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The Impossibility of Impossibilities, Part 18

🕑 Added 2022-01-21 22:57:29 +0000 UTC

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Josh Stack

I noticed that you took the time to address my question of why Janet still had a diaper fetish after getting free from Will. Thanks for that. It does make perfect sense that the false memories Christine gave Janet would still be affecting. Christine should probably make sure to remove everything Will did to her mind, but I have a feeling she’ll forget. After all, I don’t think you are going to pass up the opportunity to have Christine indulge in some ABDL shenanigans once she gets Will’s powers.

Josh Stack

Ok, this one was really impressive. I’m actually excited about what will happen in the next chapter. After what happened in the last one, I assumed it was gonna be revealed to be a fake out. I had thought that you had written yourself into a corner but now I am pleasantly surprised that you went with it. The best part is there was no retconning: It makes perfect sense that none of Will’s wishes would be undone and the magic baby bottles make for a great Chekhov’s Gun. Once again, you’ve managed to make this a great chapter even if it has very little ABDL content. I still don’t enjoy this series as much as I do Archway or even Diaper Elves but I do find it much more interesting now that it’s not just constant humiliation. Don’t get me wrong, I know that fetish stories will always have plots that are just meant to provide context for the erotic stuff but it’s still nice to see someone like you who puts actual effort into this. You could put out a story with no ABDL content and I would still read it. Back to this story and my predictions/hopes for the next chapter: Christine is probably going to have a hard time resisting the temptation to humiliate all of her former bullies given all the fetishes Will gave her and that they now see her as too cute to disobey. I wouldn’t be opposed to seeing her force them into cutesy personas similar to Princess Boom-Boom from Archway or Alice from Diaper Elves but I have to admit she has reason to do that and every reason to just head straight to Will and finally bring this all to an end. Speaking of which if you think that that would be too easy I suppose it would make sense for Janet to have set traps to keep Will from getting out, although she seems too arrogant for that. Lastly, I’m really hoping that this signals a permanent change in the status quo. It would be very disappointing to just see Will take back control. If it was me I would have it play out like this: Christine finds some way to convince one of her former bullies to tell Will to wish that Christine could speak again. Christine then has Will wish for Janet to become powerless and then for ALL of his power to transfer to Christine including the ability to undue wishes. With Christine now a goddess she gets to work undoing the damage that Will and Janet caused and giving both of them an appropriate (and adorable) punishment, with the story ending there. Of course of you don’t want this story to end just yet I am curious to see where you take it regardless. One last thing: I know I have asked this before but just in case you forgot, I would really appreciate if you would hit the like button on any of my comments that you found helpful. I noticed that you didn’t do that on the last story’s comments and I just wanted to make sure you are actually reading these. Thanks for the great chapter and have a good day.


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