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πEASE OFF - CHAPTER 2, Part 2 π - Pages 1-12/35 ($3)
🕑 Added 2022-03-30 16:59:35 +0000 UTCChapter 2 looks like this (π€‘):
- Chapter 2, Part 1: 8 pages
- Chapter 2, Part 2: 35 pages <--We are here!! Pages 1-12/35
- Chapter 2, Part 3: 23 pages
Because I won't be able to finish the full chapter for a couple weeks, Chapter 2, Part 2, Page 12 is a good scene change to share! I'm redoing the thumbs for the rest of the book (Chapters 4-6) while I have a (sort of) lull in work and have the brain energy to spare. π
Next stop: Achilles' room!!!! π
I'll update this post with the full PDF once the remaining half is done!! Public release TBD, maybe end of April?
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Thank you, Iβm glad!! π I imagine itβs hard being best friends and also being in love / being inexorably drawn π theyβll resolve it sometimeβ¦ but not this chapter π π
That was so fun to read! They were awkward but then they seemed to relax and then suddenly the whole conversation slipped back into a mess. Than has the perfect advantage for leaving a conversation unfinished D: Nice little emotional rollercoaster that leaves me with anticipation.
Thank you!! Iβm glad to hear that ππ I trying to avoid a pitfall where theyβre exaggeratedly & repeatedly awkward or upset without taking their entire history into consideration π₯Ί
You capture the dynamic of Than and Zag being so awkward at one another so well without making either of them seem bumbling.
Alu π Your comments are always so attentive. I'm so glad you noticed that panel, since that was one I added last minute and waffled about keeping before deciding to keep it π They're all just talking so hopefully it can be interesting visually too
I love them all so much. Seeing Than and Zag playing around like this, only to have that misunderstanding destroying the mood, AAAAAH ππ Also i love the tension on Achilles at the simple mention of Patroclus; or just the panel focus on the codex Zagreus is holding: it's "just a panel" but to me this means a lot, if we consider this focus is from Achilles's eyes!
