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Chapter 118 - Ghar's Blood

🕑 Added 2023-07-12 15:55:05 +0000 UTC
Chapter 118 - Ghar's Blood

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TMarkos

I have plenty of examples from life to draw upon! Unfortunately humanity has done quite a lot to answer the question of how horrible we can be to each other; the answer to most of the questions I'm asking is just an elaboration on existing themes.

Alexandria Clarke

Every week I wonder how you're going to wow and shock me with the horrors of a superpowered war, and you never disappoint.

TMarkos

Marcus as a character is synonymous with the city of Gharon, and with Ghar in general; I thought about giving him a role to explain some of what's going on, but it didn't feel right having his role persist past the gutting of his city. He's been murdered, Gharon has been murdered, and it's down to those who are left to figure out how and why. The chapter's swerve into darkness kinda surprised me too, to be honest. I had originally planned on it being less horror and more mystery, but as I got into the necessary facets of it I realized that it was decidedly horror. It's not something I write a lot of! The uncertain tone had me hung up in parts and it wasn't until I relaxed and let myself start being creepy that I was able to finish the chapter.

Blorcyn

This feels like a horror film, and the amount of ice and snow, the freezing nature of it. It’s like a hard swerve into urban / survival horror. I like that Serah’s voice made Michael jump. I really liked the way you had us notice the lack of the comic interjection. I don’t like what happened to Marcus, I particularly don’t understand it. What made these people huddle up to die in the cold? The sheer coldness of it makes me think Luc is here doing strange things with the non light part of stellar. Or that, like Sever and his Swordsmen, the Son faction has a group of lucigentes. But I can’t reconcile it with the unexpected absence of everyone and the sheer neglect, even on those they chained up. Why? Marcus captured it best. These are not men, and you made this feel like supernatural horror in this chapter, for sure.


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