of a team meeting with Orochimaru. She shot me a curious, slightly envious glance before bounding out after Asuma, who merely grunted an acknowledgment. The door closed, leaving me alone in the vast office with the Hokage and… Orochimaru.
The Sannin hadn't moved, standing silently a little to the side of Hiruzen's desk, his serpentine eyes fixed on me with an unblinking, unnerving intensity. The polite smile remained, but now it felt like the curious regard of a scientist observing a particularly interesting specimen pinned to a board. My dread intensified, coiling like a cold snake in my stomach. This was it.
Hiruzen’s demeanor softened, the stern village leader giving way to the more grandfatherly figure he sometimes projected, though the presence of Orochimaru lent a sharp, inescapable edge to the atmosphere. "Yuuki," he began, his voice gentle but firm, "your Academy instructor, Midori Hana, brought some... unusual observations regarding your development to my attention nearly a year ago now." He didn't beat around the bush. "We have been aware for some time that you possess a unique physical trait, an ability to subtly, and sometimes not so subtly, alter your physical attributes."
A resigned sigh escaped me. It was a quiet sound, but it felt like the deflation of a year's worth of carefully maintained secrecy. I slumped slightly in my chair. A year? They've known for a year? The constant vigilance, the mental effort of holding back, of trying to appear normal while pushing my limits in secret… it suddenly felt utterly exhausting, and perhaps, utterly pointless.
"I imagine," Hiruzen continued, his tone understanding, "you may have had your reasons for not disclosing this. Perhaps fear of how others might react, or a natural caution regarding something so unique. That is understandable, especially for one so young."
He gestured for me to speak. "Yuuki, can you tell us about this ability, in your own words? What do you understand of it? How do you control it?"
My throat was dry. I had to speak. I had to explain, but choose my words very, very carefully. Orochimaru's gaze felt like a physical weight. I wouldn’t mention the System, that would be horrendously stupid. I had to frame it as an innate talent, something I’d discovered and was learning to manage.
"I… I first noticed it a little over a year ago, Lord Hokage," I began, my voice a little hoarse. "It's like… I can shift my body's… focus. I think of it as having 'points' for different things – how strong I am, how fast or agile, and how much stamina or… toughness I have." I deliberately kept the terminology simple, avoiding 'attributes' or 'stats' as video games didn’t exist here.
"I can… mentally move these points around. If I need to be faster, I can take some from my strength, and I become quicker, lighter. If I need to hit harder, I can do the opposite. My body… changes, a little. Sometimes I feel a bit leaner, sometimes a bit denser or more muscular, depending on what I do." I glanced quickly at Orochimaru, whose polite smile seemed to widen almost imperceptibly, his eyes gleaming with focused interest.
"And how do you control this… shift, Yuuki-kun?" Orochimaru interjected, his voice a soft hiss. "Is it a conscious visualization? A mantra? Or something more instinctive?"
His question was precise, clinical. "Both, Orochimaru-sama," I said, forcing myself to meet his gaze briefly. "At first, I had to really concentrate, picture it happening. Now… I have a few… mental triggers, names for certain states – like 'Swift' for speed, 'Might' for strength, 'Guard' for defense – that let me change faster. But I can still do it just by thinking, though it's a bit slower and less precise that way."
"Fascinating," Orochimaru murmured, almost to himself. "And are there limitations? Aspects of yourself you cannot influence?"
"Yes," I admitted. "I can't seem to change my chakra levels with it, or my thinking speed, or… my speed of learning, or anything like that. It only seems to work on my physical body. And there's always a trade-off. If I make one area stronger, another has to become weaker. I can't just… make everything better at once." I had to emphasize the balance, the cost, to make it sound less like an all-powerful cheat.
Hiruzen nodded slowly, absorbing my explanation. "And this process, Yuuki-kun," Orochimaru's voice cut in again, his head tilted slightly, "does it have any… noticeable metabolic effects? Increased hunger? Altered perception of time during these shifts? Is there a refractory period after a significant redistribution, a time when you cannot shift again as easily?"
His questions were insightful, probing the very mechanics I myself was still exploring. When he added to Agility, his perception of time altered to be slower, however he did not tire out from redistribution, but it was for best that he downplays his ability. "I… I get tired if I shift a lot, or hold a changed state for a long time," I conceded. "And yes, I get hungrier than usual after using it heavily." I omitted the specifics, the actual feeling of the System working.
"A most intriguing… adaptation," Orochimaru said, a low, almost delighted chuckle, kukuku, escaping him. It sent a fresh shiver down my spine. "The body's capacity for change is truly remarkable. We shall have much to explore together, Yuuki-kun. Understanding its full parameters, its biological costs, its potential applications under stress… kukuku… it will be an enlightening journey for us both."
Hiruzen stepped back in, his expression serious but still carrying that undercurrent of reassurance. "Yuuki, the village has many shinobi with unique abilities, some passed down through bloodlines, others manifesting uniquely. Yours is… exceptionally potent and remarkably adaptable. It is not something to be feared, but something to be understood and controlled." He gestured towards Orochimaru. "Orochimaru, as your Jonin sensei, possesses a singular intellect regarding the body's potential and the nuances of chakra. He is perhaps the only one in the village who can truly help you understand this… faculty of yours. To refine it, to control it, to ensure it doesn't cause you undue harm or become a liability to yourself or others. This isn't about restriction, but about fostering your full potential for the good of the village, and for your own safety in the trials to come."
I just nodded mutely. Fostering. Right. With Orochimaru. My stomach churned.
"Go now, Yuuki," Hiruzen said, his voice gentle again. "Meet with your team. Work hard. Learn from your sensei. And know that Konoha values your strength and trusts in your loyalty."
