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Chapter 3 - deleted Patchilles scene (TSOA)
🕑 Added 2022-05-19 16:32:11 +0000 UTCChapter three has a couple flashbacks, including this younger Patchilles moment (drawn in orange) where I was fiddling a bit with The Song Of Achilles stuff. Alas, i think it's cutting room floor for young pat and achilles talking π The chapter feels stronger when the flashbacks are silent and less distracting
This dialogue+sketches are emotional placeholders, but it's good enough to get the gist. This was a fun little idea and I might try one more time to save it, but π π₯ RIP!!!!!!!!!
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BumblyButts
even if u can't it's a really sweet section that can stand pretty well on its own. it would be v nice to maybe release publically after all of ease off is out?? or include in the backstage notes or something.. it's just so lovely, it deserves to be seen π€π€
Thank you Sam!! πππ Hopefully thereβs a happy medium that can be found but just in case π
Thank u bumb ππ Iβm hoping Iβm wrong and can find a way to put it back in!!! Itβs still not done yet π§
oh ππ₯
SamCyberCat
Bawww TSOA babies!! Thank you for sharing these scenes! I know it can be hard to cut content, but if it results in a stronger story then it's a powerful call to make and plus, we get to appreciate these two here :3
BumblyButts
OH NOOO I love this scene so much and I remember all the way the heck back when u trying to figure out how to draw them young-looking!!! it's such a good scene for character developement and it just FEELS good and looks so good so I'm bummed to see it being cut, but if the chapter is stronger without it then that's just how the zagchilles cookie crumbles π.. I could totally see how this diversion could detract from the Point.. gosh u are full of so much Wisdom
Maads
πππππ oH!
Thank you for perceiving!!! ππ Itβs nice to be able to share the outtakes/what could have beens, so removing them is doubly rewarding!!
a Humble Shade
Lovely, thanks for posting it here π₯°
