CH 1 - Full Page WIPS (NSFW) - Inks ($3+)

Hi!!!!!! Thank you so much!! 🥺🥺we’re practically done with ch 1 but not quite enough to spread it around completely so yes your timing was very very good 😅💜💜

Tomodachibirb

aaaaaaah these are so good? I adore the way you draw Achilles, he's so pretty 😳 also the dialogue! The angst!! It's all amazing!!! Chose a great time to join the patreon XD

Ahhh thank you for coming aboard!!! 🥺You picked a good time now that things are getting started (and hopefully getting finished here and there 😤)

MrOnirio

Omg this looks so nice! I'm so glad I came onboard! <3 looking forward to seeing it evolve 😍

WAH TY JAMIE!! I'm glad that's clear, wasn't really sure how i was gonna go about it... and full disclosure i completely forgot the amount of clothing he had on him for those top panels (EDIT: because i was a little distracted by evertyhing else*)and already had spent time drawing the anatomy so he just suddenly gets a little more buck naked. tysm for ur comments they fuel me

McJamie

Nice lil spit on that mouth mmhmmm. Also omg i didnt say this last comment but i love the way you like... integrated the thoughts in the faded grey??? Like that's a really effective way to show what's happening?? And damn zag gettin wholeass naked for this he's down bad. I love the tense muscles panel -> the flop afterwards gg keep it up

Ahhhhhh thank you Alu 🥺🥺🥺I’m so glad it’s getting through cos the thesis of this one is just Yearning I’m realizing 🙏💦🥺💜💜

The amount of YEARNING IN THIS UPDATE MAG I SWEAR— I just love the framing here, and Zag's conflicted expression, it just tells the story without dialogues. Also also also, his hair slightly curling up as he gets sweaty, i love this 💕💕💕always so many details in your work, I love it!

Tysm cryo!! Love that this project just lets me experiment and I’m glad it seems to be working 🥺🙏💜

Cryo

Oh wow the EXPRESSIONS - also the way you do perspective is so incredible. Your framing and the way you mix up angles for visual interest really makes me feel like I'm reading a published comic as opposed to wip!

NUCLEO ur gonna make me cry, ur comments make me feel seen and patted on the head, ty for just interacting so much and enthusiastically it rly makes me day, ur also doing gods work by being so NICE!!!!!! Abs SUPPORTIVE!!!

nucleoplasmic

FUCK ME SIDEWAYS AHSJJSJSHE ZAG BEING HORNY FOR HANDS? i have never related to anything more in my life. than's hands on his scythe and zag's on his cock BLESS YOUR HUGE BRAIN ALSO WOW YOUR INKS LOOK SO GOOD AND YOU'RE SO FAST???? JEGUS. would comment more about all ur gorgeous backgrounds and gesture too but im just gonna sound like a broken record at this point lololol. ur doing the gods work magreus, thank u 🙏🙏

i have to brace myself with every new panel jamie omg

stuff is being done now nalskdfjlsd

McJamie

Those inked pages are ficking sppppicccyyyy yeouch

aw shit son

YOUR COMMENTS ARE BIG SUNRAYS FOR ME!! 💜💜 thank you so much alu 🥺🥺 I slaved two days over that Than page in the end 😅

you’re completely right and I didn’t think of that at all until you mentioned it (consciously, anyway)!! Now that you’ve put it in to words I’ll be thinking about this for sure. The whole story touches upon this, yet I didn’t realize it, even when the whole point is because easing off would completely go against Zagreus’ nature😅😅 YOUR COMMENTS GIVE ME LIFE!!! 🥺🥺 i am so glad you are here, having companions while drawing makes it so much more fun 💜💜💜💜💜💜

Your updates are a little sunray for me 💕 and OMG Mag. Those. BACKGROUNDS. The perspective you give to the immensity of the Underworld places is always candy for the eyes! Also this shot of Than seen from behind, lovely 💕

sleepwellplease

Zagreus seems so sad and tense on all these panels 🥺 The "ease off" option is so much against his nature 😅 And Achilles is like the personification of bad decisions. Gathering them in one room raises the angst level in the room! Mag 🥰 your updates give me life and help me survive the end of this year. 😰 Being on your patreon feels like robbing you every time you upload something. Much love ❤❤❤🥺🥺🥺