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What Was Left Behind 004

🕑 Added 2025-10-02 08:26:12 +0000 UTC

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BA

I guess Jaune must be stuck in a permanent "must help" mindset here...makes sense after years of "saving" the paper pleasers. Also that bit about Blake and Sun is interesting, since it's from Blake's end only. Makes me wonder if she still feels something towards him.

DB

I know it's not in the cards for this story, but I love the way you characterize Emerald and Jaune together. And, of course, peak, absolutely love it

Psychsoldier756

Weiss: I hate sand. It’s course and rough and irritating and it gets everywhere

Cody

This was an incredible chapter! Excited for the next one :) See you when you get back.

Jamieoeyes

That was one hell of a fight scene, I absolutely loved it!!! I can easily picture it in my mind playing out much like a proper fight scene in a RWBY episode, though small corrections, the color of Weiss's Aura is Light Blue, not white, and the Grimms blood is black that would have evaporated into smoke shortly afterwards, not red like everyone else's. Other than those nitpicks, this was a good chapter to end on before the break, I'm looking forward to what happens next, especially since Weiss and Ruby will need to address Jaune's behaviour in acting before thinking. He needs to learn that he's no longer in the Ever After alone, though how long it will take to hammer that point home I'm unsure of, but let's hope it's not too long or takes something drastic to happen for Jaune to fully clock in.

ultrafighter3000

Early signs of Jaune needing help, he might not seek death but is perhaps stuck in a mindset of continious struggle. And from the background I'm guessing things between Blake and Sun weren't resolved.