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The Deal, Part 1

🕑 Added 2015-04-01 03:54:16 +0000 UTC

Comments

Grant Smittle

I really enjoyed it, I didn't really have a problem with Rhiyen's personality, although it would get irritating if he's like that the entire book. My only issue was the scene with Tony from the previous year, I think it could use a better introduction because I had to read it a couple times before I realized it was in the past.

Matthew Schocke

Yeah, he's not too likeable at the moment. There are reasons, but still...

Brian Scott

Writing style is excellent, the snark is fun, but god I hate Rhiyen as a character. I continue reading this because my hope is that he gets his smug self-satisfied world turned entirely on it's head and he has to learn that you can't get through life being a surly dick to everyone.