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[LSB] Chapter 121: Julian's Just A Chill Guy

🕑 Added 2025-04-04 16:26:30 +0000 UTC

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Marshall Hansen

And with that single word, the exterminators all huddled up to push away the media. With Cindy winking at **her**, but then quickly shook her head and looked away in embarrassment when **he** remembered that Julian was blind. -- "her" is vague since the last entity mentioned was "the media." "He" I think it's supposed to be "she." Also, I may be wrong but, "winking" feels off being a present participle and the rest of paragraph using a past participle "huddled, looked, remembered." (English is my only language, and I still hate it. I much prefer math)


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