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OCTOBER COMMUNITY DEMO FEEDBACK
🕑 Added 2022-10-17 18:54:40 +0000 UTCDEADLINE FOR SUBMISSION IS 10/24/22
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Hello friends! This is the initial post for this month's feedback session video! What I will be doing is a video going through all of your tracks and creating a video leaving verbal commentary, and timestamping it accordingly, much like how I do my workshops and Q&A.
Here's how this works:
1. Provide a link to your demo in the comments. Soundcloud links are acceptable, Google Drive and Dropbox are not. (I understand that this will allow others to publicly see your demo, but I can't have my inbox flooded with demos - hopefully this is not a big deal to you. Others will hear it anyway on the feedback video.)
2. Make sure that Download is enabled on your demo. If I am unable to download it, I cannot review it.
3. Under your link, comment which aspect of the song you'd like me to focus on most. (e.g., mixdown, arrangement, sound design, etc.)
4. I will only be reviewing from the beginning of the song until the conclusion of the first drop. For the sake of time, this is most effective. If your demo spans to a second drop, understand that I will not be able to review it. If your demo is only an intro and a drop, fantastic - this is all I will review anyway. You can then take the notes provided and keep them in mind while formulating the rest of your song.
The review video will be created during the last week of the month, so make sure to get your submissions in earlier rather than later.
Once again, make sure to enable downloads! It is very important for me to be able to visually monitor your track to provide the most accurate and pertinent feedback.
Let's get it!
Comments
Paul Michael
yooooo I aint seen a video yet so Ima drop it here if we still got time. Happy halloween everyone https://www.dropbox.com/s/9npo5g9qgao8jrc/Noah%20and%20Paul-san%20house.wav?dl=0
https://soundcloud.com/mvchaki/useless yoooooo heres my first OG track! looking for feedback on layering/mixdown any other general advice! Thanks dog!
Bloadfailed
hey coach, just some advice? https://soundcloud.com/osh9npnn2syx/gugug/s-RUVmpOWMEWp?si=3f4c557742d14516b719e7f260b0ff70&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Sup coach! Don’t have anything specific in mind cause I cannot come up with much more. Just if there’s anything that really stands out at all! thanks a a lot https://on.soundcloud.com/n8xC7DEJxnz42QcB7
https://soundcloud.com/chvos/chvos-flashbang/s-ng7p8HR634F?si=65f02fae65704e0e81c6114e86bb436d&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing Hey Coach! This is our last track of the EP, we wanna know how is the sidechain on this one and also what would you suggest to add or change as a structure or mixing wise. Really appreciated!!
KILGANON
https://soundcloud.com/ckilganon/day-dream-adventures-1/s-FdEwY1GlbCL?si=0c418fee6acb4f89bfe640bb9ea84a91&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing Hey Crank! If possible, I'd like you to review the second half of the first drop, so starting at 1:14! Just curious if you've got any feedback at all, not looking for anything specific, just whatever stands out! Cheers!
Hey coach, working on this WIP and just looking for feedback on things that can be improved on. Currently, Drop 1A and 1B have the same melody but different sounds, Do you think it's possible to blend these sounds better or does it sound way to different and should be replaced? Also, just an overall opinion of the first drop and what you feel is missing or needed. Thanks for all the videos https://soundcloud.com/zakair/wip-feedback-flame-10/s-Pbi37Bgnpl0?si=049a5fae03de4ea9b59b81863a0792a9&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
What up coach! Just looking for overall feedback on this one, no one element in particular. If there are any things that stand that I could do to improve it I'm all ears. Thanks man! https://soundcloud.com/tokelomusic/on-fire-demo-for-mrcrank/s-kU9OFwW8vUz?si=d93785a8620e43b38c3ed787d606d0ec&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
https://soundcloud.com/enkidomusic/bloodhound/s-k0joz66ZbyM?si=d655bbd7291d4853825691ebe7075c13&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing Hi Crank! Don't actually have any preferences I want you to focus on, so please review the track just overall. Thank you! (and, please, reply me on patreon messages)
https://soundcloud.com/lorenzodpri/vocal-chop-october/s-lgU9XNgPBIG?si=a56e1b5a2ba449e2820b8880e5105435&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing Hi coach, this is last work i want to make you listen. tell me if there some strange things you would change and if mix/master/arrangement works in your opinion. Thanks.
SIEM
hi coach, back with the song from last month. I followed your advice and added rides, changed the chord progressions from 3 to 2 (1 for intro/buildup and 1 for the drop), the kick and growls in the drop so everythings in key. I also got new monitors so there's some changes in the mixdown as well. Curious to know if there's anything else you hear that I don't :) thanks!! https://soundcloud.com/siemdubstep/falling/s-L8yMPrYnX4w?si=c7c630abbddd427986e790e7e981d649&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Hey Christian, Looking for your stamp of approval here. Hows the mix sounding? Looking to send to labels, have any in mind? I value your opinion. Thanks Bro! Link: https://soundcloud.com/djcontinuum/ceasar-augustus-welcome-to-the-empire-unreleased-102422/s-7gO16zATxN2?si=17d318b2f1e243a8ad7af9808554e892&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
