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The New Era Update (Patrons Only [Mild Spoilers])

🕑 Added 2024-06-07 12:49:49 +0000 UTC

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peter kowalski

I’m not worried about convoluted plot lines as long as I don’t have to suffer through “ his fingers flied over the keyboard of the grim determination”, “ you are standing on the bridge of Indomitable, the biggest secret human supercarrier and he was ready to save the galaxy” and such lol. Very good coherent writing so far. Perhaps some intimate details ( having breakfast, non plot related conversations of the characters etc) would be a nice touch in humanizing the main actors as well as the props. I seen some of it already kudos👍

SlGeneral

Hey thanks for the update.

ItsDirector

Part way through chapter 1 :) Editing TNT and THFD Act 1 is taking up most of my time, though lol

SlGeneral

Just checking sir. How’s the 3rd book coming?

David Liao

I don't mind the power scaling if it introduces new concepts about galactic power or being a next level Kardashev civilization that deepen the stakes.

SlGeneral

First off sir, thank you for all you’ve written so far. You’ve built out a great universe filled with wonderful species. I’ve been vested since the lt rescued uleena and his crew. I always thought this was an AI driven story, sure you got main players but the AI rather it’s usai or ouai is main pro and antagonists. Either way it’s your story and I enjoy it very much. I look forward to the next book.

Vanguard

Good luck with getting everything together. I am sure there are quite a few plates to keep spinning:-)

Noah White

Thanks for the update!


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