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Chapter 49: Julian's Perfect 1-Week Plan...?

🕑 Added 2024-11-06 15:32:19 +0000 UTC

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IdolTrust

The switching from different places is a little jarring. Maybe put a line break to note the change. I got confused a couple times.

trustkillerlol

Hello! first time every doing anything with Patreon (made it for this story). If there is a better way to make recommendations, please let me know. For the sentence "And after enduring the pain of increasing his Strength stat, Juliet let out a long and deep breath, laying down on the bed beside the Searadyn’s Veil." I think it should say "And after enduring the pain of increasing his Strength stat, Julian"

Manpapper

Thanks for the chapter

Pekularity

I liked the transition. It was very smooth


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