Chapter 53 of A Lament of Snow and Magic
🕑 Added 2024-12-21 23:39:34 +0000 UTCMore fluff and school/time shenanigans. Next chapter will be back to politics and stuff.
Do drop me some comments though guys. The feedback from you is what drives me on, gives me inspiration, and also helps me be a better writer. You may think I'm just being melodramatic, but that really is the truth.
Comments
Jackson William Hamilton
Fair enough You’re not wrong Percy is an absolute unit and it’s nice to have someone write him like it without making him too OP
Bub3loka
Glad you like the interactions. Tracey did not get enough love in the story, at least from me as a writer, so this was my chance to explore her character more. As for Percy merging with Jon, I try not to rehash similar stories. I'm already writing a Percy Jackson story in Westeros and half the time I'm doing my best not to have Percy curbstomp everyone in his path. The thing is, Percy is Westeros is just too unfair and unbalanced. Perhaps if it was during Jaehaery's era or the Dance era, it would make things more interesting but these are thoughts for a time far away
Jackson William Hamilton
I absolutely LOVE the interactions between Harry and Tracey. I think it’d be great if she did end up with Harry and Susan. I loved the glove with the note callback. It’s such a dumbledore move. Have you thought about doing a story in the future in the ASOIAF universe where Jon is Percy Jackson similar to Harry being Jon from this story? I think it’d be an interesting take.
Noctus Tagaris
The break from the serious stuff was appreciated. Excited to see what happens with Narcissa. I happened to notice that she's single now. Though, to be fair, that's the QQ part of me lol
TypistTyphon
Thanks, hope Harry saves narcissa