Matthew Schocke
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Rhiyen's Deal - Part V
🕑 Added 2015-07-31 18:23:30 +0000 UTC So... now Karen gets a better idea of how broken our protagonist is.You will, most likely, feel an urge to strangle one of the characters at some point. I can understand that, and felt the same way writing this. However, perfect people make for boring characters... and tend to drain any real conflict from the story as well. So, please have some patience... and if you can, remember how you were at that age, and recall any number of similarly boneheaded maneuvers you may or may not have participated in.
(And yes, the name "Tasty China" was totally stolen from one of my wife and I's favorite places when we lived in Atlanta. Hilarious name, great food.)
