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Aquatica Erotica - Rough Cut
🕑 Added 2021-05-01 16:25:55 +0000 UTC
So here is an advance preview of Aquatica Erotica. This is the first 5 minutes (which is about half) of the final thing so you can have a look. There is some porn, but that doesn't really get going in earnest until the second half. Here's the link:
Some notes.
This is a very early cut so there is no sound and almost no editing at this point. It does however contain all shots, even the stupid short ones that are saved in other files for reasons & I have to waste an entire night just rendering 117 frames.
Don't forget that I put this project on pause so I could work on Edge of Tomorrow instead so ALL of this was animated over a year ago (apart for the one close up ball sucking scene) & as such isn't quite as good as I would produce today. I don't think it's bad, it just perhaps not as good as some of my more recent stuff or the second half.
It also contains a LITANY of errors and mistakes that will need to be corrected. Here is a list of what I've noticed/fixed so far:
-No camera movement or aperture on Scout close up shots.
-Ariel's thumbs clip & do other weird stuff in the boob play bit.
-Bad animation on her sticking her arms out the first time, also the same time scout does it too & some weird stuff during the first BJ scene. The oddities in the BJ might not be fixable because I've increased the speed by 15% on that scene to compensate for bad pacing & I think it's just glitchy because of that, might just have to live with that bit.
-Also as a result of the speed increase there is a light that's supposed to be casting reflective light that ripples due to the water but sped up it starts to strobe so I'll have to render that scene again without the light. There are a couple of scenes with this problem.
-The ripple on the fishing lines doesn't follow the line. Ripple effect goes into business for it's self too much & needs to be removed.
-There is an odd glitch where the water ripple jumps a frame. That's because I stopped & restarted the render at that point & it reset the random element for the waves. That'll be fixed when I re-render that scene without the strobe light.
-The thought bubble looks terrible because it has a bunch of edits to make it look nicer & to phase it in an out but I also need to re-render that footage because Namine & Aqua are too far out & need to be brought in tighter and I can't make all the other edits until I'm done with that.
So still some work to do! But as you can see, it's coming together.
Do let me know if you see anything particularly egregious that you think needs fixing. I wont be re-rendering corrections until I've got to the end of the first render anyway, so there is plenty of time to fix things.
That's about all I have to say about this for now, but you'll here from me again very soon as it's the 1st & I have to do the monthly round up too, so I'll see you there!
