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The Archway, Part 16

🕑 Added 2022-01-09 02:35:57 +0000 UTC

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Josh Stack

In regards to you updating other stories, I have mixed feelings. As I have said before The Archway is my favorite ABDL story. It has everything I like in an ABDL story: a sympathetic likable protagonist, lots of cute, adorable, and wholesome movements, and of course mental changes that leave a person feeling incredibly happy. As a result I am very happy to have gotten so much Archway content recently but I understand that it is good to have a variety of stories going on simultaneously. I’m always happy to see more of the Diaper Elves’ cute shenanigans. I am interested to see the kind of creative stuff that you will do with Game of Fools. I admit I am a bit less enthusiastic about the return of Impossibilities due to it lacking a lot of the stuff I like to see in ABDL stories but I am curious to see what you will do with it. I’ll be a bit brutally honest here and admit that I have not enjoyed Hall of Humiliation at all and would be happy to see it die out the way Marie the Brat did but I understand it’s probably exactly the kind of thing a lot of your other patrons are into and I hope they enjoy it as much I enjoy Archway (or at least as much as I enjoy Diaper Elves). Of course I didn’t enjoy Trickster’s Box but I still found it interesting thanks to your good writing so I am willing to give future Hall of Humiliation chapters a shot. Lastly I’ve noticed that between Crystal Ball and The Appointment you have been uploading a few one-shots recently. If you wish to do that in the future but can’t think of any ideas I am sure that me and your other patrons would be willing to provide with some. Good luck with your next chapter. I hope you enjoy writing it as much as we will enjoy reading it.

Josh Stack

diaper rash? With how little everyone seems to mind the smell (another possible side effect of Miranda’s powers) I have a feeling Duchess Stinky-Pants is going to go a long time without being changed, so let’s hope that the magic takes care of hygiene and sanitation for everyone involved. Lastly, was Miranda’s order for Duchess Stinky-Pants to always be messing herself a mental or physical thing? Does this just mean that she is extremely incontinent (as opposed to everyone else, who probably could make to the bathroom if they wanted to but prefer to use their diapers instead)? Or has her body been altered so she constantly produces waste products even if there is nothing in her digestive system to make waste products out of? Sorry if I’m grossing you out, I have a tendency to overthink things. Basically what I’m saying is will Duchess Stinky-Pants always have a dirty diaper, or will her periods in a clean diaper simply be shorter than everyone else’s. Personally I would prefer the latter, but you do you.

Josh Stack

Well, that every bit as satisfying as I expected it to be. Good job. I see from the parts about Miranda’s powers influencing her and causing her to subconsciously influence everyone else that you took my comments into account and I am grateful my feedback is appreciated. While I would have loved to see Nora get assimilated I understand why you were eager to get the Duchess Cross over with quickly so you could continue the other stories. Regardless her post-assimilation form is very cute. Now we know for certain that however Miranda’s powers work they seem to have no problem with her subverting their influence or else they would never have allowed to alter Nora in such a way. Speaking of Nora’s powers, you pulled off quite the creative twist there. I think making Nora’s “performances” a regular thing would probably be for the best. I’m sure Miranda would not want to make someone do something that their non-brainwashed self wouldn’t have consented to and the fact that would be overjoyed to do it regardless wouldn’t help. For example Sonia kissing Miranda (which was beautiful and wholesome by the way) opens up the potential of a romantic relationship between them in the future (unless I’m reading too much into this in which case ignore this part). I am certain that Miranda would not be comfortable with dating Princess Boom-Boom unless she had the express permission of non-brainwashed Sonia. Even disregarding that it will still be useful to compare and contrast the opinions of people in their brainwashed and non-brainwashed states. Even if Sonia prefers being Princess Boom-Boom it would still be a good idea to snap her out of it sometimes so she can be used as an adviser. Which makes me wonder how Princess Boom-Boom will react to the idea of becoming Sonia again, even temporarily, Something tells me if Princess Boom-Boom had her way, Nora would never use her powers again. It would be interesting to see what Nora’s powers do to former Knaves (I would interested in seeing what Judith’s pre-Archway personality was like). The last topic of discussion is, of course, Cross’s assimilation. As cute as Duchess Stinky-Pants is, I have a few questions? First Miranda explicitly orders her to only speak in the third person and yet in her introduction speech she uses a lot of “I”s. Secondly she is also told to not remember anything but seems to be aware of her former life. Moving on from what might be typos, I hope Miranda has the ability to change the physical and mental attributes she has given someone. Don’t get me wrong, Duchess Stinky-Pants is going to be a lot of fun at first, but her inability to take care of herself is inevitably going to become more of an annoyance than anything. Also do Miranda’s abilities make everyone immune to


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