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What Was Left Behind 007

🕑 Added 2025-11-09 01:07:08 +0000 UTC

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erised fiction

I decided to make the Atlas stuff take a little longer in universe for this story, so Weiss is almost/is 21 and Ruby is 18. Weirdly, they must have changed the ages on the wiki recently and now it claims Weiss, Blake and Yang are 18 currently which doesn't make sense.

Manuel amores morales

I liked the chapter quite a bit, the only thing I have to correct is Weiss's age. She was only 19 in Atlas, and assuming several months have passed, she would only be 20, no more.

Cody

I honestly wouldn't mind that. Jaune is honestly a character whom you can ship with anyone and make it work and technically he would be closer to Willow's age mentally due to being in The Ever After. Besides Willow deserves a man that will cherish and love her and most importantly make her happy

Cody

This story keeps getting better and better. I am hooked honestly. The cute moments between Weiss and Jaune in this chapter were utterly adorable and Willow too was so cute finally being free from Jaques and can do her own things like Bake and such. Excited for the next chapter

BA

Absolutely wonderful chapter and sweet in a lot of ways, I of course loved Weiss's conversation with Jaune and how they reacted to each other. Weiss saying she will just be his friend but then immediately melting for him lol. And I have the same idea about Vacuo as well, Pietro probably already knows because of Winter and Winter definitely will feel like shit as soon as she hears what dropping Jaune effectively did to him.