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Afterword - Winter Maid - Chapter 2
🕑 Added 2020-06-22 20:49:51 +0000 UTCHappy Monday!
This text is the afterword for Winter Maid - Chapter 2. Make sure that you read the story before reading this as it contains lots of spoilers.
Aaah! Where to start with this one. It didn't quite go as planned. Mia had a bit too much fun with her new toy and is already losing control.
Chapter 1 was simple. We learned who Mia and Brian were, and I introduced a cool little device that had a lot of potentials to make things fun.
The first part of chapter 2 was challenging. Explaining a device that doesn't exist in real life in a way that made some sense is not an easy thing. I tried to keep the software as simple as possible and making it as flexible as possible. It could be programmed without any limitations. I also didn't want to go into too many details because I didn't want to paint myself in a corner.
It needed a purpose too. The first idea I got was to make Mia dislike latex. I thought it would be cool to force her to change her mind about something like that. So when she let Brian choose her uniform, she instantly regretted what she had done.
The device to the rescue. It was too easy to use the SusceptGear to manipulate her cute brain. I thought it was not enough to make her like latex while she was a maid, so I got the idea that the device could perform deep conditioning as well. Mia was very excited to learn to love latex to please Brian. By the end of the chapter, she didn't even remember she hated it originally.
It's worth mentioning that I didn't want this story to be non-consensual, and this is why I wanted Mia to be able to control her own brainwashing. It's not that I don't trust Brian, but I don't know enough about that character yet to let him touch my beloved Mia.
Brian... I have no idea what to do with him. Right now, he is just a guy enjoying a convenient situation, a reason for Mia to improve her skills. In the future... who knows... He loves Mia, and he doesn't want to abuse her... perhaps she could eventually turn the programing to him and let him do as he pleases.
The characters are all pretty simple overall.
This story reminds me a little bit of Building Reality in some way. It's very kink oriented, and I could pile up more and more kinks until I end up on a dead-end, with Mia unable to be functional again. But I don't want to do that. I will have to find a way to navigate through the story, not in a continuously-escalating storyline, but more in a direction-changing storyline.
I don't know... maybe one week she can try to be a rubber doll, the other week a pet, the other week a maid, the other week a painslut. Let me know what you think.
I have plenty of ideas in my head for this story; I just don't know how to make them fall into place yet.
As for the kinks I used in this story, it was a lot of fun. When I came up with the ongoing conditioning that Mia didn't suspect to be that strong, I was quite excited. I gave her a couple of good reasons to wear the device more often. Her inability to have an orgasm is, of course, the most powerful one. She thought it was pretty cool, but how long would it last before she loses her mind?
I dunno... I liked the idea of Mia desperate to cum, and the side effect of asking for more and more sex to achieve that goal. Sadly for her, Brian doesn't seem to like having sex while she is hypnotized because she is all confused and a bit dumb. ;) I guess he is attracted to Mia's adorable personality, and not necessarily her maid persona.
I placed some indication in the text that Brian is a bit concerned about his girlfriend; I'm not sure if it was noticeable or not. But he is... making sure she had enough food to last for a week is one of them.
I think I will stop this afterword here before I tap in chapter 3 content. ;)
Thanks, everybody for reading the story. I think this can be a fun/light story to keep alive for a while. :) My only regret in chapter 2 is that I didn't play with her hate of Winter. It kind of defeats the purpose of half of chapter 1. I will have to correct that in the upcoming chapters. :)
TS
Comments
I think we could be friends. Lol ... that's what I like the most. I like when the characters enjoy themselves and there is a touch of humor. And yes, a bit of drama is always welcome.
Sjoerd
I love latex in the snow! Although I always wonder how cold that is for the models.
Sjoerd
My preference is to the fun light hearted stories (some drama is to be expected), so I'm up for alternating kinks :)
MND
Well, she does not like going outside... What if you have a setting that will turn her into a latex version of the Lara Croft, or Selene from Underworld. And she will need to go outside in full latex?