Trusts in my loyalty. The words echoed as I numbly stood, bowed, and walked out of the Hokage's office, Orochimaru's unreadable gaze following me until the door closed. The new reality was here. And it was far more terrifying than I could have imagined.
Stepping out of the Hokage's office felt like surfacing from a deep, cold dive. My legs felt a little unsteady. Asuma and Anko were waiting a short distance away, Anko practically bouncing on the balls of her feet, Asuma leaning against the wall with an air of impatient boredom.
Orochimaru emerged from the office a moment after me, that unnervingly polite smile still fixed on his face. He gave a slight nod to his other two new students. "Well then, Team Orochimaru," he said, his voice smooth as silk, "shall we find a more… conducive environment for our first official meeting? The roof of this tower often affords a pleasant view, and a measure of privacy." He gestured vaguely down the corridor. "Follow me."
Anko eagerly fell into step beside him, already peppering him with questions. "Orochimaru-sama, what kind of training will we do? Are we going on A-rank missions right away? Will you teach us some really powerful jutsu?"
Asuma pushed himself off the wall, grunting slightly, and fell in behind them, shooting me a quick, appraising glance that I couldn't quite decipher. I trailed after them, my mind still reeling. Team Orochimaru. It sounded like a cruel joke.
The climb to the roof was via a narrow, winding staircase I hadn't even known existed. It opened onto the flat expanse of the Hokage tower's roof, offering a breathtaking panorama of Konoha spread out below, the Hokage monument looming protectively in the distance. The wind was stronger up here, whipping at our clothes.
Orochimaru led us to the edge, near the protective railing. He turned, his serpentine eyes sweeping over us once more. "Introductions are in order, though the Hokage has already facilitated the basics. I am Orochimaru. You," he gestured to Asuma, "are Asuma Sarutobi, son of the Hokage, with a lineage of strong fire affinities, I presume, and a noted aptitude for taijutsu."
Asuma straightened slightly, a hint of pride in his expression. "That's right."
Orochimaru then turned to Anko. "Anko Mitarashi. You’ve so far shown a remarkable ability to adapt to situations and a talent for Ninjutsu."
Anko beamed. "You bet! I'm gonna be the strongest!"
Finally, his gaze settled on me, and it felt as though a magnifying glass was being held over my very soul. "And Yuuki Kagurazaka. An orphan, no known lineage, yet possessing remarkable physical development and… a most intriguing personal aptitude." The way he said "aptitude" sent a fresh chill down my spine. He was clearly fascinated by the “personal aptitude”. "Your performance in Taijutsu is better than most, despite your talent with Ninjutsu being average."
"Now," Orochimaru continued, his voice taking on a more instructional tone, "a genin team is more than just three individuals. It is a unit. You will live together, train together, fight together, and potentially die together. Your successes and failures will be intertwined. Understanding each other's strengths, weaknesses, and motivations is paramount."
He paused, letting that sink in. "Tomorrow morning, at precisely 0700 hours, we will meet at Training Ground Three. Do not eat breakfast. And bring your standard gear. We will begin with a… survival exercise. To gauge your current capabilities as individuals, and your potential to function as a team." His smile widened slightly, and it held a hint of something predatory. "It will be… illuminating."
A survival exercise. With Orochimaru. My stomach did a flip. This wasn't going to be like the Academy's gentle introductions to fieldcraft.
"Any questions?" Orochimaru asked, his gaze sweeping over us.
Anko looked like she had a million but was too excited to voice any specific one. Asuma just shook his head, looking stoic. I remained silent, trying to process the sheer unreality of the situation.
"Excellent," Orochimaru purred. "Until tomorrow then." He gave a slight nod, then turned and, with a flicker of movement too fast to properly follow, was simply gone from the rooftop. Vanished.
The three of us were left standing there, the wind whipping around us. Anko let out an excited whoop. "This is gonna be awesome! Training under Orochimaru-san! We're gonna be legends!"
Asuma grunted. "He's intense. This won't be like the Academy, that's for sure." He looked at me, then Anko. "Just try not to get in my way." With that, he turned and headed for the stairs.
Anko stuck her tongue out at his retreating back before turning to me, her earlier awe replaced by a competitive fire. "Well, Kagurazaka! Looks like we're teammates! Don't think this means I'm going easy on you. I'm still gonna surpass you!"
"Wouldn't expect anything less, Mitarashi," I managed, my voice sounding hollow even to my own ears.
She gave a sharp nod, then, with another burst of energy, followed Asuma towards the stairs, already planning, no doubt, how she would impress Orochimaru tomorrow.
I remained on the rooftop for a few moments longer, alone, the wind tugging at my clothes. A genin. Team Orochimaru. Aware of my ability. The village knew. My carefully constructed world of controlled progress and hidden strength had been upended in a single morning. The path ahead was no longer clear, no longer under my sole direction. It was now intertwined with a snake, a future Hokage's son, and a girl destined for a cursed mark.
A deep, weary sigh escaped me. This new reality… I had to make it work. There was no other choice. I looked out over Konoha, the village seeming both familiar and suddenly alien. My journey had just taken a very sharp, very dangerous turn.
Comments
Middlemoe2
Ya even if we're currently at Good Guy Snake-Sensei right now, needing to be biologically studied by someone that we know goes over the edge to mad science in a few years would still scare the shit out of anyone. Looking forward to see how Yuuki survived this, but ya with all this I'd be totally dead inside for a while in shock or just trying to get into a flow or something ya know? Ugh definitely would have gone rogue cause fuck Hiruzen in so many ways haha! Anyway let's see where it goes!
MrMarauder
Well...he can always kill himself as a last resort. No way would you let yourself becomes one of his experiments
