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🕑 Added 2023-01-01 03:33:23 +0000 UTC

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Josh Stack

I can’t believe I haven’t mentioned this before but you do a good job of replicating the, for lack of a better word, feel of real life commercials. The artificial sweetness of it all makes for a nice combination with the cute ABDL stuff. You’ve also created a very intriguing mystery with the sponsors. Is this all some sick joke to them, a way of seeing the entirety of humanity reduced to docile subjects of mockery? Or is there something more? Perhaps some kind of entity of lust, an attempt by someone to bring their most perverted fantasies to life gone horribly wrong. Or perhaps horribly right. Maybe the villain is just like the various different people reading this story. As for the other characters: I’m a bit conflicted about Kendra. As adorable as it was to see her giving into the pleasure, it actually felt kind of sad to see her initial reaction to her new role in life. Ashley’s mom was even sadder, because she can’t even enjoy her fate. Wholesomeness addict that I am, I'm still holding out hope for a happy ending but you write tragedy so well I think i’ll still enjoy a sad one.

John Doe

Great chapter, I'm really excited for what the last screen will show Tina! Have you considered continuing with the advertisements after you finished the story? They make good short story bits on their own.


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