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*New Story* Girls & Bridle - Chapter 2 - Pony Time
🕑 Added 2020-09-18 12:12:26 +0000 UTCHappy Friday,
This is the second chapter of Girls & Bridle. :) Curiously, I don't want to say more than this. I hope you'll enjoy the story progression and character building.
Thanks
TS
Note: For some reason, Grammarly is giving me grief and refuses to analyze this specific text. I've been trying since yesterday but I wasn't able to run my last editing pass. I apologize in advance for the remaining typos. :( I don't understand this problem at all.
Comments
In this case, I guess it is very different than other ponygirls stories because I have NO idea what typical ponygirl stories would look like... probably the classic "hot girl is turned into a ponygirl by another hot girl against her will"
Leon
Took a while to savor this story. I am always impressed by how you take a standard story trope (rubber maid, pony girl) and turn it on its heads. Curious and looking forward to where this goes
Glad you liked it. :)
Sjoerd
It's very fun to read. I'm especially curious to see how the Moonlight-Morning Star situation will resolve. Thank you!
It's illegal for me to say this about my own work, but this series is getting better and better over time. I drafted 5 chapters so far and I just really like the way it is evolving. :) Chapter 3 in a few weeks.
I really enjoyed reading that part. Alternating between the 2 teams keeps the story fresh and engaging, especially since they are so different from each other. I totally didn't expect the public 'punishment' in the end, definitely a fun idea though. Can't wait for the next part.
