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The Camera, Part 2

🕑 Added 2022-01-30 00:17:01 +0000 UTC

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Josh Stack

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Josh Stack

Rereading this I have realized something that although it might have been unintentional on your part is pretty cool: Jared and Natalie are completely missing the point. They have the world’s best antidepressant, a cure for every irrational fear, and so many other ways to help people with this device, yet they only see a tool for imposing their will on others. Shows what horrible people they are.

Josh Stack

I agree with Natalie: happy Molly is cute Molly. It just shows how lacking in empathy Jared is that he can’t understand why Natalie would want her (for lack of a better term) soon to be sex toy to be happy, and it’s even worse that he has a program to make people feel bad. Given that Jared seems about ready to start kink shaming Natalie (stupid horny bitch) I have a feeling that he is going to explode at her in Part 3, either when he sees Molly wearing a diaper, or when she starts wetting and/or messing herself. Speaking of Molly it’s interesting how you portrayed her way of thinking: she’s not subservient or obedient, just incapable of seeing any reason not to do what she’s told. This may come back to bite both Jared and Natalie as just because she’s docile that doesn’t mean she lacks initiative and her new personality makes her very unpredictable. Lastly, I know you’ve probably already written the ending but I’m really hoping that neither Natalie nor Jared “win” this. Oh and I promise that this is the last time I am going to talk about this since I’ve brought it up a lot recently: I would really like it if you would like any of my comments you found helpful. I don’t want to seem desperate for attention, it’s just nice to know that you’re actually reading these and I’m not typing them up for no reason.


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