Bub3loka
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Chapter 21 of The Arc Moon System
🕑 Added 2024-03-05 15:37:13 +0000 UTC
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Bub3loka
Yeah, I am firmly on the camp that every character deserves to be treated as one rather than just a name to be thrown away
KillzoneDude
The detail you put into this is amazing, not only for the main cast but for the “secondary” characters as well!
Bub3loka
Great! Go ahead and drop your comments on the Patreon chapter. You can do it on the Google docs itself. Just select the sentence you want to edit and it will leave me a suggestion. Or you can leave a comment on them
Melikereading
If you need a second pair of eyes, I’m willing to try!
LoneStar
Great chapter. I’ve enjoy the arc as a buildup for Jaune & the world. Looking forward to the introduction of Beacon.
